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Thanks for the comments guys I have sent the next chapter to Bec! hopefully it will be up soon. sorry if you thought this was an update.

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Thanks for the comments everyone here is the next chapter :)

The bits in red are the one's Bec corrected

Chapter 3

Sasha was really excited about going to One Direction concert she knew Xavier was really angry that she was forcing him to go but she didn't care because it was One Direction, and she was going..

Xavier wanted to run himself over with his own car being forced to go to the One Direction concert, he was in such a hurry he nearly ran into Romeo who almost bowled him over.

“Hey watch out” Romeo said quite frustrated that Xavier wasn't watching where he was going. Xavier looked up.

“Oh sorry Romeo” Xavier responded

“Are you ok?” Romeo asked as he could see Xavier didn't look very happy, not happy at all.

“No” Xavier responded

“Oh what’s wrong?” Romeo asked

“Sasha is dragging me to a One Direction Concert” Xavier responded in a huff.

Romeo spat his coffee out and started laughing.

“That’s right laugh at me going to a chick concert” Xavier said he walked off.

Romeo was still laughing when Indi appeared beside him, looking at him like he'd gone crazy or something.

“Why are you laughing?” Indi asked

“Your sister is taking Xav to a One Direction concert” Romeo responded.

Indi started laughing.

Dex walked up to his sister and Romeo, waved to Romeo and Indi then he headed towards them.

“What’s so funny?” Dex asked

“Sash taking Xav to a One Direction Concert” Indi responded

Dex started laughing.

Xavier just got home and he slammed the front door.

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That made me smile with everybody laughing at Xavier. I wonder if he will find a way to get out of going to the concert. :D

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Thanks for the comments Red and Steve :)

Here is the next chapter the bit's in red are what Bec (matticus01) has corrected.

Chapter 4

Xavier went right past Jett and the TV straight to his room.

He booted up his laptop and searched One Direction. Oh how he still wanted to run himself over.

Xavier clicked on a YouTube video and after the first 4 minutes of the song he pressed stop, he hated them already but if he bailed on Sasha who would she take to the concert?

Xavier was sure he could endure pain for his lovely girlfriend Sasha for one night. Even if it was the worst band ever.

Xavier shut down his computer and walked out of his room to join Jett in the family room.

“What are you watching?” Xavier asked

Jett looked up “Nothing just a boring show on discovery channel” he responded

“Hmm time to see what else is on” Xavier said

At the walker’s house.

Sasha was started to get really obsessed about the concert it was all she ever talked about it Sid and her siblings we’re getting sick of hearing about it over and over again.

Sasha decided now that her dear family had left her alone she would watch one of her one direction DVD”s.

Xavier and Jett had found something even more boring than before on TV so boring it put them to sleep.

Jett was snoring.

Gina and John tiptoed past them maybe now they could go on a romantic date.

Nobody moved.

Jett was still snoring, next to him Xavier started snoring softly.

Xavier was having a bad dream that he had to go to a One Direction concert but it wasn’t really a dream.

Jett was dreaming about his dream girlfriend.

Gina and John had successfully made it out of the house.

Back at the walker’s Sasha had fallen asleep in front of the TV with the One Direction DVD still played.

Dex had just gotten home he tiptoed past Sasha and quietly turned the DVD off.

Back at the Austin’s Gina and John had gone to their romantic dinner and to their surprise the boys we’re still sleeping and snoring away when they got home.

Xavier was still snoring ever so softly and Jett was truly snoring.

Back at the Walker’s Sasha was still sleeping.

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