Inactive User Posted May 8, 2012 Author Report Posted May 8, 2012 Great chapter OMG!! Is that Grant following her??? No!!! Please don't let him hurt her again!!! Grrr he's such a evil scumbag. I hated him on the show but I hated him for driving a wedge between Charlie and Ruby on the show when he turned Ruby against Charlie claiming he never hurt her! More soon please xx Quote
soph1303 Posted May 8, 2012 Report Posted May 8, 2012 Great update, First off - mega chax cuteness in that chapter, and they were so close to actually telling each other how they feel as well !!! Omfg I really hate grant - after everything HE did, they're the ones getting in trouble and possibly arrested ??!!! at the ending!!!!!!!!!! That ending seriously reminds me of a storyline I wrote in You Again, and that did not end well, so I am extremely fearful for Charlies sake !!!!!!!! More soon please Quote
Spotd1 Posted May 9, 2012 Report Posted May 9, 2012 AMAZING once again!! I really hope Grant doesn't do anything to Ruby..or Charlie! Please update soon! Xx Quote
Dingo x Posted May 9, 2012 Report Posted May 9, 2012 (edited) Absolutely amazing!!! Your writing is so beautiful. Poor Charlie, hope Brax keeps his promise to her and doesn't do anything stupid, I don't think he will break his promise but with Brax you never know, especially since this is about Charlie. This line was so awww, "Not possible... you will never lose me" Brax's voice was soft and genuine. There was no need for him to keep denying what was right in front of him, ten years or not he still loved her as much as he did before she left and knowing she needed him only made him love her more. That whole Chax talk was so adorable. Grant pressing charges against Heath, Brax & Jack. Grr absolutely hate him! Hope Grant doesn't do anything to Ruby and Casey. Please update again soon, can't wait to see what happens next! x Edited May 9, 2012 by Dingo x Quote
Freakie42 Posted May 10, 2012 Report Posted May 10, 2012 SO good once again! Loved it, update soooon Quote
Dingo x Posted May 11, 2012 Report Posted May 11, 2012 That was amazing!!! As much as I want Brax to kill Grant I really hope he doesn't. Poor Charlie, Grant makes my skin crawl he's so disgusting! Please update again soon, can't wait to see what happens. x Quote
Inactive User Posted May 11, 2012 Author Report Posted May 11, 2012 Great chapter Gosh Grant! He does make my skin crawl too! I hate him! I am with Dingo, I want Brax to kill Grant but hopefully he won't. More soon please xx Quote
Spotd1 Posted May 12, 2012 Report Posted May 12, 2012 AMAZING once again! It did come across how weak Grant was/is..he was packing his dacks! Cannot wait for more, please update soon! Xx Quote
soph1303 Posted May 12, 2012 Report Posted May 12, 2012 WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That was such an intense update!!!!!! Brax was willing to sacrifice his life basically to save Charlie, if that's not a huge indicator of how much he loves her, then I don't know what is!!!! Brax and Charlie were like mega gun in that update !! And now they can get grant on kidnapping, attempted murder, attempted rape of Charlie, and then he actually confessed to raping her all those years ago so they can get him for that too !! Hope Chax get their act together, and act on their feelings soon !!! More soon please Quote
kiwi151 Posted May 12, 2012 Report Posted May 12, 2012 I don't think I have commented too much, but I just want to say i absolutely love this story and your writing. Looking forward for the next updated, especially aftet that cliffhanger Quote
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