Forever Yours (by Danni02) - comments

[Freakie42]

Awesome storyline, loving it! Look forward to more!

[homeandaway13]

Great chapter and i can't wait for the next update so please update soon xx

[Spotd1]

Great chapter Danni!! I can't believe Ryan could be Bella's dad!

Enjoy the precious time with your Mum, Dad and Sister! Xx

[CharlieAndBraxLover]

Another awesome chapter sad charlie is locking herself away and didnt even think that ryan could be the baby's dad. He potentially could have slipped bianca something thats why she couldnt remember it?

Looking forward to more.

Enjoy your family time!

[Inactive User]

Awww great chapter

Poor Charlie locking herself away

Ryan-Bella's dad...??

Awww Brax and Jacob at the end-so cute!

Enjoy your family time, Danni

Update soon please xx

[JosieTash]

BIG possible shock about Bella’s dad !!!!!!!!! REALLY REALLY enjoyed that !!!!!, especially …..

 “Yeah. She was pretty shaken up Thursday evening and the whole of Friday she never left the bedroom. Bless the twins, we told them Ruby was going to play Mummy for the day. They had a great time of it. But thank God I heard her shouting or she would be in even more of a mess than she is now

 Brax said before he walked back over to his car, and tried to open the door, but found it had been locked. He tapped on the window lightly and smiled at Charlie who leaned forward and unlocked the door, letting Brax into the car. As soon as he closed the door, Charlie leaned over him and locked it again before she turned and looked out of her window. “So you sure I can’t tempt you to go go-karting today?” Charlie shook her head lightly as she continued to look out the window.

 “22 minutes, yeah.” Charlie nodded.

“See Riley.” Paige stuck her tongue out.

“Stop saying that.” Riley sighed. “We still both 3.”

“Nuh-uh.” Paige shook her head. “I 3 and 22 olders.”

 “You are both 3 years old and I’m 6 so I’m the oldest anyways.”

“Nuh-uh.” Paige shook her head. “You’s wrong Jacob.”

“Yeah.” Riley nodded her head. “Ruby is the olders.”

“No no.” Paige shook her head. “Mummy is. Then daddy then Ruby then Jacob then me then you, Riley.”

“I’s no want to be the youngerist.” Riley shook her head before she pouted.

 “Sweetie you can’t.” Charlie shook her head. “You're too young.”

“3 not young.”

“Well you need to be 6 to go on the go-kart.”

“It not fair.” Riley shook her head.

 “It eh....Bella...her eyes....when he....Ryan, when he was....close to me, and I looked into his eyes....I see...” Charlie trailed off.

“You think Ryan could be Bella’s father?”

“I don’t know.” Charlie shook her head. “I mean when I first met him again, I didnt think anything of it, you know plently people have brown hair and brown eyes....but that night when I looked into his eyes....I just...I saw Bella.”

 “You think so.” Ruby laughed. “I’m going to take you down bro.”

“Eh, we all know I will be the winner.” Brax said.

“Haha, no.” Jacob shook his head. “Dad you been rubbish.”

 Liam, Ruby and Xavier hung back, letting Jacob and Brax battle it out for first place. As they approached the finish line Brax slowed down as Jacob flew past the line. He stopped his kart and jumped out before he jumped up and down.

“I win. I win.” Jacob cheered as Brax stopped next to him. “I knew I would.”

[Red Ranger 1]

Loved the interplay between Paige and Riley near the start.("I 3 and 22 older.")And Ryan could be Bella's dad?!Bit worried about the implications of that one...

[beebee]

Awesome update!!

Never saw the possibility of Ryan being Bellas dad coming ... clever!!!

Poor Charlie .. i hope she can start to feel more secure, maybe talk to Brax!!

The girls are too cute

Brax letting Jacob win ... nawww glad that their relationship is back on track .. love it that Jacob calls him daddy nawww

Please update as soon as you can

[JoJo1602]

I love the banter between the girls, its soo cute!

Ryan possibly being bellas dad was a real surprise i never thought of that

Great update

[~Zoe~]

Missed a couple of chapters, great updates