JoJo1602 Posted March 8, 2012 Report Posted March 8, 2012 (edited) I love your story and can't wait for Charlie and Brax to meet again despite him being in another relationship!! Update soon Edited March 8, 2012 by QUIET ACHIEVER SPAG Quote
Jen1205 Posted March 8, 2012 Report Posted March 8, 2012 Amazing update, the flashback was devastating, Poor Charlie and Ruby to lose both parents like that Oooh Brax is getting closer to knowing Charlie is back, I cannot wait for that first conversation between them, even though he has a girlfriend I don't think she will be able to keep Chax apart. Really looking forward to your next update Quote
mizziette Posted March 8, 2012 Report Posted March 8, 2012 Thought it was really beautiful the way Ross said Elise was waiting for him. Heartbreaking chapter. Quote
caroline77 Posted March 8, 2012 Report Posted March 8, 2012 I had to read first then come back and comment. What a heartbreaking start with Elsie and ross dying in such sad circumstances. Brought tears to my eyes. Brax still loves charlie that is obvious. I wonder if he told his girlfriend about Charlie. I hope he did. i am wondering what will happen when they meet up again. looking forward to what happens next. Quote
Inactive User Posted March 9, 2012 Author Report Posted March 9, 2012 Great chapter So sad about Ross and Elise Update soon please xx Quote
Spotd1 Posted March 9, 2012 Report Posted March 9, 2012 That was such a beautifully written chapter, I love that they honoured Ross and Elsie's wishes! Cannot wait for Brax and Charlie to finally bump into one another please update soon! Xx Quote
soph1303 Posted March 9, 2012 Report Posted March 9, 2012 Great update, I said that it sounded like elsie and Ross had died in a previous comment, so I was saddened, but not surprised to learn that they had. However, the way that they died truly shocked me !!! Omg at the ending!!!!!!! Need a chax reunion in the next update, or I think the anticipation might just kill me !!! Update soon please Quote
Sazzle Posted March 10, 2012 Report Posted March 10, 2012 Gorgeous update!! Love this story how its developng. I can see Brax is seeing someone but I'm hoping he can get to meet Charlie soon... Really excited for this story and can't wait for more. Still so much to find out and you write so well Sad about Ross & Elise very emotional there and really nice how the girls brought them back to the bay and have laid them to rest. Can't wait for more - Thanks Quote
Freakie42 Posted March 10, 2012 Report Posted March 10, 2012 Great updates! I love this story!! Quote
JoJo1602 Posted March 10, 2012 Report Posted March 10, 2012 How Ross and Elise died was soo sad, but im glad Ross was able to speak to his girls one last time Brax was so close to seeing charlie, cant wait till they see each other face to face Amazing update! Quote
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