Spotd1 Posted June 30, 2013 Report Posted June 30, 2013 Great chapter Danni! Glad Ruby realises she's made a mistake..just hope she tries to make it up to Charlie and Xav, somehow! Xavier is hurting..feel so sorry for him! Looking forward to seeing how Ruby reacts to Brax and Charlie! Xx Quote
Freakie42 Posted June 30, 2013 Report Posted June 30, 2013 Great couple of chapters! I really liked Bianca telling Brax not to give up on Charlie. I hope she forgives Ruby soon, I don't think she needs Charlie acting that way on top of everything else. Too bad Casey isn't in the bay, if I remember correctly Looking forward to the next chapter! Quote
homeandaway13 Posted June 30, 2013 Report Posted June 30, 2013 (edited) Great chapters Danni loved them. Feel so sorry for Xavier in this chapter I think a bit of space will do him and Ruby some good. Looking forward to Grace reaction when she sees Ruby back. As always can't wait for the next chapter Xx Edited July 1, 2013 by QUIET ACHIEVER SPAG Quote
pembie Posted July 1, 2013 Report Posted July 1, 2013 (edited) Very good chapter. I agree with beebee the emotions for everyone seemed so real and raw. Even though things are over between Ruby and Xavier now, I hope they will at least end up talking to one another again. Look forward to more Edited July 1, 2013 by pembie Quote
Kyle Posted July 1, 2013 Report Posted July 1, 2013 (edited) Loving this story! Anyway just thought I should say that I am terrible at commenting so yea sorry about that! Haha anyway Ruby you silly girl :/ Edited July 6, 2013 by QUIET ACHIEVER SPAG Quote
Sabrina Posted July 1, 2013 Report Posted July 1, 2013 Chapter 21 - Loved Grace calling Brax 'the lollipop man'. I can't believe Ruby cheated on Xavier. Chapter 22 - I'm glad Charlie and Brax's date went well. Chapter 23 - I'm surprised Ruby told Xavier she slept with Andy. Chapter 24 - I liked Bianca and Brax's talk. Chapter 25 - I'm glad Ruby told Charlie how she's feeling. Chapter 26 - It's good that Ruby has realised her mistake. I feel sorry for Xavier. Chapter 27 - Charlie and Brax are going on another date. Looking forward to the next chapter. Quote
Spotd1 Posted July 1, 2013 Report Posted July 1, 2013 Aww great chapter Danni LOVE that Brax and Charlie are going on another date...can't wait to see how it goes and how the conversation with Ruby goes! I am really enjoying Bianca and Charlies friendship too! Please update soon! Xx Quote
beebee Posted July 1, 2013 Report Posted July 1, 2013 Still in shock over Rubes ' comment to Bianca ... lol fingers crossed that Chax do get to go to dinner and that Ruby doesn't mess it up! XX Quote
RoRo90 Posted July 1, 2013 Report Posted July 1, 2013 I'll be saying a little prayer for Charlie for when she has that conversation with Rubes about Brax... fingers crossed I had to chuckle a little at Rubes summary to Bianca of why she was back home Great Chapter Quote
Inactive User Posted July 1, 2013 Author Report Posted July 1, 2013 Had been catching up with the last two chapters They are both great and well-written Cracked up at Ruby's explaining to Bianca why she is home, lol. Update soon xx Quote
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