Forever Yours (by Danni02) - comments

[pembie]

That was a nice happy chapter. was quite amusing with Charlie and Brax calling each other Charlotte and Darryl. I think they are in need a fun family day out. so looking forward to the aquarium.

[JosieTash]

The Charlotte – Darryl bits were just soooooooooooooo the BEST !!!!!

That was ACE !!!!, especially ......

 ““Mummy Mummy wake up wake up.” Jacob yelled excitedly as he climbed upon the bed and started to jump up and down. “It my birthday.” Jacob shrieked.

“Mmm. Not yet.” Charlie turned around in the bed, hugging her covers closer to her.

“Yeah Mummy.” Jacob said as he continued to jump on the bed. “I’m 4 today.”

Charlie sighed lightly as she reached her hand out of the bed and grabbed hold of Jacob’s leg, causing him to stand still. “Stop jumping. Lie down.” Charlie yawned as Jacob did as he told, sliding under the covers and cuddling close to his Mum.

 Charlie grinned as she placed a kiss on her son’s cheek.

“No Mummy I need four.” Jacob said. “Cos I four today.” Charlie smiled lightly before placing 3 more kisses on his cheek.

 “And you’ve not opened them yet?”

“No.” Jacob shook his head. “Mummy said I should wait for you to see.”

“Oh she did.” Brax asked as he looked into the direction of the kitchen where Charlie was feeding the girls. Paige happily accepting, but Riley finding it more fun to rock from side to side in the highchair. “Well that was very nice of her.” Brax gave Charlie a thankful smile, which she returned. “Started them on solids eh.” Brax smiled. “Let the fun begin.”

“Well Paige is very good and has accepted the change.” Charlie answered. “Of course little Miss Riley is giving me more bother. Easy to see who takes after Mummy and who takes after Daddy.”

“Well Riley.” Brax shook his head as he walked over to the highchair and looked down at his daughter. “We’re offended by that remark aren’t we?” Riley let out a giggle as she continued to rock back and forth in the chair. “And besides it would be boring if we were all like little Miss Charlotte.”

“Don’t call me Charlotte.” Charlie said as she put another spoonful of the pureed mixture into Paige’s mouth. “Darryl.”

“Oh that’s how it’s going to be is it?” Brax asked. “Charlotte.”

“Mummy....Daddy....” Jacob said as he looked up to his parents. “I want to open the presents now.”

 “Wow it’s a big one.” Jacob said as he ran over to him and ripped at the paper to reveal a boogie board. “Oh my God....oh my God...oh my God.” Jacob jumped up at down in excitement. “I gets to surf.” Jacob screeched as he ran around the room in excitement.

 “Will do.” Brax smiled. “Charlotte.”

“Will you stop calling me Charlotte.” Charlie laughed.

“I like Charlotte.” Brax said.

“Okay, Darryl. If this is how it’s going to be.” Charlie said as she folded her arms across her chest and gave Brax a cheeky smile.

“You look stunning today by the way.” Brax smiled. Charlie was wearing a red sun dress that cut at the knee, and her long wavy locks were flowing loosely down passed her shoulders. He loved it when she wore her hair down.

“Thanks.” Charlie lightly blushed as she looked Brax up and down. “Wish I could say the same about you.”

“Oh Charlotte, you dig me in my checked shirts.” Brax laughed.

“Oh I do do I?” Charlie asked as she moved closer to him.

“You do.” Brax smiled as he wrapped his arms around Charlie’s waist. They moved closer to each other and were about to kiss, there lips only millimetres apart as they looked into each other’s eyes.

“Mummy I can’t find my bandana.” Jacob shouted. Charlie pursed her lips together as she looked in the direction of his bedroom.

“I’ll be right there sweetie.” Charlie said as she looked back to Brax before she left the room to help her son. Brax sighed lightly as he watched Charlie walk away, before a smile appeared on his face, feeling hopeful for their relationship and excited about the rest of the day. Not only was he excited for getting to be with kids, but he was getting to spend the day with Charlie. Something that hadn’t happened in a long long time.

[beebee]

Awesome chapter :-)

There is hope ... Can not wait for more xxx

[CharlieAndBraxLover]

Oh my goddd, INCREDIBLE!!!!!!!!! The best! I love how flirty they are being, lol i actually like the name Darryl Jacob is so cute, he's so excited, but I wish he didn't interrupt. More soon please!!

Xxxxx

Edited February 10, 2012 by QUIET ACHIEVER
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[llywela]

Yeeeey, I'm so happy, it look that there is a chance for happy chax one more time!! Super excited to read more thanks!

[Arielxo]

Loved that chapter!

[Red Ranger 1]

Well, the subtle flirting became less and less subtle as they went on...Interested to see how their day out goes.

[Sazzle]

Woop, woop!! Amazing beautiful last 2 chapters!! Gorgeous interaction and loved all the emotion and flirting and was written so good!! Love it!!

The Charlotte and Darryl stuff was really good and fabulous family day out! Hoping Charlie does not freak out and regret anything and that this can be the beginning of them sorting things out...please! Would like to have Charlie and Brax chat and her be open about why she's so gutted about Bianca being pregnant but where ever you go with this story, I'm sure I will love it!

So excited for next update! Thanks so much

[Samantha1]

Oh wow! Two great chapters, Jacob's just adorable and so were Charlie and Brax, glad to see they appear to be doing okay

[totally]

They kissed! I can't believe they kissed! They must have had such a nice day with Jacob and the twins. They should be a family. I wonder if Charlie will regret this, I hope not. And I hope that Bianca's baby is not Brax's. Thank you for letting them be happy during the last few chapters.