Spotd1 Posted October 15, 2013 Report Posted October 15, 2013 So good to see Brax getting along with Angelos parents so well Love that Roberto and Carla want to see Isaac Aww I loved Xavier's proposal..so happy for them both Please update soon! Xx Quote
pembie Posted October 16, 2013 Report Posted October 16, 2013 Glad Ruby said yes to Xavier, and Brax's chat with Carla was sweet. Grace made me laugh being worried about Isaac's hat. Look forward to your next chapter. Quote
RoRo90 Posted October 16, 2013 Report Posted October 16, 2013 Just caught up on the last few Chapter missed so much but just not had time to read much lately Loved every chapter So glad Charlie and Brax finally got to hold Issac Awww Xavier proposing was so sweet And as always Grace was just beyond cute I really do like that Carla and Roberto are supportive of Charlie and Brax love that they all get along Felt a little sad for Brax... so obvious he would love t marry Charlie but at the same time I live how understanding he is and how he doesn't push her Looking forward to the next chapter Quote
Spotd1 Posted October 18, 2013 Report Posted October 18, 2013 Aww such a good chapter Danni Love when Charlie, Brax and grace visit Isaac..was even sweeter with Roberto and Carla there! I really like Xavier and Ruby in this fiction! You do a great job...I wonder if Charlie will say I love you anytime soon? Xx Quote
Inactive User Posted October 18, 2013 Author Report Posted October 18, 2013 Great chapter Loved it. I agree with Spotd1-you do a great job with the fanfiction And I saw your other fanfiction 'Nothing Lasts Forever' on www.fanfiction.net Quote
pembie Posted October 19, 2013 Report Posted October 19, 2013 (edited) Oh the part when Gail and Richard was there talking to Carla and Roberto was written really good, very tense and awkward for everyone. It's nice to see Xavier and Ruby so happy. Reveal hidden contents Maybe Charile and Brax could have a commitment ceremony on the same day as Xavier and Ruby's wedding. That way Charile doesn't marry Brax, as she has said she doesn't want to get married again But with the commitment ceremony idea it shows him how much she loves him Just a idea for you. Look forward to see where you will take this next On another note is Nothing Lasts Forever posted on here? Not sure I have read that story Edited October 19, 2013 by pembie Quote
beebee Posted October 19, 2013 Report Posted October 19, 2013 Beautiful update ♥praying thatIsaac is going to be Ok x Quote
Spotd1 Posted October 20, 2013 Report Posted October 20, 2013 Aww loved that Charlie explained her inability to say she loves Brax..it was a sweet moment! As much as I like Carla and Roberto..not sure how Charlie and Brax will like them living so close! Looking forward to more! Xx Quote
Inactive User Posted October 20, 2013 Author Report Posted October 20, 2013 On 20/10/2013 at 06:14, Danni02 said: Sarah I do not post on fanfiction.net so someone has taken my story and passed it off as their own! Thank you for making me aware of that, it’s not cool. You are so welcome, Danni02. Glad I told you after I saw it on fanfiction.net. I hope you told the person (who stole and posted it on fanfiction.net) off. Okay back to my review for this chapter. Liked Carla and Ruby's chat. Loved the sweet moment between Chax Update soon xx Quote
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