Forever Yours (by Danni02) - comments

[RoRo90]

so glad the twins are fine, great chapter

update soon

Edited December 25, 2011 by RoRo90

[Inactive User]

Whoa! I am so sorry for missing the last two chapters, Danni! Please forgive me! We were away for the Christmas hoildays at our beach house and we have no phone line at the beach house, waaa!

Am in internet cafe on my laptop Liked the last two chapters. Update soon please xx

[CharlieAndBraxLover]

Aw i felt sorry for brax, everyone was picking on him hopefully he will still be able to adopt jacob. Great chapter, more soon please xxx

[Guest]

Great update please update again soon

[CharlieandBrax4Ever]

Great chapter but poor Brax he was crying Hope he can still adopt Jacob!!

[Inactive User]

Awesome chapter Update soon please xx

Edited December 26, 2011 by ~JarlieFanEver~

[soph1303]

Great two updates,

Glad the babies are ok !!

Haha I loved that Charlie tried to get the Doctor on her side about the whole sex/no sex thing !!

Great ending to the first update !!

Loved Bianca in the second update!!

Aww I feel sorry for Brax over the whole adoption thing !! Is it just me or do I get the impression that Charlie isn\'t so keen on Brax adopting Jacob??

More soon please

Edited December 26, 2011 by soph1303

[Dingo x]

Great chapters,

I'm glad the twins are ok!

Looking forward to more. xx

[JosieTash]

ADORED that, especially.............

 Bee-Bee Bee-Bee” Jacob yelled as he ran up to her. “Santa comes tonight” Jacob grinned as he jumped up and down excitedly. “I gets a tramoline” Jacob grinned.

“Eh Santa’s not been yet. We don’t know what he’s going to get you” Charlie said as she looked down at her son.

“But it’s what I asked for” Jacob said before he ran back down the hall and out of sight.

“Oh see I thought you’d been asking for a bike for the last month”

 “You know if you ever need a loan -”

 “But of course that would mean no Brax and no Brax would mean no babies” Charlie said as she lightly placed her hands on her stomach.

 dressed only in his underwear with his pirate sword in his hand and his eye patch covering his eye.

“Mummy” Jacob smiled “Can you put my banda on” Jacob asked as he threw his bandana up to Charlie. Charlie laughed lightly as she looked down at her son.

“Jakey where are your clothes?” Charlie asked as she tied the bandana on his head.

“It’s too little now” Jacob sighed as he spoke about his pirate outfit.

“Well you need to wear something sweetie” Charlie said.

“No’s really” Jacob shook his head.

“I think you should” Bianca said.

“No” Jacob shook his head. “Is hot today”

 “Well we have a pump, but it’s broken” Charlie said tentatively as she moved away from Bianca.

“So you want me to blow it up like, with my mouth?” Bianca said and Charlie nodded lightly. It’s a good job you are pregnant, Buckton, I tell you”

 “Jacob Buckton” Brax said “Charlie, control your child” Brax said as he looked to her.

“He’s just having a bit of fun” Charlie said. “Go on Jacob, splash Daddy again”

 “I eh.....the adoption” Brax exhaled as he sat down on the edge of the bed. “I got the forms to fill out and eh.....my criminal record” Brax shook his head “I think it might stop me from adopting him” Brax said sadly as he felt his eyes stinging with tears.

[Spotd1]

Awww I feel so sorry for Brax! Looking forward to your next chapter! You are an awesome writer!