Inactive User Posted September 2, 2012 Report Posted September 2, 2012 Great chapter Update soon please xx Quote
beebee Posted September 2, 2012 Report Posted September 2, 2012 Great writing! ... BUT as a massive Chax fan the end to this chapter made me want to vomit! I'm reading this on my phone & was tempted to throw it across the room !! You sure know how to get us in ... I get so cut cause I think it's real life lol Please please update soon x Quote
CharlieAndBraxLover Posted September 2, 2012 Report Posted September 2, 2012 Chax at the start was so heavy! I'm sure brax is gonna hate himself when he finds out about grant. Loved how sweet romeo is with ruby too. And the ending, i'm wondering if theres kind of an ulterior motive with charlie kissing him, to see if she still loves him/ if it feels like the right thing to do, or if her feelings for brax are stronger. More soon xxxx Quote
Spotd1 Posted September 2, 2012 Report Posted September 2, 2012 Great writing once again Danni! I really hope she pulls back and says she feels nothing...if anything else happens I will be devastated..UNLESS it makes her see sense?! Please let her see sense! Looking forward to the next update! Xx Quote
beebee Posted September 2, 2012 Report Posted September 2, 2012 Good chapter! So now Charlie has kissed Angelo & it felt "familiar & she liked it" ... She now has to kiss Brax lol & feel the passion & for it to be out of this world lol Please update again soon x Quote
Inactive User Posted September 2, 2012 Report Posted September 2, 2012 Awesome chapter, Danni Update soon please xx Quote
Spotd1 Posted September 2, 2012 Report Posted September 2, 2012 Phew! Thank goodness it was just a kiss..it can't have been that good if she is still none the wiser! Aww it's so cute that Connor loves 'Darryl' and that he knows he gets whatever he wants from him haha smart kid! No pressure but Charlie, Brax and Connor would make one cute little family! Please update soon! Xx Quote
Freakie42 Posted September 3, 2012 Report Posted September 3, 2012 Great updates! Looking forward to the next one Quote
Sabrina Posted September 6, 2012 Report Posted September 6, 2012 Chapter 51 - Charlie kissed Angelo?! Chapter 52 - I love how Connor gets whatever he wants from Brax. Chapter 53 - I felt so sorry for Connor. I'm glad Charlie was able to cheer him up at the end. Looking forward to the next chapter. Quote
--HAA Posted September 6, 2012 Report Posted September 6, 2012 Aww, that chapter made me get teary! Hmm, I wonder what's going to happen in the future for Angelo and Charlie? If they'll get back together or not? I found the end bit with Charlie and Connor so sweet, it was beautiful they way they talked about Angelo. I love how well you write, I could actually picture it in my head as a scene on home and away. I loved this chapter, it was so cute/sad at the same time. ' Quote
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