Jen1205 Posted February 10, 2012 Report Posted February 10, 2012 Aww 2 excellent chapters, Jacob is so cute I love him. As for Charlie and Brax I love the flirting between them and the kiss at the end was perfect, They are meant to be together. Can't wait to see what happens next Quote
CharlieAndBraxLover Posted February 10, 2012 Report Posted February 10, 2012 Best 2 chapters everrrrrr! So glad they kissed! And i'm glad they could have a happy family day without any worries cant wait for more! Xxx Quote
llywela Posted February 10, 2012 Report Posted February 10, 2012 What an amazing chapter lush! Simply wonderful! Thanks Quote
caroline77 Posted February 10, 2012 Report Posted February 10, 2012 I am glad to see Brax and Charlie starting to get along better. I hope its the begining of them starting to get back together. Thank you for the last few chapters. I am looking forward to seeing what happens next. I am enjoying your story. Quote
JosieTash Posted February 10, 2012 Report Posted February 10, 2012 Jacob was soooooooo like a kid in a candy store in this ….wanting turtles & dolphins and the like !!! That was coooooooooooooooooool !!!, especially ...... “But we be ages.” Jacob sighed. “The car ride took forevers.” “That’s because Daddy drives like an old lady.” Charlie laughed. “Hey.” Brax said. “We had 7-month-old twins and a 4 year old kid in the car. You’d rather I was safe than sorry.” “I’d rather you didn’t take nearer 3 hours to make a 2 hour car journey.” Charlie replied. “Okay, you can drive home then.” Brax said. “We’ll see how slow you drive when the kids are in the car eh.” “Okay, point taken.” Charlie said and Brax gave her a cheeky smile. “Yeah.” Jacob smiled. “Them girls are young. Just babies. How old theys Mummy?” “Wow. The turtles...Mummy I want a pet turtle.” “You can’t have a turtle.” Charlie shook her head. “And you’ve got your fish.” “My fishes could get a turtle friend.” Jacob smiled. “Ah I think you’re just fine with your fish mate.” Brax said. “It could stay at your house.” Jacob said as he looked up at Brax. “I have my fishes at Mummy’s house and my turtle at Daddy’s.” “C’mon.” Charlie said as she took her son’s hand. “There’s going to be a dolphin show, let’s go watch that.” Charlie said distracting the boy of his request for a turtle. Jacob skipped excitedly as he held Charlie’s hand, while Brax pushed the buggy along to the seats in the outside area of the aquarium, where the dolphin show was taking place. “That was the best show. I want a dolphin.” “A dolphin.” Brax said as his voice went higher. “Mate, the dolphin need to stay in the sea.” “But them ones not in the sea.” Jacob argued. Brax looked at Charlie at a loss at what to say. Charlie shrugged her shoulders, but laughed lightly in amusement, waiting to hear what Brax would say to get himself out of this one. “But they eh....need eh....” Brax looked up to Charlie to continue to just laugh at the situation. “See you no no why I can’t get one.” Jacob shook his head. “How about cos Daddy said so?” Brax asked and Jacob furrowed his eye brows before he jumped off Charlie’s knee and looked up to his parents with wide eyes. looking to everyone around them, like the prefect, happy family, and for Brax that was exactly how the day was feeling. the pair of them standing next to each other arms by their sides. “No no no.” Jacob shook his head. “Daddy you put your arm around Mummy.” Brax looked to Charlie questioningly and Charlie nodded lightly as a small smile appeared on her face. Brax returned the smile before wrapping his arm around Charlie pulling her close to him. He smiled lightly as Charlie’s arm also went around his back. They smiled as Jacob clicked the camera, before they looked up into each other’s eyes, and for the second time that day, moved in for a kiss. “Mummy, look, look.” Jacob screeched causing Charlie to once again pull away from the kiss, much to the disappointment of both of them. “The baby penguins try to walk. It’s funny.” Jacob giggled. “Yeah.” Charlie laughed lightly as she slid her arm away from Brax’s back, but took Brax slightly by surprise when she linked her hand with his and pulled him close, so he was standing behind her, the 3 of them looking down to the penguins. The Chax scene that started with ……. Charlie smiled lightly. “So eh....do you eh....can I get you a drink?” Charlie questioned. “I mean not alcohol....I eh....I just mean like a soft drink...a coke maybe or eh...” Charlie trailed off as she looked at Brax. Why did she feel so nervous all of a sudden? Quote
beebee Posted February 10, 2012 Report Posted February 10, 2012 Oh my god .. Jacob is so damn cute ... Love him, the way you write his dialogue is so realistic & you can really imagine & picture him!! Loved the happy family in this ... Charlie at the end saying "shut up & kiss me" was awesome! I'm still praying by some miracle that Brax is not the father of Bianca's baby! Please update soon xxx Quote
Inactive User Posted February 10, 2012 Report Posted February 10, 2012 Awesome chapter!! Loved it More soon please xx Quote
Spotd1 Posted February 10, 2012 Report Posted February 10, 2012 AMAZING chapter!! Jacob is so adorable..love how he took a picture of Brax and Charlie at the aquarium and LOVE, LOVE, LOVED the kiss!!!! YAY please update soon!! Xx Quote
RoRo90 Posted February 11, 2012 Report Posted February 11, 2012 two AMAZING chapters :wub: , your spoiling us with these updates but I defo am not complianing yay they kissed , I just hope Charlie doesnt regret it and push him away, and I hope even more that Brax is not the father of Bianca's child update soon so egear to read more Quote
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