pembie Posted May 3, 2012 Report Posted May 3, 2012 Whoa that was very tense that flashback of the fire and everyone dying sounded awful.That was very sad with Sasha and Xavier. Well done. look forward to more.
Red Ranger 1 Posted May 4, 2012 Report Posted May 4, 2012 Oh gosh.That was really tense and emotional, especially since we know that they didn't make it.Looking forward to seeing where this goes!
Inactive User Posted May 4, 2012 Report Posted May 4, 2012 Whoa such a tense and amazing but gripping chapter!! So sad about Xavier and Sasha. Looking forwards to read more of this soon
ScreamingQueen2006 Posted May 4, 2012 Report Posted May 4, 2012 Oh my gosh poor Xavier, never like to see him upset but just wow so emotional. I like the way you used flashbacks in this chapter. Good update. Look forward to more.
CharlieandBrax4Ever Posted May 4, 2012 Report Posted May 4, 2012 Think I may have an idea of who the culprit is….
LauraPhilly!! Posted May 4, 2012 Report Posted May 4, 2012 Think I may have an idea of who the culprit is…. I'll be amazed if you have !
pembie Posted May 5, 2012 Report Posted May 5, 2012 Think I may have an idea of who the culprit is…. Really I still have no clue
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