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The first bit was hot! :lol: I don't think Roman will forget that in a hurry!

Roman really is a sentimental man. I loved how her sister is gonna be closer to their baby. A reunion of sorts. I have to admit I cried at the necklace part. So perfect and fitting.

The ending just makes me giggle. I love how Ella was trying to be sneaky just like Lily. :wink:

The pouting was perfect as well. I can just imagine Ella pouting :lol:

Amazing chapter :) so looking forward to more! :D

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The graveyard scene with Daisy was very moving, nice touch with the necklace. It's sad that Ella never knew about Daisy But at least with the necklace they will both have some part of one another. It's really sweet that she's being moved to be next to Francesca's grave.

And to end on a happeir note, I loved the very steamy I have been a bad soldier please punish me role play between Roman and Ella. WOW Ella knows how to be a very kinky minx. :wub: I also laughed at the story where Ella was busy at giving Roman well let's just say a stiff salute while in their car. :P Makes me wonder if Charile had cautioned them or had she been too impressed with Roman's stiff salute too even think too. :P

Now I think I better get my mind out of the gutter and finish off by saying I really wanted Roman to pick the locks to Ella's old house. Shame I wanted them to sneak in. :D

Very good writing had me laughing feeling sad But at the same time it was great to read.

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Brilliant Tele, how great is Roman, love seeing them so loved up, wonder if she will presuade him to pick the locks, I love this story so much, update again soon please, xxxxxxx

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A long chapter full of Rola fluff :wub:

I love how Ella told him not to remove her lipstick. That made me chuckle :lol:

Love & adore the chapter :)

Looking forward to more :D

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Wow it sounds like Roman has big plans for their home. I wonder if Ella will come around to his ideas of home improvement?

Nice to see them have a nice weekend away together.

Good Chapter.

Update again soon.

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Tele, I just loved this, I just want to keep reading and reading, Roman is really pulling out all the stops, not sure why Ella was so upset with him wanting to change the room? could read about these two forever, please update soon, Just brilliant xxxxxxxx

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Brilliant tele, Lily in Love, priceless, just love this story so much and you capture so much in each part, I could just stay reading and reading, more soon please, love updates, xxxx

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