pembie Posted January 27, 2012 Report Posted January 27, 2012 Good Chapter. Liked Ruby and Casey's chat agree with Ruby thinking Charlie makes mountains out of a molehills at times Quote
Inactive User Posted January 27, 2012 Report Posted January 27, 2012 Great chapter. Update soon please xx Quote
JosieTash Posted January 27, 2012 Report Posted January 27, 2012 MUCHLY enjoying this so far, especially ......  Running along the beach and attracting attention from females was something that rarely gets on Heath’s nerves but for some reason, he kept getting annoyed at the looks he kept getting. He was not interested, it was that simple and yet he didn’t encourage the looks but they kept on coming regardless.  ‘I will be nice, it will be hard but I am sure I can stretch to it, he said as Casey scowled at him before walking to the door.  ‘Sorry’ Casey said ‘Guys, this is Ruby, Ruby this is Brax’ he said as he indicated to his back as he poured the orange juice into a glass and then pointed at Heath ‘and that is my other brother Heath’ ‘Nice to meet you both’ she said politely as Casey gave her a hug, Brax gave her the orange juice and asked her ‘So tell me, are you at university?’ ‘Yes, I am, studying English and Media’  Brax smiled. He was impressed, it was not often he met anyone who had their head screwed on the right way, he was satisfied that Ruby would be a good influence  April smiled ‘What makes you think I am new?’ ‘I know you are, because I have lived in the bay for a while now and I would remember seeing someone like you around’ he said as a grin formed on his face.  ‘Penny for them?’ ‘Sorry?’ April asked with a dazed look on her face ‘You were miles away’  ‘Odd is an understatement when it comes to Heath’ Casey replied which made Ruby laugh because she assumed that Casey was just being sarcastic but her expression faded instantly when she realised that he was in actual fact, serious. ‘Are you winding me up?’ ‘No, he’s had some hard times which is why he puts on this act’ ‘Wow’ she commented as her brain scrambled together trying to harbour an image of Heath being somewhat vulnerable, for some reason, she didn’t seem to be able to see it in her head.  She could see Charlie hovering wanting to know how it had gone but she ignored her, this for the moment was a lot more important than Charlie’s inquisitive mind and overactive imagination at times. She was good at making a mountain out of a molehill.  forget me for a second. Who has always been there for you?’ ‘Brax and Heath’ ‘Who will always be there?’ ‘Brax & Heath’ he repeated ‘I get it, they will always be there’ ‘Exactly, now shut up and kiss me’ she demanded as Casey lowered his lips onto hers and they kissed. Quote
MatildaHunterFan Posted January 28, 2012 Report Posted January 28, 2012 (edited) Amazing first chapters, really interesting how the characters who, in your fic, go to uni (well, some of them) get along... I have a feeling that the Casey/Ruby storyline in a little bit like the real story, really nice to watch Ruby and Casey madly in love... And also Heath and Bianca....really sweet how you described them. Update soon!! Edited January 28, 2012 by MatildaHunterFan Quote
Inactive User Posted January 28, 2012 Report Posted January 28, 2012 Fab chapter, Zetti Update soon please xx Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted January 28, 2012 Report Posted January 28, 2012 Woah!Heath and Bianca...moved fast but I'm sensing trouble ahead...Looking forward to more! Quote
pembie Posted January 29, 2012 Report Posted January 29, 2012 Wow these two moved very fast. Maybe I should move somewhere closer to the ocean where I could watch the sun go down with a girl. Very good description of Heath and Bianca. I can sense trouble on it's way too. More soon. Quote
Guest Posted January 30, 2012 Report Posted January 30, 2012 Great chapters Zetti please update again soon Quote
Inactive User Posted February 1, 2012 Report Posted February 1, 2012 Great chapter, Zetti Liked the talk between April and Ruby Update soon please xx Quote
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