Forever Yours (by Danni02) - comments

[caroline77]

I am hoping and praying that isabella is not Braxs. If she was it would ruin Charlie and Braxs relationship for good. I am enjoying your story even though I am on tenterhooks on who Isabellas dad is. it is good that Bianca is teaching her daughter a second language. I am looking forward to the next chapter.

[Red Ranger 1]

Woah!Hope Charlie was right that there's nothing wrong with Isabella.Seems it's causing tension between Charlie and Brax already and they don't even know for sure.Interested to see where this goes.

[Inactive User]

Great chapter. And whoa it seemed to be causing more tension between Chax Hope they will soon sort it out. More soon please xx

[beebee]

I'm not sure how I feel about that chapter ?

Nothing against ur writing ... It was great as always ... I'm just not sure I like the direction

Please fix Chax soon & put us out of our misery about bella ... She just can't be Brax's, her being Heaths would work cause Brax can be an amazing uncle!

Please update soon ...

[Spotd1]

Great update Danni!

I am even more annoyed with Brax but I am so happy Charlie had the last word and told him the truth..he wants to be a father to a Bella knowing that that would completely destroy the family he already has and seemed to be content with just because he doesn't want her to not have a dad..I am starting to think he remembers sleeping with Bianca and he knows that Bella is his! I really hope she isn't but why else would he be saying this?! Can't wait to see where you take this next...please update soon! Xx

[Zetti]

“Funny that.” Charlie said. “The one thing you didn’t want to be....you’ve started to turn into. You got drunk and hurt me, you’ve been to rehab, and you’re only a parent when you want to be...from what you’ve told me, you’re exactly like your father.” Charlie spat before she turned around and began quickly walking away from Brax.

Whoa...that was a tad harsh in my opinion, I mean fair enough he's not been the best partner or father but to compare him to his own father is harsh IMO.

I hope there is nothing wrong with Isabelle though.. I would hate to see that

Looking forward to more

[CharlieandBrax4Ever]

I know that Brax hasn't let Charlie greive and he wasn't there much but that was a bit cold what she said!

I hate them fighting it makes me sooo sad

Brax being Bella's father will tear them apart for good

Update soon xx

[Dingo x]

“Funny that.” Charlie said. “The one thing you didn’t want to be....you’ve started to turn into. You got drunk and hurt me, you’ve been to rehab, and you’re only a parent when you want to be...from what you’ve told me, you’re exactly like your father.” Charlie spat before she turned around and began quickly walking away from Brax.

Whoa...that was a tad harsh in my opinion, I mean fair enough he's not been the best partner or father but to compare him to his own father is harsh IMO.

Agreed, Charlie should have kept her mouth shut, that was just plain rude. I'm not on anyone's side atm, still annoyed with Brax for wanting Bella to be his but now I'm annoyed at Charlie, I know that she's upset about what Brax said but she's not even trying to work through it now.

Looking forward to more. xx

[CharlieAndBraxLover]

What A great chapter! So many emotions!

Cant believe charlie said that at the end, but it's true. Im worried the effect what she just said will have on grax, even though i'm a bit annoyed at him still.

More soon please xxx

[JosieTash]

REALLY enjoyed that, especially …..

 “Look, she has these little spots on her nose.” Bianca said.

Charlie looked at Isabella one again and this time, she did noticed the little spots. “It’s probably just milk spots.” Charlie said as she looked back up at Bianca. “I don’t think you need to be orried.”

“Are you really sure?”

“Well that’s what it looks like.” Charlie answered. “But it wouldn’t hurt to go check it out if it would make you feel better.”

“She has cried a lot.” Bianca answered. “She cries, eats, sleeps, poops and cries some more. It’s all she does.”

Charlie laughed lightly. “Well she is only 3 days old.” Charlie answered. “It’s all she can do.”

 “I was running and I fell.” Jacob said as Charlie wiped the tears from his face. “And it hurt and I wanted you.”

“He wouldn’t stop crying and shouting for you.” Brax said. “We were outside the diner after we had our lunch and were going back down to the beach when he fell. People were looking. It was embarrassing that I couldn’t comfort him so I just brought him home.” Charlie nodded lightly at Brax before she lifted her son onto the kitchen worktop and reached into the cupboard for the first-aid kid and took out a sanitized wipe.

“Ouch it’s nippy.” Jacob squealed as he moved his knees away.

 Brax stood awkwardly at the door, trying not to look at Isabella, and Charlie had seemed to notice this.

“You want her to be your child but you can’t even look at her?” Charlie questioned.

“I just -”

 “I don’t want to talk to him.” Charlie shook her head.

“Well you don’t need too.” Brax said. “Just let me do the talking. All you have to do is listen.”

Charlie exhaled lightly as she looked from Bianca to Brax then down to Jacob, who was sitting making silly faces as Isabella lay in his arms. “I’ll give you five minutes.”

 “I just....I know what it’s like to not have a father around.” Brax sighed. “I want to be her Dad so she doesn’t have to feel that. It’s horrible Charlie.” Brax paused expecting Charlie to talk but she just continued to stare blankly at him. “And if I need to be honest...being around Jacob and the girls...it would have been nice to think that one day we could have more children.”

“Well that’s never going to happen for us.” Charlie spoke coldly. “If you want more children then we can’t be together. As you said this morning, it’s something I can’t ever give you.”

“I know and I thought I was okay with that until Bianca said she was pregnant and that I might be the Dad. It got me thinking how cute and great babies are and I....”

“Funny you say that.” Charlie said. “You’ve not been here much for the girls thus far. You struggled to adjust to them being here then when you finally start to look promising you turn into an alcoholic and need to be shipped off to rehab, then when you get back, you spend days and days at a time away from them. You don’t even seem interested in them half the time, so why you want another one is beyond me.”

“Charlie of course I’m interested. I love those little girls more than anything.”

“Feeling love for them and being a good father to them are two totally different things.”

 “And you’re great with Jacob, but I feel I’ve done most of the work with the girls and between that and everything else that’s gone on, it’s not given me time to grieve properly and -”

“Grieve for what?” Brax questioned.

“The hysterectomy.” Charlie raised her voice. “I don’t have the time to think about myself because I’m always busy with Jacob and the girls.”

“Charlie, I’m sorry.” Brax said as he tried to pull her into a hug but Charlie took a step back and shook her hands out in front of her. “Talk to me now.”

“No.” Charlie shouted. “Why would I talk to you about it now? You’ve just told me you want more children. How can I possibly talk to you now about it when you’ve just admitted you want more? Something I can never give you.”

“No, but Bianca might have just given me another child and then that’s enough.” Charlie laughed in disbelief at what Brax was saying to her. “Look Charlie, I don’t understand what you want me to say. I’m not going to apologise for wanting Isabella to be my daughter.”

“I guess I’ll never understand.” Charlie shook her head.

“I tried to tell you.” Brax sighed. “I don’t want that little girl growing up without a father. It’s not fair and no-one should ever have to do it. I hate my Dad for leaving us...what it did to us....I don’t want that for Bianca and I told myself I would never turn my back on my kids....I wouldn’t be like my Dad.”

“Funny that.” Charlie said. “The one thing you didn’t want to be....you’ve started to turn into. You got drunk and hurt me, you’ve been to rehab, and you’re only a parent when you want to be...from what you’ve told me, you’re exactly like your father.” Charlie spat before she turned around and began quickly walking away from Brax.