May to September (by Red Ranger 1) - comments

[Danni02]

Good start. Interested to see where this goes.

[Inactive User]

Great chapter. Interesting start. Looking forwards to where you are taking this. Update soon

[pembie]

Good start interested to see where you take this.I liked Dex saying He wasn't able to help but then stopping in mid sentence as soon as Leah mentioned money.

[Miranda]

This looks interesting Red. I admire your commitment to H&A fanfic, well done that man

[Zetti]

I am very intrigued to see how you start and progress with this story, looks like one of my favourite stories already and its barely started.

Keep it up Red.

[Jen]

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“Well, some people call me pretty smart.Others call me loser geek or socially inept.”

Yes! Someone else is writing Dex-centric fanfic and it's sort of awesome so far even though it's only the first chapter.

[MatildaHunterFan]

Great beginning Red! I agree with Jen, I love Dex-fanfics. Interesting start, well-written, great!

[Inactive User]

Awesome chapter

Liked the interaction between Dexter and VJ

More soon please xx

[Jen]

Your Dexter is wonderful with his many pop culture references and obscure yet endearing way of interacting with others. Can't wait to see how his relationship with VJ, and to a lesser extent, Leah, develops.

[pembie]

Ah so Geography's just like the sims I feel I have learnt something too.

Liked Dex's chat with Leah at the end there. Some very good lines.