MatildaHunterFan Posted March 14, 2012 Report Posted March 14, 2012 Such a great chapter, I feel kinda sucked into this whole story. I LOVE your style of writing. Quote
Jen Posted March 17, 2012 Report Posted March 17, 2012 Red Ranger - thank you. The Dex/Indi relationship is one of my favourites; what with the way she teases him and he constantly rolls his eyes behind her back and they seem to have nothing in common, and yet when things get tough they will defend each other and Indi feels that big sister protectiveness. Zetti - The show has actually been doing a good job at portraying the Walker's in recent episodes, so I'm pretty stoked. Dex makes me smile too. That is when I'm not torturing him physically or emotionally for my own (and your) enjoyment. pembie - Dex is definitely caught in the middle and feels this weird pull towards both of them for completely different reasons. The "River Boys thing" definitely comes back into play. elikell - Thank you for reading and commenting. JosieTash - I torture Dex because I care. That's normal, right? MatildaHunterFan - That's what it felt like when I was writing it. Dex and Casey and their complicated relationship sucked me in and before I knew it I have 17000 words. Oops! Thank you so much for reading and enjoying. The penultimate part is coming up. Quote
mizziette Posted March 17, 2012 Report Posted March 17, 2012 It's really fitting that Casey sort of got a do over to stand up for Dex the second time around. Loved the little role reversal there between the two at the end. Brilliant as always. Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted March 17, 2012 Report Posted March 17, 2012 Oh gosh.Really hoping Casey's all right because if he's not and there's only one chapter left it's not looking good...Love that he stood up for Dex, looking forward to seeing how it turns out. Quote
pembie Posted March 18, 2012 Report Posted March 18, 2012 Man what a jerk Heath was. I can't believe he beat his own brother up and just left him there. Poor Casey But very clever having Casey and Dex's roles reversed. Hope Casey is going to be ok. But with only one chapter to go it's not looking good. I'm hoping Dex and Casey confess their love for each other. Good Chapter Quote
Miranda Posted March 18, 2012 Report Posted March 18, 2012 Argh Jen! You do like to torture us! Heath is a right idiot. I hope in the real series he's more open minded now Quote
Zetti Posted March 18, 2012 Report Posted March 18, 2012 Okay.. I have to admit.. I want Casey to pay for hurting Dex. I dont think this story will work unless Casey atones and to be honest, defending Dex against Heath is noble but he is not going to be able to do it alone so I was pretty much screaming at the screen (whilst scaring the hell out of my kitten) for Casey to not try and attack Heath, how on earth is he going to be able to do that? I actually don't really feel for Casey but I do feel sorry for Dex, talk about role reversal.. I do hope Casey is okay... Looking forward to more.. even if its the last part.. (please tell me you are writing more stories? Pleease!! Quote
Jen Posted March 24, 2012 Report Posted March 24, 2012 mizziette - The role reversal is something I really like writing. It was also something I felt sort of necessary in the arc of Dex's story. Red Ranger - Thanks for reading. Casey's fate will soon be revealed. pembie - Heath is always a jerk in my stories. He's sort of become by go to villain. Thank you for reading. Miranda - I aim to please and provide all the angst . Zetti - Okay, here goes. I see what you are saying but I feel Casey thinks he's respoible but he didn't actually hurt Dex, not in that way. So Casey wants to make it up to Dex, show him that what he's been told and feels is real, but he's not necessarily in the wrong in this situation. Casey doesn't know how to fix things - relationships. The only example he's had are he's brothers who fight violence with violence. That's all Casey thinks he's got to be able to prove himself. I don't do neat and tidy endings, so I hope you're okay with the last part. Now I'm really nervous. Ah! Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted March 24, 2012 Report Posted March 24, 2012 Hmm.Okay, I'm not really sure what to make of that, you were certainly right about it not being nice and neat.I was disappointed Xavier and April broke up although I guess it was on the cards and the suggestion that she and Dex have ended up together...I know there've been hints of feelings, especially on her side, throughout the fiction but it felt like a bit of a plot swerve.Maybe I'm being hypercritical there but it feels like the whole Dex/Casey thing is almost abandoned at the end.At least Casey's all right and seems to be happier now.Sorry if that sounds harsh, it just felt like the ending didn't really fit the story, but it's been an enjoyable read as always and thank you for sharing. Quote
pembie Posted March 24, 2012 Report Posted March 24, 2012 I have to admit too I am a little dispointed too. but I enjoyed reading the chapter all the same I think it's ashame April got with Dex. I really thought agaisnt all the odds that Dex and Casey were going to end up together I think they should of just bitten the bullet and gone for it. I feel Dex might of just settled for the safest option here with April. Maybe because he was afraid of the baggage Casey would bring him. but saying all that I have really enjoyed reading this I think it has been one of my favs fics Quote
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