Inactive User Posted June 25, 2012 Report Posted June 25, 2012 Welcome back, ScreamingQueen2006! Great chapter. Liked it so far. Update soon please xx Quote
pembie Posted June 26, 2012 Author Report Posted June 26, 2012 (edited) I wonder if it was Heath who caused Duncan's accident. Hmmmmmmmmmmm I don't think it was but we will see. Well Matthew's wooing of Annie didn't really go to plan 1st with the bugs biting him, and then with the boat. Should of made sure it was tightly tied down. Maybe they should of gone to the movies like Xavier and Ruby. Amusing chapter. Edited June 26, 2012 by pembie Quote
Inactive User Posted June 26, 2012 Report Posted June 26, 2012 Great chapter. Update soon please xx Quote
pembie Posted June 27, 2012 Author Report Posted June 27, 2012 Oh Nicole what are you like? Well with Matt back with Annie I would happily be willing to take take Nicole off his hands. I was abit worried that something was going to happen to Melody there at the end but phew it was only Duncan. But then again he may be a danger. Quote
pembie Posted June 27, 2012 Author Report Posted June 27, 2012 Well what a jerk Duncan is Melody should report it so he doesn't get away with what he did to her. Looks like Martha's about to have the baby yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay. Update soon. Quote
pembie Posted June 28, 2012 Author Report Posted June 28, 2012 (edited) Ok so I should really be asleep now but I just had to read this before I went to bed. It's that cool you see. Cute name for Martha's baby Amelia. I wonder how things will work out with Martha and Brax now that will be interesting. I liked Matt punching Duncan he needs taking down a peg or two. I so wanted Annie to throw milkshake at him too. Whoa at the end there I really thought Nicole was going to be pregnant for a sec. I guess the test could of got it wrong hmmmm. No I'm still wondering who S could be. Does this person's name start with S? If so I can only think of two people and their soooo random. Sasha and Colleen as in Mrs Smart but those guesses are just so ridiculous Edited June 28, 2012 by pembie Quote
Inactive User Posted June 28, 2012 Report Posted June 28, 2012 Had been reading the last two chapters Well done. Can't believe what Duncan did to Melody-he's such a jerk! Liked the name for Martha's baby girl I wonder how long she and Brax are going to keep up with the secret that he's the father... Update soon please xx Quote
pembie Posted June 29, 2012 Author Report Posted June 29, 2012 (edited) Oh my Matt just can't make his mind up between Annie and Nicole. Looks like it's over for him and Annie though. Duncan really is a creep putting those pictures of Nic and Matt everywhere. I hope Dex and Adrian stay in touch. Well I really didn't think S would be Sarah Lewis Very shocking ending with you killing Charile off didn't expect you to do that I thought I put that as a spoiler for the other readers. Really Enjoyed this story it's been great. Your a awesome writer and for your first big writing project you should be very proud, you had me hooked. I have been whacking my brain trying to work out the S woman Look forward to the stories you have coming up soon. Look forward to the sequel of this story too. Edited June 29, 2012 by pembie Quote
Inactive User Posted June 29, 2012 Report Posted June 29, 2012 Great chapter Whoa at the ending! More soon please xx Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted September 22, 2012 Report Posted September 22, 2012 Stumbled across this and spent the past few days reading it.It's great!I love the mix of old and new characters in it, especially that you had Dex with Adrian.Try and read the sequel some time. Quote
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