Inactive User Posted February 28, 2012 Report Posted February 28, 2012 Awesome chapter Awww Bella is such a cutie. Update soon please xx Quote
Spotd1 Posted February 29, 2012 Report Posted February 29, 2012 I am with everyone else..Brax needs to wake up!! I don't see why he still won't propose..Plus if I was Charlie..I would jump at a holiday in Hawaii! Great chapter Danni!! Xx Quote
pembie Posted February 29, 2012 Report Posted February 29, 2012 Ah so Liam isn't Bella dad the mind boggles at who is I'm saying Elijah It's a shame Charlie didn't get the question she wanted but man that holiday sounds SOOOOOOOOOOOOO COOOOOL I want to go. Quote
JosieTash Posted February 29, 2012 Report Posted February 29, 2012 REALLY enjoyed that, especially ….. “I know, but...if anything happened to me....I wouldn’t....I wouldn’t want you to lose him.” “Nothing is going to happen to you.” Brax said. “They won’t take him away, Charlie.” Brax shook his head. “And Ruby is his sister and will be old enough to apply for guardianship if anything like that came up.” Brax smiled as he reached into his pocket, but to Charlie surprise he didn’t pull out an engagement ring box, but instead a crumpled up piece of paper. He opened it up and handed it to Charlie. “I eh....that’s why you wanted to come here?” Charlie questioned. “To talk about a holiday?” “Yeah.” Brax smiled. “What do you think?” “I eh...” Charlie shook her head as she stood up. “I’m getting cold sitting here, can we go home?” “Brax, I’m tired okay. I just want to go to bed to sleep.” Charlie said as she once again shrugged him from her and unhooked her bra and lay it down on the chair with her dress before reaching for her pyjamas and putting them on before walking towards the bathroom to clean her teeth, returning to find Brax still standing in the room, his hands on his hips and he followed Charlie with his eyes as she walked over to the bed and got into it. “What you looking at me like that for?” Charlie asked as she applied her hands with some hand cream. “No reason.” Brax shook his head. “I’m just going to go clean my teeth.” Brax sighed lightly before leaving the room. “Yeah.” Liam grinned. “I’m so glad Ruby ran into me in that little café in the LA side street.” “Mmm I’m glad you’re music career flopped.” Bianca grinned before placing a soft kiss on his lips. “What career?” Liam questioned. “Exactly.” Bianca laughed. “If you went out there and got big then we wouldn’t be together now, would we?” “No, I had a sucky job in some café.” Liam sighed. “Running into Ruby made me see what I’ve been missing back home....I don’t think I ever stopped loving you Bianca.” Bianca smiled lightly. “And meeting little Bella, she’s great Bianca. You’ve got one amazing kid there and I’m honoured that she calls me daddy.” “So you don’t think I’m a skanky slut because I don’t know who her biological dad is?” “Well that’s a different topic.” Liam laughed lightly as Bianca hit his chest. “Go back to saying nice things.” Bianca said as Liam laughed lightly as he sat up in the bed and reached into the drawer thinking now was as good a time as ever. “Bianca...I love you so much. I love the family we have with Bella, and now Ash is going to be a part of that. I want to spend the rest of my life you.” Liam smiled. “Bianca Scott, will you do me he honour of becoming my wife?” Bianca gasped as she looked down at the ring that Liam was displaying to her. “Yes...yes....a thousand times yes.” Bianca squealed as she wrapped her arms around him and kissed his cheek over and over. Liam smiled as he pulled back and placed the ring on her finger. “I love you Bianca Scott soon to be Murphy.” Liam grinned. “I love you Liam Murphy soon to be Scott.” Bianca joked as she once again kissed him. The kiss became more passionate before Liam pushed Bianca down onto the bed. “Ahh mamma mostri mostri.” Bella shouted as she ran into the room. Liam and Bianca both sighed as they sat up in the bed. “Mostri?” Liam questioned. “Monsters.” Bianca sighed as Bella climbed up on the bed. “There’s no monsters.” Bianca shook her head as Bella settled herself in bewteen the couple in the bed. “Si, si.” Bella nodded. “No.” Bianca shook her head. “Not yes.” Bianca said. “There’s not monsters in this house. The sight of daddy has already scared them away.” Bianca laughed. Quote
Sazzle Posted February 29, 2012 Report Posted February 29, 2012 Fabulous update and love how well you show their relationships and interaction. Bless Brax obviously still not confident of marriage... Really felt for Charlie when expected proposal didn't happen and hoping that Brax does change his thoughts at some stage. Jacob and the different names was gorgeous Always love update and eager for next! Thanks Quote
Samantha1 Posted February 29, 2012 Report Posted February 29, 2012 Just caught up on the last few updates! Aww, Ruby married:D Bella speaking Italian all the time is so cute! Poor Charlie thinking the ring was for her, hopefully Brax clocks on about that soon! Quote
RoRo90 Posted February 29, 2012 Report Posted February 29, 2012 Bella is too cute speaking Italian Love how Jacob still wants to be a Buckton poor Charlie , Brax needs to get a move on, what his he actually waiting for a written invitation, I really hope he clocks on soon hope they do go on that holiday, some alone tym for chax would be amazing more please Quote
Inactive User Posted March 1, 2012 Report Posted March 1, 2012 Great chapter Enjoyed it so far. More soon please xx Quote
caroline77 Posted March 1, 2012 Report Posted March 1, 2012 Oh dear Jacob that wasn't very nice. hope he will soon be back to treating Brax like his dad again. wonder if it will spur Brax into proposing to Charlie. Look forward to the next update. Quote
Spotd1 Posted March 1, 2012 Report Posted March 1, 2012 Great chapter! Awww I feel for Charlie..maybe Jacob saying Brax isn't his real dad will make him re-think marrying Charlie? I hope so anyway! Please update soon! Xx Quote
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