Inactive User Posted May 23, 2013 Report Posted May 23, 2013 Welcome back, Danni! *runs to hug Danni welcoming her back warmly* Great start to this fanfiction. More soon please xx Quote
RoRo90 Posted May 23, 2013 Report Posted May 23, 2013 Has JarlieFanEver put it... Welcome back Danni Loved this first chapter and love how it is obviously so different from all our other fics. Great start to what I'm sure will be a great fic cant wait for the next chapter already Quote
Freakie42 Posted May 23, 2013 Report Posted May 23, 2013 (edited) So happy you're back with a new amazing story! Edited May 23, 2013 by Freakie42 Quote
homeandaway13 Posted May 23, 2013 Report Posted May 23, 2013 Welcome back Danni Great start and I can't wait to read more xx Quote
caroline77 Posted May 23, 2013 Report Posted May 23, 2013 Welcome back Danni. That was a great start to what looks like is going to be an interesting story. Not too sure about Brax seeing Natalie but I will wait and see what happens. I look forward to seeing what happens next. Quote
Inactive User Posted May 24, 2013 Author Report Posted May 24, 2013 Great chapter Update soon xx Quote
homeandaway13 Posted May 25, 2013 Report Posted May 25, 2013 Great chapter Danni. I hope Charlie tells brax how she feels soon hopefully before his date with Natalie xxx Quote
Inactive User Posted May 25, 2013 Author Report Posted May 25, 2013 (edited) Great chapter Really enjoying this fanfiction so far Liked the talk between Charlie and Bianca, and of course the talk between Ruby and April. Felt bad for Charlie. Hoping she will tell Brax how she feels soon Update soon xx Edited May 25, 2013 by ~JarlieFanEver~ Quote
beebee Posted May 25, 2013 Report Posted May 25, 2013 YAY you're back!! Sorry I have just caught up on your chapters Really hope that Charlie plucks up the courage to tell Brax how she feels before it's top late you don't know how excited I was to see that you were back x Quote
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