Dingo x Posted February 21, 2012 Report Posted February 21, 2012 Agree with Spot. Can't believe Brax wants Bella to be his. Looking forward to more. xx Quote
CharlieandBrax4Ever Posted February 21, 2012 Report Posted February 21, 2012 I can't believe Brax would say that! I still have a feeling this baby might be Brax's but I really hope it's not, it will ruin everything!!!! Bianca and Charlie's talk was nice and the girls are sooooo cute It's really sad they haven't really been a proper family with Brax going to rehab and then all this with Bianca and the baby Update soon Quote
Inactive User Posted February 21, 2012 Report Posted February 21, 2012 Great chapter Whoa can't believe Brax wanted Bella to be his! Hope Bella is not his child. Liked the talk between Charlie and Bianca More soon please xx Quote
beebee Posted February 21, 2012 Report Posted February 21, 2012 Oh that chapter ... you wrote it beautifully but it was kinda heart breaking !! I can kind of see where Brax is coming from only just .. I mean Charlie is kind of the same knowing she cannot have anymore babies!! But still .... I am still hoping that Bella isn't Brax's ... but in Brax'd defence he didn't really want to tell Charlie he just wanted to work through it but she did push the issue Please tell us everything is going to work out soon ?? Please update real soon xx Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted February 21, 2012 Report Posted February 21, 2012 I can kind of see why Brax would like the idea of having another daughter, even if it would cause problems for him and Charlie.I like that Charlie didn't take it out on Bianca and they're still on good terms. Quote
JosieTash Posted February 21, 2012 Report Posted February 21, 2012 LOOOOOOVED that, especially ….. The WHOLE clash tween Charlie & Brax !!!! Paige giggled as Charlie blew raspberries on her stomach. Charlie smiled lightly as she looked at her daughter, her big blue eyes staring intently at her mother, her mouth open slightly, like she was waiting on her to do it again. Charlie did it again as Paige giggled in excitement. Riley let out a gurgle as she crawled across the floor and pulled herself up on the couch. “Aww who’s a clever baby.” Charlie cooed as she lifted Riley up on her knee, before looking back down to Paige who was still lying on the couch. As she held Riley on her knee, and placed one hand onto Paige’s stomach, she couldn’t help but feel a little sad that her girls were growing up so fast. Although Brax had told her that she still had so much to look forward to with the girls, she was still finding it difficult to accept that she’d never be able to have more children, and Brax had just hurt her deeply by telling her that he wanted Isabella to be his. She exhaled lightly as she placed a kiss on Riley’s head, before stoking her hand through her very slight hair that had just started growing in. Although like Paige, she had brown hair too, hers was a fair bit lighter that her sisters. “Oh girls...Mummy loves you so much, she really does...but after I had you....I....” Charlie exhaled lightly as she looked down to Paige who was giving her a big gummy smile. She hated herself for feeling like she did. Deep down she knew it wasn’t the babies fault that she had to have a hysterectomy, but she’d came to the conclusion that if she hadn’t had the twins, she wouldn’t have had a hysterectomy. She still felt so empty, and didn’t know how to stop feeling like she did, and worse still, she never showed it. She couldn’t. She needed to be strong for Jacob and the girls, especially with everything else that had went on since their birth. “How long have they been crawling?” “Eh...Riley for about 7 weeks and Paige about 5.” Charlie answered as she looked to her girls who were sitting by her feet with big grins on their faces. “Come in.” Charlie said as she took the suitcase from Bianca, before she walked in, pushing the pram into the house and setting it to a stop behind the couch. Charlie closed the door and walked back over to the couch, with the girls once again setting off to crawl, as they followed their mother, giggling lightly, enjoying the game. Charlie shook her head as Paige pulled herself to standing and placed her hands on her mother’s knees. Charlie smiled at her daughter as she lifted her onto her knee. “Just being there and holding your new baby...” Charlie trailed off. “I can’t get over this hysterectomy, Bianca.” Charlie shook her head. “I’m just so empty and hurt...I love Jacob and the girls so much, but knowing that these two are my last little ones, that Jacob is going to be my only son...” Charlie trailed off as she felt herself welling up with tears. “I...” Charlie shook her head and avoided Bianca’s advice. “Do you want Isabella to be his?” “I eh....” Bianca pursed her lips together. “I’d love to know who Isabella’s father is, but it being Brax would just muck up so much...you and Brax’s relationship, mines and yours, it would make things harder for your kids and I guess Bella too. So, no.” Bianca shook her head. “I really hope she isn’t Brax’s.” “Bella.” Charlie smiled. “That’s very fitting, you know, you being half Italian....Bella...beautiful....she is Bella.” Quote
maaaddyyx Posted February 21, 2012 Report Posted February 21, 2012 So I have just discovered this story! And I absolutly love it! You're doing such a great job with it!. I can't believe Brax would say that, but I do understand, hopefully all works out in the end... Love Charlie and Bianca getting along better now xo Quote
Sazzle Posted February 21, 2012 Report Posted February 21, 2012 Sorry missed commenting on last few chapters! I've spent some time reading back through from the beginning today and love this story! They've gone through so much and I really wish Charlie would open up and let herself be looked after or seek help from somewhere as proper suffering quietly with not being able to have more children and the operation. Obviously she's felt that she's had to remain strong due to dealing with everything but would be nice for Brax to recognise a bit more and be more gentle with her. Do love them together! You write their conversation and emotions so well and pleased that Charlie and Bianca are back talking and they had the delivery to bond and maybe heal some of their friendship. Know there is still a lot of potential heart ache coming up and really hoping that Bella is not a Brax baby! Looking forward to more as always!! Thank you! Quote
Jen1205 Posted February 21, 2012 Report Posted February 21, 2012 I thought Brax was a little insensitive in this chapter, saying how Charlie could never give him another baby, I'm really hoping Isabella isn't his baby because I'm not sure how Charlie could move past that, I know I couldn't if I were in her situation. Great update and it was nice to see Bianca and Charlie talking again, Can't wait for the next chapter Quote
Zetti Posted February 21, 2012 Report Posted February 21, 2012 Bella sounds adorable..really really sweet! I hope Brax gets his head out of his ass and realises how insensitive that was! Hope to see more Quote
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