Forever Yours (by Danni02) - comments

[Inactive User]

Awesome chapter

Liked the talk between Charlie and Ruby.

Update soon please xx

[Dingo x]

Great update!

Aww Jacob is just too cute.

Looking forward to more. xx

[Chickiboomxx]

I've only just started reading this fan fiction but I think it's amazing

I love the way you write about the characters.

Jacob is sooo cute!!!

I can't believe Charlie is having twins! I have a feeling something's going to go wrong though...

And Ruby getting a recording contract was really good

I hope Brax proposes to Charlie soon! She obviously wants him to!

It's sweet that he cares about the babies so much.

I loved-

"I don't like it" Charlie answered "They aren't the same person. They two different people, why should they be dressed the same?" "Because it looks so fricken cute" Bianca gushed.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Please update soon xx

[JosieTash]

ADORED that !!!!!!!, especially.............

 Charlie smiled as Jacob climbed up onto her knee, although her bump was starting to get in the way of this. “Hey, Jake, are you not going to sit in your own seat?”

“No” Jacob shook his head as he gave Bianca a quick gaze, before looking back at Charlie. “I sit here”

“Aw but you’re a big boy” Charlie said “Don’t you want to sit on your own seat?” Jacob glanced at Bianca once more before looking up to his Mother and whispering in her ear. “No” Charlie tried to hold back a laugh. “She’s not going to make you go live with her”

 “How about I buy you some orange juice and a nice big piece of chocolate cake?”

“And a pack of chips” Jacob grinned and Bianca looked to Charlie who nodded.

“Sounds fair” Bianca smiled, just as Leah walked over to take their order.

“Oh Charlie, you are getting bigger every time I see you”

“No” Jacob shook his head “Mummy no like it” Leah looked up to Charlie confused. “You no keep saying she is big”

 “Orange juice and chocolate cake and a packet of chips” Jacob grinned “Mummy what’s the kind I get?”

 “Well how am I supposed to know if I need to buy cute little dresses or little dungaree suits or one of each of those or what?” Bianca sighed. “Seriously Charlie, sometimes you really need to think about others”

 “Because it looks so fricken cute” Bianca gushed.

“Maybe you think so” Charlie said “But I’ll not be doing it”

“Not even if they are identical?” Bianca questioned.

“Even less likely if they are identical” Charlie answered “They are different people so I will be dressing them differently”

“Well I’m still going to buy you the same outfits for them if they are two girls or two boys”

“That’s fine” Charlie said “Doesn’t mean I need to have them wear it at the same time”

“Yeah Bee-Bee it dunt mean she has to dress them the same time” Jacob said as he looked up to Bianca before he stuck his tongue out cheekily.

 “Oh fine then I’ll just go home instead of driving for 2 hours to see my Mum and Jakey and Brax”

“No no” Charlie shook her head “Of course you can come visit. It was just a surprise that’s all. If you told me I could have had a nice dinner prepared” Charlie said and Ruby looked at her Mother as she pulled a face, thinking of Charlie’s cooking. “Oi” Charlie lightly hit her daughters arm “I didn’t say I’d be doing the cooking. Brax would have done it”

“Oh well in that case, it would have been lovely” Ruby laughed.

 but I want a girl. I really want a girl”

“Well it’s not as if you don’t have a girl already” Ruby said as she smiled up at her Mother.

“I know, but I never got the chance to be a proper Mother to you” Charlie said “I didn’t raise you from the get go, and I’d really love the chance to raise a girl. Especially after having Jacob, it’d be nice to get some pink in this house again. Jakey and Brax are all about soccer or footie and fighting and silly boy’s games”

“What if she is a tomboy who hates pink and girly things?” Ruby laughed.

“Well for the first few years, I get to decide what she wears, so she’ll like it” Charlie said before she laughed.

 “You don’t need to give us up” Charlie said “We’ll always be here. And the times that you do see us, it’ll be all the more special”

“Yeah, that’s true” Ruby grinned “I think I really want this”

[~Zoe~]

That was a great chapter. Jacob is so cute, the way you write him Bless.

Looking forward to more.

[Red Ranger 1]

Nice update.Jacob is so cute, love the way he reacted to Bianca.Looking forward to more!

[totally]

Thank you Danni, you know why

I really liked Bianca and Charlie's little chat here. Bianca is right, Charlie is a real 'mum'. To Jacob and to Ruby... loved their conversation. Charlie is probably so proud of her. The twins really cost a lot of Charlie's energy I noticed. But that is pretty logical, thankfully she is still coping. Even though Brax gets to deal with her hormones. I love how patient he is with her, she is probably driving him nuts but he puts up with it and tries to do whatever she wants him too.

Adopting? Not too sure, they should get married first. And for that, Brax has to propose... so, hurry up Brax, she is clearly waiting for you to pop the question.

Can't wait to read more! This is such an amazing story!

[Lucii]

Loved Charlie and Bianca's chat and that Brax wants to adopt Jacob but I want him to propose Pleeeease please please!

Go Rubes! update soon x

[callyha]

Fab update Danni!

Bianca wanting to buy matching outfits for the twins if they are the same sex had to laugh at her reply They're freaking cute

Jacob is just getting cuter and cuter with each chapter, made me chuckle again when he repeated to Bianca what Charlie said

Loved charlie and Ruby's moment so sweet. And poor Charlie not been able to get up!

Update again soon danni! Amazing writing!

[Samantha1]

Aww, this chapter was cute, had to laugh at Jacob at the start, you're a great writer!