Inactive User Posted February 13, 2012 Report Posted February 13, 2012 Fab chapter Liked it. More soon please xx Quote
Spotd1 Posted February 13, 2012 Report Posted February 13, 2012 I really enjoyed that chapter Danni! I don't think Charlie is being unreasonable..I would do the same! I know I say it every time but I really hope it's not Brax's baby so maybe Charlie and Bianca can go back to how they used to be!! Please update soon lovely! Xx Quote
CharlieAndBraxLover Posted February 13, 2012 Report Posted February 13, 2012 Nice chapter, jacob learning to swim was good. More soon please xxx Quote
Dingo x Posted February 13, 2012 Report Posted February 13, 2012 Great chapter. I don't really think Charlie would be able to give Bianca another chance, well not right now anyway, I think it would be too much for her watching Bianca getting bigger with possibly Brax's kid. Looking forward to more. xx Quote
JosieTash Posted February 13, 2012 Report Posted February 13, 2012 That was ACE, especially ...... Charlie sat on the sand with the girls sitting down in front of her. Paige holding onto Jacob’s spade tightly, and Riley looking out towards the ocean, her big blue eyes wide and full of wonder and she watched Jacob being taught how to swim by Brax. Riley let out a few gurgles as she continued to look at her Daddy and brother. “What you saying baby?” Charlie questioned as she lifted Riley up onto her knee. Riley squealed in excitement as her Mother spoke to her. “You want to be out in the water with your Daddy and Jakey don’t you?” Charlie questioned as she ran her hand lightly over her daughter’s still bald head, which often really worried Jacob as to why she still didn’t have any hair. Paige let out a squeal as she looked up to Charlie. Charlie smiled lightly as she lifted her onto her knee also. “I don’t think you’ll be a surfer sweetie. I think you’ll be like Mummy and like to get a nice suntan.” Charlie said before she placed a soft kiss on Paige’s soft chocolaty brown hair. “You like Mummy and Riley like Daddy” Charlie stated. “What do you girls think? That sounds fair, right?” “Does to me.” The voice laughed lightly and Charlie turned her head to see Bianca standing behind her, her bag in one hand and a book in the other. “Well I wasn’t asking you.” Charlie said sharply. “If I’m giving your Daddy the benefit of the doubt, that means I'm supposed to give her it too, right?” Charlie questioned. “Then how come I still can’t even look at her without being reminded of what might be.....that she might have Brax’s baby.....you’re little brother or sister inside her?” Charlie exhaled lightly. “Oh I wish you could give me an answer girls.” Charlie sighed as she looked over to Bianca. Jacob grinned as tried to sit down on Charlie’s knee, but Paige being there was giving him a bit of bother. Brax laughed lightly as he took Paige from Charlie so Jacob could sit down. “Jakey.” Charlie said as she pushed him back into standing and grabbed his towel and wrapped it round him before sitting him back down. “You got Mummy wet.” “So” Jacob giggled. “I can swim.” Jacob said excitedly. “But remember you have school in the morning.” “Aww no.” Jacob shook his head. “How much longer do I need to go there for?” “Oh about 14 more years, at least.” Charlie laughed. “That’s forevers.” Jacob sighed as he turned his head and saw Bianca sitting further along the beach. “Oh Mummy is Bee-Bee. Please can I see her?” Jacob pouted. “I not seen her forevers.” Charlie exhaled lightly as she looked up at Brax and could tell what he was going to say before he ever said it, just by the look on his face. “Go on then.” Charlie smiled as Jacob jumped up from Charlie’s knee and ran along to see Bianca, dropping his towel as he ran as fast as he could. Jacob smiled as he put his hand on Bianca’s bump. “What is this?” “I’m having a baby.” Bianca answered. “I knows that silly. You have a bump like Mummy did before she had them girls” Jacob said. “I mean you got boys or girls.” “Oh.” Bianca laughed at her mistake. “I don’t know what it is.” “Hmm.” Jacob put his hand on her tummy and rubbed it gently. “It girls.” “There’s just one baby, Jacob.” “Why you no get two like Mummy?” “I don’t know.” Bianca shook her head. “But I’m very happy to have this one.” “No. You look sad in here.” Jacob said as he put his finger next to Bianca’s eye. Bianca exhaled lightly as she looked up to Charlie and Brax. She watched as Brax placed a soft kiss on Charlie’s cheek before he left, walking in the direction of his work. She watched as Charlie gathered up their things and began pushing the buggy across the sand, walking closer and closer to Her. “C’mon then Jacob.” Charlie said as she held her hand out for Jacob to take. “No. I stay with Bee-Bee longer.” Jacob said. “No, we need to go home.” Charlie said. “Mummy please.” Jacob pleaded as he put his hands together, almost like he was praying. “I want to see Bee-Bee.” “Go on, you gotta listen to your Mummy.” Bianca said. “But just a little longer. Just a minute or two more.” Jacob said. Charlie exhaled lightly as she looked down at Jacob who was cuddling into Bianca. “You bring him home by 5.” Charlie said and Bianca nodded lightly as she smiled up at Charlie. Quote
beebee Posted February 13, 2012 Report Posted February 13, 2012 nawwww Brax teaching Jacob to swim soo cute!!! Would love for Brax to take Riley in the water .... that would be sooo sweet, his little water baby LOL How much longer before we find out if it's all doom & gloom .... still praying that Brax isn't the dad!! Maybe it could be Elijahs ... no mistaking that little bub for Brax's LOL More soon please xx Quote
Spotd1 Posted February 13, 2012 Report Posted February 13, 2012 LOL perfect @BeeBee I would so laugh if it turned out to be Elijah's baby! Quote
llywela Posted February 13, 2012 Report Posted February 13, 2012 Ohmygod! This fanfic is offically one of, if not the best fanfiction ever I'm seriously loving it! Ohhhh, the beach scene was very cute, with Jacob learning to surf ohhh cute! Quote
RoRo90 Posted February 13, 2012 Report Posted February 13, 2012 Love Love Love this fic you never fail to deliver a great chapter. Last two Chapter were on point... first of all yay Chax are back, so glad Charlie is giving him the benefit of doubt Brax teaching Jacob how to swim so cute I understand where Charlie is coming from I dont think I would be able to cope seeing Bianca getting bigger when it could be Brax but saying that I also cant help feeling sorry for Bianca , I know I say this near enough al the time but plzz plzz plzz dont let the baby be Brax's plzzzzzzzzzz for Chax sake and the sake of Bianca and Charlie's friendship update soon and I hope we get to find out the pertanity of the baby really soon Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted February 13, 2012 Report Posted February 13, 2012 Charlie should give Bianca another chance if she's doing it for Brax.I'm glad she let Jacob talk to her though, although it was a bit awkward for both of them. Quote
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