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Just caught up on last two chapter, and they were great as always but now I must admit I am getting a bit anxious it looks like Chax are going from bad to worse :( And Brax... really REALLY <_< Sorry but he is just being plain insensitive now, I was extremely annoyed at him :angry: in the first of the two, how could he seriously want Bella to be his and saying that Charlie can never give him kids... he just seemed to be rubbing salt in her wounds to me... and yes although Charlie's words were a bit harsh at the end of the last chapter there was a point in what she was saying. Please put me out of my misery soon and let us know who the father is (I'm desperately praying its Heaths) fingers crossed its not Brax's kid. At least Bianca and Charlie seem to be getting on well :)

Update soon Xx

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I'm totally team Charlie on this, Brax admitting that he wants to be the father to her best friends baby was never going to go down well. He should have expected Charlie to be angry and try to hit him where it hurts, just like he has done with her with the comment about Charlie not being able to give him more children.

The last few chapters have been amazing Danni, so much drama and tension, I hope things work out and we get happy Chax, Can't wait for the next chapter :)

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Phew, I let out a huge sigh of relief reading that, I was actually terrified to read it :wub: I think Brax needs to grow up and be a father to the children he does have and fix things with Charlie.

Ah I'm so happy, Thank you Danni :lol:

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OMG I am so happy Brax isn't the father! Awesome, awesome, awesome, awesome chapter Danni! :D I am glad Charlie is going back to talk to Brax! Hopefully they can sort through everything and they can be happy again!! Please update soon! Xx

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:D YAY Brax isn't the dad!!! I do kinda feel for him ... I feel for all of them in this situation!!!!

So glad that Charlie is going to go and talk to him :wub: ... really hope things can finally start to get back on track for them with out this elephant in the room :P

PLease update soon x

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Such a RELIEF that Brax isn’t the dad !!!! That was cooooooooooool, especially …..

 The little baby so peaceful having no idea of the commotion her birth had caused. The pain that Charlie, Brax, and Bianca were all feeling was all very different, but equally there. More than anything Bianca wanted to know who the father of her daughter was, for Isabella more than anything, but did she really want it to be Brax? For if it was, so much would be ruined and never able to be fixed. What was more important to her? Her daughter knowing Brax was her father, or her friendship and Charlie and Charlie and Brax’s relationship being able to last. As she saw the couple sitting on the bench at the beach, she stopped for a second, seeing they were both silence, not looking at each other, just waiting on Bianca to arrive. Bianca exhaled lightly as she walked over to them. “Hey....thanks for meeting me here.”

“Why did you pick a public place?” Charlie asked. “Why couldn’t we just go to your place?”

“I just thought Bella could do with some fresh air....and maybe if we weren’t in the privacy of a house, if need be, things would be discussed more calmly.”

Charlie nodded lightly. “Did you go to the doctors the other day? Is she okay?”

“Fine.” Bianca smiled. “Milk spots just like you said.”

“Can we just open the results?” Brax questioned. “I need to know.” Bianca slowly brought the envelope out of her bag and took a deep breath as she ripped it open and very slowly pulled the sheet of paper out of it and scanned the information.

Bianca shook her head lightly. “She’s not yours.” Bianca said as she handed the piece of paper out to Brax, but he stood there, his hands on his waist and bit his lip. Charlie breathed a sigh of relief as she took the sheet from Bianca and read it over twice, just to make sure. Brax took a deep breath as Charlie looked up to him and saw tears forming in his eyes. Brax let out a scream of upset before walking away from them, making his way down the beach. Bianca sighed lightly as she sat down on the bench next to Charlie. “He’ll get over it.”

 “All that matters right now is that I do the best job I can raising that little one. And who knows, maybe I won’t find her biological father, but I’d love to think one day that I’d meet a man who can be a father to her.”

 “You know, you still can be.” Bianca said. “She’ll need a father figure...someone to go to when she feels she can’t talk to me....a fun uncle, maybe?”

“Not biologically though is it?” Brax said. “I thought I had a daughter.”

“Brax, you have two beautiful daughters already.” Bianca replied.

 Brax exhaled lightly as he looked round to the pram. “Can I hold her?” Brax asked. Bianca nodded lightly as she stood up and lifted Isabella from the pram and handed her to Brax. “Hey Isabella...I’m Darryl, but you can call me Brax.” Brax smiled lightly. “I may not be your father, but you can count on me if you need me.” Brax said. “I’m gonna be your uncle Brax.” Bianca smiled lightly as she watched Brax looking down at her daughter.

 Ruby breathed a sigh of relief. “So where is he now?”

“He’s.....sulking on the beach.”

 “Ahh and this little missy screamed when you put her in right?” Charlie asked as she looked down at Paige.

“That’s one word for it.” Ruby laughed. “She really does hate water doesn’t she?”

“Yeah.” Charlie nodded. “Bath time is so not fun when it comes to Paige.” Ruby laughed lightly as she and Charlie made their way outside to see Jacob and Riley having fun in the pool with Xavier.

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Really hope Brax realises how much he's already got and appreciate it. It seems nothing ever goes right for Charlie and Brax in this fic but here's to hoping they can move past this.

I'm also so relieved that Brax isn't the dad but I wonder if Bella's ever going to find out who the father is or if Bianca will remember?

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