Forever Yours (by Danni02) - comments

[callyha]

Oh my god Danni! I've missed loads! So so sorry!

Chapter 35 -Can't believe its Casey! Dead! poor Brax. Liked the conversation between Charlie and Ruby. Can't believe Cheryl isn't into believing Brax

Chapter 36- I agree with what Bianca said about pity sex not been the best thing to do when they haven't had sex for seven months......and had to at her 'born again virgin' comment. I hope nothing happens between Brax and Bianca as he isn't getting any and she isn't getting any.... little worried about that. I don't think Charlie could fogive Brax and Bianca if they did do anything.....

Chapter 37 -I can't believe Brax doesn't want to help. I get that his brother has died, but he can't really take this attitude. Jacob is so cute and I liked Charlie and Bianca's talk

Chapter 38 -Charlie not wanting to go to the funeral but wanting and been supportive to Brax is the best she can do; Brax is been a little childish there, he has to understand that, even though Casey is his brother, he is the man who raped her daughter, that's gonna be hard for her. Cheryl, bless her and Brax with the drink again; not good!

Chapter 39 -Cheryl shouldn't be encouraging Brax to drink away his problems; the more he drinks, the more Charlie is going to not let him near his girls, and i'm with Charlie when she told Cheryl that she couldn't see the girls. Ruby and Xave....work it out, you can do both! but, if your minds are made up then, that's it. Charlie and Bianca's wee little bit was nice

Chapter 40 -Brax seriously! leave the drink alone, Charlie will go and you'll loose more than your brother: your kids will go. Jacob helping Charlie bath the girls: SO cute! Jacob is so adorable! I feel so sorry for Charlie; I just want to give her a hug!

Chapter 41 -Ruby's carrer is deffo going great isn't it? Interviews and all! Brax's first attempts at getting back into Charlie's good books are sweet, but he still has a long long way to go. Charlie no way needed that from him

All have been FAB Danni, so intense and everything! update again soon please

[Jen1205]

Just caught up with the story and I was extremely annoyed at Brax, I know he is hurting but he has no right to blame Charlie for Casey being in prison. I'm glad he tried to apologize the following morning, but I think it will take more than breakfast. I hope he keeps his promise and doesn't get drunk again.

Great updates Danni and very intense, can't wait to see what happens next

[pembie]

Oh dear Brax turning to the drink again if his not careful he will lose Charlie.

Hm it does sound like something will happen with Matt and Ruby I'm still hoping she gets back with Xavier.

Once again that was a very good chapter.

[Spotd1]

Good chapter Danni, arghhh why is Brax being so annoying?! Seriously going to come to a point where they can't turn back!

[Inactive User]

Great Brax getting drunk again! Looks like he will lost Charlie and the kids if he doesn't stop drinking. I agree with Pembie-it's a great chapter Update soon please xx

[JosieTash]

It’s almost got to the stage of Saint Charlie …. putting up with Brax and his woes !!!!!!

LOVING this, especially ......

 “Anything you want to talk about?” Bianca asked and Charlie nodded lightly before turning the nod into a shake of the head.

“Not in front of Jacob.” Charlie whispered as she looked in Bianca’s direction.

 “You’re Mummy isn’t a pirate.” Bianca laughed feeling confused.

“No.” Jacob shook his head. “She big and grown silly.”

“Oh.” Bianca laughed lightly at her misunderstanding of the boy. “Well I hope you’ll be a nice one.” Bianca said and Jacob nodded.

“Yeah.” Jacob said. “I be the friendliest”

 “I told you that you don’t get any cake because you didn’t eat your lunch.”

“But I wasn’t ungry.” Jacob shook his head.

“But you are now?” Charlie questioned and Jacob nodded.

“For cake.” Jacob smiled as he looked to Charlie with puppy dog eyes.

“Ah you’re hungry for cake?” Charlie questioned and Jacob nodded as he continued to give his Mother the eyes. “Sorry sweetie. Mummy said you wouldn’t get cake if you didn’t eat lunch.” Jacob pouted as he looked down to the floor with sad eyes.

 “Aww still look at his little face.” Bianca said as she looked down to Jacob. “He’s looks really sad.”

“I know and it kills me when he is upset with me, but part of being a parent is that you sometimes will do things you’re little one won’t like.”

“Aww no, I’d always want my little one to be happy.” Bianca smiled. “If I ever get lucky enough to have a child.”

“You might think that now, but once the kid gets here you’d realise that can’t always be the case. I’m not going to treat him with cake if he hasn’t eaten lunch.” Charlie said as she looked down to her son, and knew that no matter how much of the toastie he ate, he probably would get his wish and get his cake anyways, after all, she did find it extremely hard saying no to his little face.

 “Hopefully it’ll blow over soon enough. Or maybe I should announce my split from Xav, maybe that will get people talking about that instead of my rape.”

 “We could if I had food in the house.” Matt laughed.

“Seriously you have nothing?” Ruby asked as she opened a cupboard to find it was empty. “Like you don’t have anything at all. Not even milk, flour, butter, cheese and pasta?”

“I have some milk and some cheerios.” Matt said “But that’s all. What you want to make with those ingredients?”

“Pasta with a cheese sauce.” Ruby sighed. “Seriously you don’t even know how to make that?”

“Nah.” Matt shook his head.

“You’re even worse than my Mother.” Ruby sighed.

 “When was the last time you had a home cooked meal?” Ruby questioned.

“Well my Mum died when I was 6 and my Dad never was great in the kitchen.” Matt shook his head.

 “So you lied to me.” Charlie sighed.

“Well just a little white lie.” Brax laughed. “But I’ve been a lot drunker than this before.”

 “Well maybe if you weren’t such a frigid bitch I wouldn’t need to go out and get drunk.” Brax yelled.

“I’m not going to sit here and listen to this.” Charlie shook her head as she stood up from the couch.

“No, you run away to the guest room.” Brax sighed. “Anything to not sleep with me, eh.”

“I didn’t spend last night in the guest room to not sleep with you.” Charlie spat. “I’m just not happy with the way you’re acting right now.”

“Oh so you are little miss perfect are we?”

“I didn’t say that.” Charlie spat. “But I’m not the one who is going out and getting drunk every night.”

“No, no, you just sit at home doing nothing all day.” Brax yelled.

“You think looking after a toddler and 7 week old twins is doing nothing?” Charlie shouted.

[Red Ranger 1]

Liked Charlie being hard on Jake.So Brax got drunk again, this really isn't good.Looking forward to more!

[CharlieAndBraxLover]

Brax!!!!! Oh my god!!!! Get them to the counseller, or get charlie to leave with jacob and the girls for the night! She shouldnt put up with this bullcrap!

[~Zoe~]

That was a great chapter Danni - looking forward to more.

[Dingo x]

So sorry for not keeping up with the story Danni.

Alot has happened since I last read this story, aww Casey died I understand both sides of the argument for Charlie not attending the funeral,

but I'm more on Brax's side for this one, as Bianca said to Charlie, her going wouldn't be for Casey, it would only be to support Brax.

Brax turning to the drink He really needs to sort his shiz out! He's going to lose Charlie if he keeps this up, can already see they're drifting

further and further apart. Hopefully he starts to open up to Charlie more and lays of the drink.

Looking forward to more. xx

Edited January 26, 2012 by Dingo x