pembie Posted January 30, 2013 Report Posted January 30, 2013 Hopefully the Jacksons can make a life for themselves in Summer Bay. But if that wreath is anything to go by sounds like their past is trying it's best to catch up with them. So VJ is scared of planes, was he in a plane crash I wonder? Look Forward to more
riverboi69 Posted January 30, 2013 Report Posted January 30, 2013 Irene shut the door and turned around and saw glass on the floor,... she went over to pick up what was left of a photo frame and shook off the broken glass... as she did there was a knock on the back door and she jumped out of her skin. She went to open the door and there was a delivery man stood there. "Mrs Irene Roberts?" He asked . "Yes?" Irene replied.... " Can you sign here please?" He said and thrust a clipboard in her hand and a pen. "Erm...." Irene replied. "What am I signing for dahl?" "I have this for you" the delivery guy replied as he gave her an envelope with her name and address on it. Irene looked at the envelope...she was puzzled. "Thanks Mrs Roberts.....oh and enjoy!" The delivery guy said with a smile as he left. Irene walked into the lounge with the envelope and started to open it, as she did two tickets fell out onto the floor.. "what the....." irene said as she picked them up off the floor. She turned the tickets over to see they were made out in her name.... As she looked at them, Bianca entered through the front doors. "Hey Irene.,...You would not believe the day I've had.... then some kid turns up at school ...going on about someone called ....Shaun... I think....anyway....I am dying for a shower ..." She stood and looked at Irene. "Irene?" "Oh sorry dahl...." Irene said as she looked at Bianca. "What are those?" Bianca asked quizzingley. "Tickets,... they just arrived...." Irene said. "You never said you were off traveling.." Bianca said. "Anywhere nice?" "Paris!" Irene said , smiling as she did. Jett arrived home and put his bag on the bed in his room, he closed the door and then searched in his pocket. He took out the watch he had found on the beach and looked at it, It was all dirty and the glass was broken but he knew it was special. He then heard a noise from outside. "Jett, is that you?" John said from the kitchen of there home. "Yeah!" Jett replied as he looked around, he put the watch behind a plant pot on the window sill and then opened the door. "Good day ?" John asked him as he walked into the lounge area "Pretty boring to be honest" He said as he went to the fridge and opened it. " Oh Maz brought me some food .... " " Listen...If you need to talk .... " John said. " I'm here,.,,,, that's all ok?" "Thanks Dad, but I'm kool!" He said as he poured a glass of juice. "I have to go drop something off at the surf club so you gunna be ok on your own?" John said. "Sure thing....I've erm....got homework ..." He said and with that disapeared back into his room.
pembie Posted January 31, 2013 Report Posted January 31, 2013 Oh nice Irene has two tickets to Paris lucky her Update soon
riverboi69 Posted February 2, 2013 Report Posted February 2, 2013 Morag was walking along the jetty towards where Alf was stood watching the fishermen and surfers out in the bay... "So...this is where you are hiding Alfred!" she said as she reached his side. "I just needed some space sis" Alf Replied. "That a crime now is it?" "Marilyn tells me someone's interested in buying the old store?" Morag asked. "Yeah, a new bloke in town apparently, strewth Morag.... Do you remember Dad's face when I told him I'd forked out money for that place?" Alf said with a smile. "I remember you been so proud...It was all you talked about for weeks" Morag replied. " Celia used to run it for me when I was away ... and then Marilyn helped out..." Alf remembered. "i'm not sure help is the right word Alfred...." Morag said "No, give that girl her due's Morag......She worked hard, the store helped make her what she is today!" Alf said "Oh realy Alfred...."Morag snapped "We both know this isn't about Marilyn, or some store..." "Then strewth Sis....Why not just say it? ... You don't normaly hold back!" Alf said as he began too walk back up the pier. " That women came round earlier..." Morag said as she followed. "By that women I guess you mean Jasmyn?" Alf replied "And yet again I was left to fight your corner.." Morag said "Seen as though you are too soft with the women!" " She has just lost her Son Sis!" Alf said as he stopped and turned too her. " Oh Alfred wake up!" Morag hissed at him " What happened, happened! You need to get over it, and you need to let Jasmyn leave...before she makes a fool out of you again, because this time Alfred I will not just stand around and let her! Understood!! Dylan knocked on the door of the Stewarts house at the caravan park and stood and waited....No one answered and as he knocked he realised the door was not locked.....after looking around for a second he opened the door .... "Hello?" he shouted out but got no reply.... He took a few steps inside and looked around, at the kitchen...at the lounge area then went towards the doors leading upstairs.... In his head flashed a mental picture of a wall filled with framed photo's ....photo's of happy faces, family snaps ..... "Can I help you?" A voice asked from behind him. " Oh hi...." Dylan replied as he turned around to see Marilyn stood there.."I knocked but ...." "OH ...I had some washing too bring in ...." Marilyn said nervousley.. "Are you here too see Maddie?" "Maddie?...erm no ...." Dylan said , a bit unsure now whether all this was worth it, " Just she said she was going out with a new friend tonight, to the surf carnival" Marilyn said. " At the surf club right?" Dylan asked. "Well, yes...." Marilyn replied...." That's where the surf carnival's normaly held" "In that case ..." Dylan said as he started to make his way to the door.. " Tell her I'll be here for her at 25 past seven." "OK .......Bye" Marilyn said as she stood at the door .... Dylan made his way down the path past a few tree's that lead to the caravan park when he noticed something that caught his eye in the undergrowth.... there was a few big rocks between the tree's and what looked like the bumper off a car....It was rusty but Dylan could still make out that it was pink.... "Oh my god...." He said out loud and ran back to the caravan. As he shut the caravan door behind him he got out a small box and opened it, it had in it some letters and photo's ....He raked through it and found one of two girls standing next to a pink car.... "Another piece of the jigsaw mum!" At the Jackson house, Eve had gone for a lie down in her room. As she slept a gloved hand put a half filled wine glass on a little bedside cabinet next to the bed, and then very slowely opened the window in the room. They then walked out of the room and closed the door and locked it with a key!!
pembie Posted February 4, 2013 Report Posted February 4, 2013 Interesting stuff with the bumper of the pink car, and Dylan having a photo of it. Abit confused at the end with Eve, has that person who left the wine in her room drugged her or something? Look forward to next chapter.
riverboi69 Posted February 5, 2013 Report Posted February 5, 2013 As the barman at Angelo's poured out a whisky, Jasmyn looked at the letter she had recieved that morning. She put it in her pocket as she saw Leah enter. Leah saw her and was soon stood next to where she was sat at the bar, "Is that wise?" Leah asked. "I've got my reasons Leah!" Jasmyn replied. "I wasn't prying...just that...." Leah said with concern. " Then you're about the only person in this ....place who isn't!" She said as she payed for her drink. " Why don't we go back to your flat and talk?" Leah asked. "My flat?" Jasmyn hissed.. " The place feels so small, and ....I got this today!" with those words she handed Leah the letter. "Jasmyn, go show this to Morag...." Leah said as she read the letter. "Her!" Jasmyn laughed as she took a drink out of the glass "She is the worst one of them all, lookin' down her nose at me all the time....she hates me!" "No she doesn't!" Leah said. " She does......and they are after the money... except I don't have it anymore Leah....." Jasmyn said. " Look." Leah said, "I could lend you some .... the Diner's doing ok at the moment..." "Oh god no Leah!" Jasmyn replied " I couldn't ....." "You haven't got many options Jasmyn, so I think you can accept it as a loan!" Leah said..."I'll ring the bank in the morning." "Thank you leah!" Jasmyn gave Leah a big hug..." You're such a good freind to me!" she said as she smiled secretly too herself... Dylan was busy ironing a shirt in the caravan when their was a knock on the door, he put the iron on the table and went too open the door. Marilyn was stood holding a casserole dish. "Oh hi, I erm made you some food" She said. "Erm.....thanks" Dylan said " I was just gettin' ready to come and meet Maddie" " Good!" Marilyn said" She is sooo excited about tonight, You know between you and me, she has had a hard time lately, and well, she loves too be made a fuss of.... well, most girls do....oh listen to me chattering on" She put casserole on the table and turned to go..as she did she knocked a paper that was laying on the seat of the caravan. It fell to the floor. "Oh sorry, I'm .....I'm sooo clumsey" She said as she bent down to pick up the paper. "It's ok....I ......" Dylan said panicking as he went to grab the paper from her hands, she saw the look of panic in his eyes.."I've got it thanks!" "Right well.....I'll erm go and make sure Maddy's ready....." Marilyn said as she felt nervous... "Thanks Marilyn....." Dylan said ..."I'll look after her ....tonight!" Ben shut the front door and noticed the kitchen door was open, He went in and looked around. "Darlin'?" he called out, He then went to the hallway and shouted upstairs...."Eve? are you up there??" he said..There was no reply so he hung up his coat and started to go up the stairs when he noticed the answer phone was flashing. He went to press the button and heard the message "Hi Dad, It's me....Theo....listen, we won't be hittin' the new pad till next week ....Jacko is gettin' married so I'm gunna stay around the city for a few more days.... Hope the new place is lookin' good, Say hi to Eve and I'll see you soon ok....Oh and Nat sends hugs to Pops" Ben smiled as the message finished....He went upstairs and opened the door to the bedroom....He saw Eve asleep so krept in and kissed her forehead, She started to wake up as he smiled at her. "Oh darling you;re ....." She said as she looked around, a bit dazed " What time is it?" "Ten past four darling" Ben replied " I must get some food ready, Nat will be hungry by now" Eve said as she got up out of bed and headed for the door. "Woooooh! Darling...." Ben said goin after her. "Nat's in the City still...." "No darling he is playing in his room....Theo brought him over earlier....." Eve said. " Theo?" Ben said, looking puzzled.... "He wanted to surprise you darling so don't say I told you " eve said as she went back into the bedroom and picked up a jumper. " darling...I...." Ben said as he followed her into the bedroom, it was then he noticed the large glass of wine on the bedside table "He's playing in his room Ben! " Eve said as she walked down the corridor to a door which she opened..."Look!" They both entered a room, an empty room in which only packing boxes and a single kids bed was.... "I don't ....... I saw him Ben!" Eve said as she turned to look at her husband.,.."He ...He was here with Theo Ben,,,,He was!"
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