Sazzle Posted February 15, 2012 Report Posted February 15, 2012 Love last few updates! Brax and Charlie back on track and together is written so well and loving the conversation and their gentleness again towards eachother. Fabulous family time Love each update! Thanks SO much for sharing and SO grateful that you do it so frequently. Beautiful Hope Ruby isn't too upset when she realises she made the phone call... Looking forward to more Quote
Samantha1 Posted February 15, 2012 Report Posted February 15, 2012 That was such a great chapter, Brax and Charlie make such an adorable little family, the girls were so cute in this too! Quote
LuvH&A Posted February 15, 2012 Report Posted February 15, 2012 Such a great chapter Danni! You portray them as a family so well Can't wait to read more x Quote
RoRo90 Posted February 15, 2012 Report Posted February 15, 2012 great couple of chapters as always love happy Chax so much but I cant shake the feeling you are givnig us so mch happy Chax because something bad is about ot happen, I really hope I'm just being paranoid. so cute Riley loves the water and Paige doesnt can tell whgich one takes after Brax and which one takes after Charlie Ruby is definatly gonna regret that in the morning update soon so eager to just know this babies paternity Quote
llywela Posted February 15, 2012 Report Posted February 15, 2012 Loved the last chapter ;) amaaaaazing! Looking forward for more Quote
Jen1205 Posted February 15, 2012 Report Posted February 15, 2012 Aww I'm really enjoying happy Chax, and its nice to see the twins starting to develop their own personalities. Really nice chapter Danni, Cant wait for more. Quote
pembie Posted February 16, 2012 Report Posted February 16, 2012 No need for you to have been worried about that chapter I thought it was awesome. Was that Matt Xavier caught Ruby with or someone esle? Jabob has a girlfriend that's cute even if he thinks girlfriends are stinky. Charlie and Brax were sweet with their sunset date. I find them much more likeable in this story than I have on the actual show. Quote
beebee Posted February 16, 2012 Report Posted February 16, 2012 (edited) What's not to like ??? There was happy Chax .. that's all that matters LOL Poor Xav goes all that way to find out that Rubes doesn't remember the message & worse still has another bloke in her room .. seriously feel for him Can't wait for more .. I really hope that the whole paternity issues are resolved soon because I would hate for what Chax have at the moment to be ruined .... please update soon xx Edited February 16, 2012 by beebee Quote
Inactive User Posted February 16, 2012 Report Posted February 16, 2012 Awesome chapter. Liked happy Chax at the end And aww poor Xavier! Quote
Spotd1 Posted February 16, 2012 Report Posted February 16, 2012 Brax and Charlie spending time together and enjoying themselves..perfect! I am annoyed at Ruby..she can't keep toying with Xavier's feelings! Loved this chapter Danni, you are an amazing writer, please update soon!! Xx Quote
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