Forever Yours (by Danni02) - comments

[beebee]

i'm scared again now!!!

I know drama is good ... but in only small doses

Please just give them some happy times ... maybe at their wedding reception LOL

Great writing as always

Please update soon x

Edited March 2, 2012 by beebee

[mizziette]

Charlie and Brax just have problems snowballing one after the other, don't they? Hopefully things will slow down and get a little more relaxed in that household one of these years!

[RoRo90]

I sense trouble I'm starting to worry again

Brax really needs to get a move on, I totally understand where charlie is coming from

But I really hope Charlie doesn't do anything she regrets with Ryan, he need to go back where he came from like... NOW!

Really Cant wait for the next chapter

[JosieTash]

Get the feeling Charlie’s gonna hope Brax will go all green eyed monster if she …..initiates something with Ryan !!!

LOOVED that, especially …..

 “Good.” Brax grinned. “It might even help Jacob bond with me.”

“What you talking about?” Charlie questioned. “You and Jacob get on great.”

“You know when you told me that you told him about Angelo and that he still said I was his dad, it made me happy but there was a part of me that got worried things would change and before when you went to read the girls a story, I asked him how he was doing with his homework and he said I wasn’t his real daddy and ran away to his room. And I saw....he’d put Angelo down as his dad on the family tree.” Brax said sadly. “I’m scared he is going to...” Brax trailed off as he shook his head.

“Look Brax.” Charlie shook her head as she put the coffee cup down on the coffee table and turned to face him. “He’s 6 years old. He’s just found out you’re not his real dad and he can never know his real dad because he is dead. He’s probably just confused. Give him a few days and he’ll be fine.”

“You’re sure?” Brax questioned.

“I know my son.” Charlie answered. “He said yesterday that you were the best because you taught him to ride a bike and to surf....he loves you Brax, and he thinks of you as his dad. Why would he want to be a Braxton so bad if he didn’t?”

“He really asked to be a Braxton?” Brax questioned and Charlie nodded. “What would you think about that? Changing his name?” Brax asked.

Charlie took a deep breath before she bit her lip. “If we were to get married then I have no problems in changing his name to Braxton. But until then he will remain Buckton-Rosetta.”

“Only if we get married?” Brax asked. “Why only if we get married?”

“Well if I can’t be a Braxton then there’s no way I am going to change my son’s name to Braxton.”

 “A big party?” Charlie questioned. “That’s all you think a wedding is?”

“Well what else is it?” Brax asked.

“How about a commitment of our love? Showing our friends and the kids how much we mean to each other and that we want to be together forever. The beginning of the rest of our lives together.”

“We have that all without marriage.” Brax sighed. “I love you so much and I always will. I don’t have much faith in marriage and I don’t want to wreck what we have.” Brax shook his head. “I’m sorry but it’s not a big deal for me.”

“What about me?” Charlie asked. “I believe in marriage. I want to stand up in front of my children and my friends and commit to spending the rest of my life with the man I love.”

“But babe we are already committed to each other. We have kids and they are bigger commitment and a bigger symbol of our love that any marriage ever would be.”

“So this here.” Charlie said as she took the promise ring from her finger and held it up in front of Brax’s face. “This was just a lie? I remember when you gave me this, and then again at Ruby and Xavier’s wedding you told me that this meant a proposal would be coming.”

“I thought maybe...maybe you’d be happy enough with that.”

“What the promise of a proposal that would never come? Lovely Brax, just lovely.” Charlie shook her head. “I’d rather you were just honest with me from the start. I told you I didn’t want kids rom the start. Didn’t I?”

“Yeah, and what are Paige and Riley?” Brax questioned. “You changed your mind about kids I might change my mind about marriage.”

“I didn’t change my mind.” Charlie shook her head. “I agreed to have a baby with you because I love you and I didn’t want to lose you and I knew it would have gone that way if I didn’t give you a biological child. And don’t get me wrong, I love those little girls more than life itself, but if I didn’t get pregnant, then I’d be fine with just having Ruby and Jacob.”

“So what are you saying? You agreed to have a baby for me so I should go against what I believe and get married just to please you?” Brax questioned.

“I want to get married. It’s important to me and it’s something that I believe in.” Charlie said. “Maybe we just have to face that you’re not the one who is going to be my husband.” Charlie found herself welling up with tears as she spoke the last part.

 Charlie was sitting at the bar, nursing a glass of wine. She sighed lightly as she ran her hand gently up and down the stem of the glass. She loved Brax so much, but she also wanted to be married and she didn’t know what to do. “Charlie?” The voice said. “Charlie Buckton?”

Charlie looked around to see the tall dark haired man standing beside her. “R...Ryan?” Charlie questioned.

 “The twins?” Ryan questioned.

“Oh sorry, Paige and Riley. My girls, they are total opposites.” Charlie smiled. “Paige is very girly and laid back and Riley is a boisterous tomboy.”

“Ah, so the trouble maker?” Ryan laughed.

“Well that’s one word for her.” Charlie laughed before she took a drink of her wine.

“So have they asked for anything crazy for their birthday?”

 Oh and Riley is getting a ladybug dress up outfit. She’s obsessed with them at the moment. Or bugs in general.” Charlie screwed her face up. “Then of course there’s the bouncy castle and ball pool coming for the party so I’m sure that they’ll love that. Sorry, I’m rambling now.”

 “So.” Ryan said causing Charlie to move her gaze. “We spoke about my failed love life. What about yours?”

“What about mines?” Charlie questioned.

“Well are you married?”

“Married.” Charlie repeated before shaking her head. “No, not married.” Charlie said. Ryan smiled before they clinked their glasses together and took a drink. Well she wasn’t exactly lying, was she? He’d asked her if she was married, not if she was in a relationship, and married was something that Charlie most certainly was not.

[Zetti]

No no no no not Ryan!!! Grrrr...

Update soon xx

[Dingo x]

Grr! Why did Ryan have to show up! Hope nothing happens!!!

I want happy Chax! We haven't had happy Chax in so long.

Looking forward to more. xx

[Dingo x]

So glad that nothing happened between Charlie and Ryan.

Things are looking worse and worse for Chax.

Hope they can sort everything out before it's too late, and hopefully Brax changes his mind about marriage soon!

Aww Jacob is so cute.

Looking forward to more. xx

[CharlieAndBraxLover]

Aw that Chax talk was sad. I think Charlie not telling Brax she saw Ryan is going to bite her on the bum..

Was nice that Jacob spoke to Angelo, so cute and he seems fine with Brax again.

I love reading all this emotional writing, but hopefully some happy Chax is just around the corner. ;)

More soon please Danni. xxxx

Edited March 3, 2012 by QUIET ACHIEVER
SPAG!!

[Inactive User]

Great chapter

The talk between Chax-so sad! Hopefully they will soon sort it out.

Liked how Jacob went to visit Angelo's grave and spoke to him.

More soon please xx

[Spotd1]

Great chapter Danni..I agree with CABL Charlie not telling Brax she seen Ryan will bite her on the bum!! I think Brax needs to talk to Charlie again and explain or just make things right between them!! Loved how Jacob spoke about Brax to Angelo, he is so cute! Please update soon! Xx