Spotd1 Posted February 25, 2012 Report Posted February 25, 2012 Great chapter Danni! I really thought it was going to be Charlie and Brax getting married! Really looking forward to your next chapter..can't wait to see how Charlie and Brax are going two years down the track!! Please update soon! Xx Quote
beebee Posted February 25, 2012 Report Posted February 25, 2012 great update right up until the end I had no idea who the actual bride was LOL ... clever clever ... at time I was like it's so Charlie then I was like no Ruby no Charlie .. not until the last line haha Can't wait for the ceremony and too see more of how Chax are 2 yrs on Please please update soon x Quote
mizziette Posted February 25, 2012 Report Posted February 25, 2012 I love that Riley's such a little tomboy hating all the girly stuff. Had a feeling it would be Ruby and Xav, guess he must've finally popped the question. Quote
JosieTash Posted February 25, 2012 Report Posted February 25, 2012 Tomboy Riley is soooooooo funny !!!! That was ACE, especially ….. Charlie and Ruby stood in the room staring up at the dress that was hanging on the back of the door. “It’s gorgeous.” Ruby smiled as ran her hand over the wedding dress. It was white and strapless, and sat on her body perfectly. The number of times she wore it just to test it out showed that. Charlie smiled nervously as she too ran her hand over the dress. “It is. It’s just....” Charlie trailed off not finding a word to describe the dress. The bridesmaids dresses that were lying on the bed were a gorgeous greeny-blue, and the flower girl dresses that Paige, Riley and Isabella were going to wear where a simple white dress with a bow tied at the back, the bouquets of lily’s were sitting on the dresser, and there were 3 little baskets with petals inside for the girls to throw down on the aisle in a few hours time. “Mummy I no wear a dress.” Riley shook her head as she climbed up onto the seat and folded her arms, presenting her mother with a big frown. “You’ve got too. You need to look pretty for the wedding.” “I pretty with no dress.” The almost 3-year-old announced. “Aww you are sweetie.” Charlie smiled. “But Mummy thinks you look like a Princess in this dress so would love you to wear it.” “I no want to be a Princess.” Riley shook her head. “Dresses are stupid.” “I like it.” Paige smiled as she twirled around the room. “It’s the prettyfulliest.” “Riley you need to wear it.” Ruby said. “It’s what the flower girls wear.” “I no want to be a flower girl.” Riley shook her head. “I just sit an watch.” “If you don’t wear the dress you don’t get any cake at the reception.” Charlie said, hoping the simple act of bribery would work on her daughter. “Mummy.” Riley gasped. “That not fair.” “Well it’s your choice. No dress, no cake.” Riley sighed as she scratched the side of her head. “I wear it just for a little bit okay?” “Fine by me.” “Pretty.” Isabella smiled as she ran over to the bed and pointed to the greeny-blue bridesmaid dresses. “That’s not yours darling.” Bianca smiled as walked over to the bed and took her daughters hand. “Perché?” Isabella sighed. “Per what?” Ruby said. “Perché.” Bianca laughed. “She means why.” “Oh she’s speaking Italian.” Ruby laughed. “Yeah. Bella, we speak English here.” “Perché?” Isabella asked. “Poiché ho detto così....because I said so.” Bianca said. “Ohh. Okay.” Isabella sighed. “Where mines?” “You dress is over there.” Bianca pointed to the wardrobe where the 3 little dresses were hanging. “I no like it anyways.” Riley said. “Can I ruin mine?” “No.” Charlie shook her head. “Then you wouldn’t get any cake.” “Oh yeah.” Riley said before she sat down on the chair. “We ready yet. It takes forever.” Riley sighed. “I sit with Apil.” Isabella smiled as she ran over to her Auntie. “Aww thank you Bella.” April smiled. Isabella giggled as she wrapped her arms around April’s legs. “My bestest Apil.” “What about Mummy?” Bianca questioned. “You don’t want to sit with Mummy?” “No.” Isabella shook her head. “Just Apil.” “It’s going to be different now isn’t it? After the wedding?” “Yeah, but, not entirely. We’re still going to be the same family that we always have been.” “So nothing will change between us?” Ruby questioned. “Of course not. I’m still going to be your mother and you’ll still be my daughter. Wedding or no wedding.” Charlie said as she wrapped her arm around her daughter. “You got Riley in a dress.” Jacob laughed. “Yeah cos I gets cake.” Riley smiled up at her brother. “Oh wedding cake.” Jacob said. “I bet its real good.” “Ready.” Charlie said and all the women nodded before Leah helped to get them positioned. April and Bianca were going to walk down the aisle first, then Jacob with the rings on top of a satin blue pillow to be passed to the best man, then Leah, followed by Isabella, Paige and Riley who would throw flower petals down on the aisle, before Charlie and Ruby would walk down together. The music started and everyone walked down the aisle, the girls, Isabella and Paige in particular loving their roll, before they were seated at the front, as Leah, Bianca, and April stood in their places at the front, waiting for the bride to arrive. Ruby and Charlie walked down the aisle, their arms linked around each other’s, Charlie the proudest mother in the world at this exact moment, having the privilege to walk down the aisle with her daughter on her wedding day. As Ruby approached the front to see Xavier looking down to her giving her a big smile, all the nerves she had disappeared. She couldn’t wait to be Mrs Xavier Austin. Quote
Inactive User Posted February 25, 2012 Report Posted February 25, 2012 Great chapter. Awww it's Xavier and Ruby getting married And hehe at Riley as a tomboy Update soon please xx Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted February 25, 2012 Report Posted February 25, 2012 I kinda hoped it would be Xavier and Ruby, glad it is.Love Riley being a little tomboy.Wasn't expecting the time skip, interested to see what you do with it. Quote
sazcaz89 Posted February 25, 2012 Report Posted February 25, 2012 I was so confused all the way through that chapter trying to work out whose wedding it was. Amazing writing, loved the chapter!! Update soon please Quote
Sabrina Posted February 25, 2012 Report Posted February 25, 2012 Amazing updates! Chapter 72 - That was nice of Charlie to give Bianca the baby clothes. I wonder what Brax has to tell Charlie? Chapter 73 - I really hope Bella isn't Brax's. Chapter 74 - I hope Bella's ok. Chapter 75 - I'm so happy Bella isn't Brax's. Chapter 76 - I'm glad Charlie and Brax are getting along. Paige and Riley are so cute. Chapter 77 - Aww, Ruby and Xavier are getting married. Looking forward to the next chapter. Quote
RoRo90 Posted February 25, 2012 Report Posted February 25, 2012 great chapter... aww Ruby and Xavier finally getting married like that you jumped two years forward Riley is so cute not wanting to wear a dress... I guess she did really take after Brax cant wait to see where Chax are at now really hope they are in a good place looking forward to the next chapter Quote
pembie Posted February 25, 2012 Report Posted February 25, 2012 Oh man that was agreat chapter I really enjoyed the time jump thing you did. Very clever with the whole mystery wedding thing. I did think Brax and Charlie were getting hitched too. Was very strange reading Jocob all grown up. Nice touch with Bella speaking italian. too. Look forward to more. Quote
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