Confusion (by Zetti) - comments

[Inactive User]

Great chapter. And I like the twist you had written about Ruby. Wonder what will happen next in five years... More soon please xx

[Red Ranger 1]

Woah!Bianca isn't going to tell Heath she's pregnant?And Ruby's being pimped out by her father?Was not expecting any of that, really curious to know how they end up.

[mizziette]

Grr at Grant, exploiting Ruby like that! I have a feeling Heath's going to be a little upset when/if he finds out about the baby. Can't wait to see what happens in 5 years. This is a very interesting take.

[pembie]

Very good and interesting chapter.

Shame that Bianca isn't going to tell Heath about the baby.

Big Shock with the Ruby stuition. Good job that guy was nice enough not to do anything.

Look forward to the next chapter with the whole 5 year jump thing.

[Inactive User]

Great chapter. Whoa Ruby had not spoken to her Mum for a long time! Wonder how Charlie is going to react when she hears Ruby's voice for the first time after 6 years. More soon please xx

[pembie]

Another brilliant chapter.

I'm with Heath on this one Bianca shouldn't of kept him in the dark about his kids for so long. So I can see where his angers coming from. Not too sure about the two options he came her through.

Quite ironic Ruby dating a cop what with Charlie also being one.

[mizziette]

Glad everything's coming together again. I thougth heath could've handled that better; surely they could work it out without an all or nothing ultimatum. I'm looking forward to a Charlie and Ruby reunion. And meeting the twins.

[Red Ranger 1]

Good that Ruby got away from her father but she's taken a long time to get in touch with Charlie.Heath's right to be upset with Bianca but trying to force her to marry him isn't the right way to deal with it. Looking forward to more!

[JosieTash]

Three REALLY ACE updates, especially …..

 Brax glared at him ‘She is one of the best thing to happen to you, don’t mess it up’

 Casey felt something wet on his chest and then cursed under his breath as he realised she was crying.

 ‘It is really goodbye isn’t it?’ Casey asked

‘I think it is’ she said with a sad experession.

‘Lets just sleep, we can do this tomorrow’ he said holding onto his tears, there would be plenty of time for that’

 ‘Of course you are, its not every day you find out you are pregnant’

‘True, but I am not exactly dealing with it right’ she argued

Charlie shot her a bemused look ‘Is there a book that tells you exactly how to behave when you find out?’

Bianca looked at her ‘Overreacting?’

‘No, but you need to remember, it’s a big thing to deal with.’

‘So do I tell him?’

‘He’s the father’ she simply stated.

‘So yes essentially?’

 She nodded realising she had to talk to Heath; she had no right to deprive him of his child. He might not even harbour any desire to have any involvement, which if she was perfectly honest with her actually scared her.

 It had been two weeks since Bianca realised she was pregnant and she had fast come to the conclusion that she couldn’t tell Heath.

He was too busy with his own life and she didn’t want to pause it for a baby. She wanted the baby but she knew staying in Summer Bay with a child was not what she wanted to do when the father didn’t even know.

 April sighed ‘You really have to go?’

‘April. I need this, I need to go’

April sighed ‘You and Ruby, who else do I have?’

‘Me’ Charlie said and April smiled at her ‘Thanks’

‘I will be back just I need this, and I really really do need this’

‘Okay I get it’

Bianca smiled ‘Thanks sis’

 ‘Ready?’ Ruby heard as she prepared to go to the hotel as an escort for the first time. She couldn’t even believe that she was doing this but she needed the money and Charlie couldn’t know why.

No one could know the reason she was actually in London. It wasn’t fair to worry them or to make them feel anxious.

‘Ready as I ever will be’ she replied as she looked at her reflection; someone she didn’t even recognise

She hated the way she looked and she had wished that her father hadn’t put her in this position. How could he?

She thought as her anger bubbled over the top of her head but she had to do it, Grant would hurt Casey, and Charlie and every single person that she cared about. Unfortunately this was her only option;

 ‘Ruby Bledcoe’ she shuddered inwardly when she said it but she had to appease Grant. She had no choice,

 ‘Nervous?’

‘First time’

‘Ah.’ He leant down to her lips and whispered ‘I will be gentle’

‘Not first time having you know, but first client’ she clarified

 ‘I can’t do this’ she admitted as tears fell.

‘Hey, it’s okay’

‘No its not’ she said as the tears fell thick and fast ‘My father is going to kill me’

‘Is he?’ he asked as he led her to the bed and sat her down and kneeled down so that he was at eye contact level.

‘Yes. He said I had to do what you wanted and if you were upset then I would be in trouble’ she sobbed as she struggled to regain control of her emotions.

She felt so alone and scared. There was no way out of this, she would have to do whatever this man wanted, she didn’t even know his first name just that she was expected to sleep with him.

‘Your father told you, you had to what I said right?’ he asked her and she nodded. ‘Well you look shattered, so why don’t you get in the bed and sleep, when your father asks, I will be here to ell him that you did whatever I asked.’

She rubbed her eyes but tears still fell. Her face was in shock ‘Why would you do that for me?’

‘Because I don’t believe in exploiting people’

‘But you sleep with people and pay for it’

‘Yes, I do, but I am human, I don’t always make the right decisions but I do my best’

 Ruby watched as the world went by, she hadn’t been in summer bay for nearly 6 years now and she missed it, she really missed it but she was happy.

Ryan loved her, she had a baby girl that she adored and the world had been good to her. The biggest surprise of her time in London had to be when Ryan turned out to be an undercover cop who was working to bring down her father.

She had to testify but her father got 12 years for prostituting women, she was not that shocked to realise that her father was the leader of a prostitution ring that spanned the entire region of London.

 ‘You know what you need to say, I cant do it for you’ Ryan said gently brushing away her hair and her tears. ‘I am here for you but you know you need to do this’

 Bianca’s back’ Casey said as he walked into the room closely followed by April. It had shocked a lot of people when Casey and April announced they were dating, but it had been two years and well they were happy with each other.

 ‘I didn’t think you would embrace it’ she admitted

 ‘Yes marriage or I go for full custody, and I promise you I will win’

[pembie]

I think this chapter was very good, as it showed Heath's caring side which he keeps hidden away most of the time. I thought it was very cute with him playing with Max and Lola on the beach. Glad he changed his mind with the marriage thing to try and see the kids, hopefully he will grow closer with Bianca too. They could become a cute little family.

Wasn't epecting Brax to ask Charlie to marry him at the end.