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Just caught up on recent chapters, they were all awesome :) sad that bianca was trying to get rid of the baby... This is so messy, great drama reading but i feel terrible that jacob is suffering and chax arent together, and the friendship with bianca is ruined. More soon please danni xxx

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At the start where Charlie and Brax were talking about the kids I felt for Brax abit. I was like stop talking now Brax because everything he was saying just made things worse and didnt win him any browny points. :lol: .

WOW Bianca trying to harm her baby was shocker. Hope she doesn't try anything esle.

On a lighter note I think it's funny when Jacob calls Paige and Reliy Thems girls :lol:

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2 updates in one day, i love you danni! Thank you! :D amazing chapter, glad brax is spending time with the kids, and glad he and charlie talked, but its really sad charlies still dealing with it this way, but i understand why.

I awwww'd at the part where jacob didnt wanna let brax go, so cute, but sad as well that he thinks brax is gonna leave him. More soon please xxx

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Thanks for another good update Danni! I loved Brax and Charlie's conversation..it's progress! I also love that Brax is spending time with the kids! Please update soon! Xx

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That was ACE !!!!!, especially ......

 “Paige was a little sick after her feed this morning, so let me know if it happens again.”

“Yeah, sure.” Brax nodded lightly. “Anything I should know about Riley?”

“Not that you don’t already.” Charlie shook her head. “Actually she’s feeding a lot better this last week, but as the doctor said, her colic is going away now she is 3 months, so she might get a bit easier.”

 “Where’s Jacob?” Brax questioned. Charlie opened her mouth to reply but Brax spoke over her. “Don’t tell me I can’t see him?” Brax questioned. “Charlie, you know he’s my kid right? Biology doesn’t matter when it comes to how I feel about him. Please don’t say that because I’m not his father I don’t get to spend time with him anymore?”

 “Does he know anything about us, our situation right now?” Brax asked.

“No.” Charlie shook her head. “I thought maybe when you brought the kids home, we could sit him down and try to explain something to him. I don’t think he’ll really understand much...I mean he’s not even 4 yet, but I’m sure we will find some way of explaining it to him.”

 Charlie nodded lightly. “If you’re not the father I’d want nothing more than to work at our relationship. But I can’t just continue on now like nothing has happened.”

 “Do you think she is attractive?” Charlie questioned.

“What?” Brax asked.

“Bianca. Do you find her attractive?”

“Yeah she is a good looking woman, but she’s just not my type.”

“So your drunk, you’re both feeling sexually frustrated, you have an attractive woman right there beside you....” Charlie trailed off.

 “The poor kid thinks no-one wants him anymore. You know he hasn’t seen Brax in so long, and he said you’re always busy with the girls and now you won’t let him see Bianca...a lot is changing for him and he’s so young. It’s hard to take for anyone but a 3 year old.”

 “God, what are like with our men problems.”

“I know.” Charlie laughed lightly. “What are you wanting to do?”

 “Daddy.” Jacob shrieked as he ran over to him and gave him a big hug. “You really here.”

“Yeah mate of course.” Brax smiled as he continued to hug the boy.

“Mummy said you coming but you really did come.” Jacob said as he continued to hug Brax. “I miss you too too much.”

 with Jacob remaining in his arms, holding onto his Daddy tightly, not wanting to let go for fear of him leaving for so long again.

 “A snake.” Brax raised his voice. “I thought you used to be scared of them.”

“No.” Jacob giggled.

“What about when you thought you had snakes in your bed?”

“Oh yeah.” Jacob nodded. “Thems were scary ones.”

“But you wanted a pet one?” Brax questioned.

“Well my snake wouldn’t be scary.” Jacob said. “Don’t be a silly billy.”

 as Brax tried to put him down on the sand. “No yet Daddy.” Jacob shook his head as he wrapped his arms tighter around Brax’s neck.

“Mate you gotta go down so we can play.”

“No yet.” Jacob shook his head. “I wants to cuddle longer.” Jacob said not yet letting go of Brax.

“You know if you let go I’ll still be here.”

“No, I no let go.” Jacob shook his head as he held onto Brax.

“Well I think the tickle monster might have to come out.” Brax said as he began to tickle Jacob and the boy burst into hysterics.

“No no Daddy no.” Jacob said between the laughter. Brax laughed lightly as he continued to tickle his son.

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Yay! Another update! Great chapter Danni!

Aww the ending was quite sad how Jacob didn't want to let go of Brax, I feel so sorry for Jacob.

Looking forward to more. xx

Edited by Dingo x

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