Forever Yours (by Danni02) - comments

[Red Ranger 1]

Good Brax got to spend time with the kids and that Ruby seems to be sorting her life out.Looking forward to more.

[~Zoe~]

Good chapter. I thought the bit at the end with Brax and Jacob was sweet. Bless.

Great writing as allways.

[beebee]

WOW ... 2 updates you really are spoiling us!! I am still nervous and find myself chewing madly on my finger nails as I am reading!!

Loved the last chapter ... Jacob with his Daddy was just soooo cute!!!! That chat Brax & Charlie was OK too ... still waiting for the mystery one night stand of Biancas to come along and confessd his love for her, then we can all rejoice that brax didn't sleep with Bianca

I'm scared ... but please more soon xx

[Sazzle]

Sorry not been around to comment. Amazing fabulous last few chapters and 2 in the same day! Thank you SO much!!

Beautiful writing as always and loved Brax with his boy and Brax and Charlie talking trying to sort out where they are at. I totally understand Charlie and where she is coming from and hope so much that it is someone else that Bianca got jiggy with and not Brax. Loved his vulnerability and him being open with Charlie. Love your writing! Always very excited for each update.

Looking forward to more

[Jen1205]

Thank you for the 2 updates Danni

How cute are Brax and Jacob, its nice they finally got to spend time together. Poor Charlie, Its such a awful situation to be in. Can't wait for the next update

[Sazzle]

Oh my gosh...so good! I totally want my own Jacob! How cute is he... Hilarious with the fish fingers scene and him getting all worried.

Brax and Charlie explaining what is going on is really good and felt the emotion and them wanting whats 'best' but both of them obviously hurting

Charlie helping Bianca was nice and I get that she is still so angry but hoping that you please don't have Brax as the baby daddy and that it can be revealed before Brax and Charlie go the whole length of the pregnancy fracturing their relationship even more.

Ruby and Matt was cute...seems she can't resist.

As always,looking forward to more! Thanks

[JosieTash]

That was cooooooooooooooool, especially ......

 “Bout what?” Jacob asked. “Have I been naughty?”

 “Sometimes Mummy’s and Daddy’s decide it would be best if they lived in different houses.”

“But its not best.” Jacob shook his head. “Daddy be here with us is.”

“You know how last week you didn’t want to talk to Mickey from pre-school?” Charlie questioned.

“Yeah cos he pushed me down and hit me head.” Jacob nodded. “He no be nice to me.”

“Well right now, Mummy and Daddy don’t feel like the best of friends, like you and Mickey. So Daddy is going to move out for a while.”

“So no forever?” Jacob questioned.

“We hope not.” Brax answered. “But right now, we think this is the best thing to do.”

Jacob pouted as he shook his head. “It not best.” Jacob cried. “Daddy being here is best.”

“Hey, sweetie, you’ll still get to see Daddy lots, okay.” Charlie said as she wiped the tears from her son’s cheeks.

“Yeah, we’ll still have lots of fun, like we did today eh.” Brax said as he leaned forward and lightly rubbed his arm. A tear rolled down Jacob’s cheek as he buried his head against his Mother’s chest. Charlie gently rubbed his back before she placed a kiss on the top of his head.

“You okay baby?” Charlie questioned.

“No.” Jacob said quietly as he wiped the tears from his face.

 “Fish fingers.” Charlie answered and Jacob’s eyes widened.

“Not Capin Jack and Capin Hook’s fingers?” Jacob said sounding alarmed before he ran over to the kitchen jumping up to see both of his fish were still there, swimming about.

“No.” Charlie laughed. “Not Captain Jack and Captain Hook.”

“Phew.” Jacob exhaled. “Daddy you come see them now.” Brax looked to Charlie and the pair smiled lightly at one another before he walked forward to look at his son’s fish.

 “I can help you to your house.” Charlie said knowing that Bianca couldn’t manage with the bags on her own. Bianca smiled once again, hoping this was possibly more than Charlie just being nice, or feeling sorry for her having broken her arm.

 “Ginger tea always worked pretty well for me.” Charlie said quietly. “And with the girls, I’d eat a few wholegrain crackers as soon as I woke up, you know so something was in my stomach.”

 “Not too great thanks to you.” Charlie spat coldly. Bianca exhaled lightly as she bowed her head down. Charlie was still angry, really angry and hurt by what could be happening, and Bianca couldn’t really blame her, she had every right to be. “But anyways, I should go.” Charlie said before she walked out of the house and away from her once best friend. Charlie hated how things were turning out in her life and she really hoped that things would get easier soon. That she’d find out Brax and Bianca hadn’t slept together and everything could go back to how it used to be, but Charlie was at a loss at how to do that without waiting until the baby arrived.

 Ruby walked into the apartment to find Matt hard at work in the kitchen. It had been a few days since she’d told him that she wanted to stop whatever it is that they had going on, but Matt was finding it hard to accept and had been trying ever since to get her to reconsider. “Hey, what’s all this?”

“I’m trying to cook you a meal.” Matt said. “But it’s not going so well.”

Ruby laughed lightly as she walked into the kitchen. “How can you burn pasta?”

“Well technically I think it’s the cheese sauce I burned.” Matt answered.

 “So here goes.” Ruby said as she took a mouthful of the food. “Well if you’d cooked the pasta a little longer and not burned the sauce it would be nice.”

 Matt took a mouthful of the food before he spat it back out. “I can’t make you eat that. Let’s order take out.” Matt said as he walked over to the drawer where the menus were. “hmm....I think Chinese?”

 Matt laughed as looked into Ruby’s deep green eyes. Ruby smiled lightly at Matt before she hit his chest.

“Don’t.”

“Don’t what?” Matt asked as he wrapped his arms around Ruby.

“You know what.” Ruby whispered as they looked into each other’s eyes as smiles appeared on both of their faces. Matt smiled lightly before he placed a soft kiss on her lips, Ruby unable to stop herself from responding, and letting the kiss become more and more passionate.

[llywela]

Loving it so far looking forward to read more Thank you!

[Samantha1]

Great chapters! The Brax and Jacob time was so sweet! Hopefully Charlie will come up with a way to make it work and not wait until the baby's born!

[Jen1205]

Aww poor Jacob, He really is adorable I loved the part about the fish fingers, made me laugh after all the intense stuff recently. I may have said this once or twice already but please don't have Brax be the father. Can't wait to read more