pembie Posted August 10, 2012 Report Posted August 10, 2012 (edited) Hey Danni All caught up now awesome writing and some very touching couple of chapters. I started off thinking Brax would be ok but now I'm not so sure that he will be. The Charlie and Ruby scenes have been awesome really enjoyed reading them. Edited August 10, 2012 by pembie Quote
CharlieandBrax4Ever Posted August 10, 2012 Report Posted August 10, 2012 I have this strange feeling that Brax is going to die… I hope not though Quote
beebee Posted August 10, 2012 Report Posted August 10, 2012 OMG ... Brax has to be ok!! What an update ... The kids are just so so cute! Please update again soon xx Quote
Spotd1 Posted August 10, 2012 Report Posted August 10, 2012 Great update Danni! The kids are so adorable..poor little Paige, she is definitely the odd one out! Looking forward to seeing how Brax is! Please update soon! Xx Quote
beebee Posted August 10, 2012 Report Posted August 10, 2012 Jacob :-( that kid almost broke my heart!! When Charlie climbed in bed with him I was hoping he would move his arm to hug her or something ... Wishful thinking lol Beautiful update Danni .., now Brax just needs to wake up lol Please update soon xx Quote
RoRo90 Posted August 10, 2012 Report Posted August 10, 2012 I actually teared up when Jacob asked if Brax was going to die and then Paige saying she didn't like him being in the hospital... broke my heart I really do hope Charlie and the kids get some good news about Brax's condition in the next chapter or better still he wakes up this story is amazing eager for the next update Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted August 10, 2012 Report Posted August 10, 2012 The kids' reactions were great.I loved the way Jacob and Paige spoke about the whole situation.Nice appearance by April too.You're really stringing this out, aren't you? Quote
Inactive User Posted August 10, 2012 Report Posted August 10, 2012 Great chapter Update soon please xx Quote
pembie Posted August 11, 2012 Report Posted August 11, 2012 (edited) Felt sorry for Jacob there, well for them all but for him mostly he was soo upset there. Brax is going to be awake when charlie wakes up right? That's what I'm thinking, well maybe. lol Great chapter.. Edited August 11, 2012 by pembie Quote
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