pembie Posted May 8, 2012 Report Posted May 8, 2012 (edited) I thought this chapter was so cleverly done. There were seaverl monments when I didn't know wheather Lilly was alive or not, like when Ella said the line. "We should go speak to them about the arrangements" I thought oh no. Another time was when Ella looked over at Lilly's bed and started to cry I thought oh no this surely is it. We are going to find out that Lilly hasn't made it. Very sneaky indeed. On a side note that cyber hankie you gave me earlier is still dry. But never the less it was at hand Edited May 8, 2012 by pembie Quote
Zetti Posted May 8, 2012 Report Posted May 8, 2012 Oh you scared me at parts then but I'm glad she's alive. Hope you update soon Quote
pollymoon Posted May 8, 2012 Report Posted May 8, 2012 2 great updates, so glad that Lily is ok, she is such a character, glad that Roman and Ella are still on track, looking forward to what will happen at the BBQ, can't wait for more, brilliant as usual. xxxxxx Quote
pembie Posted May 14, 2012 Report Posted May 14, 2012 Tut Tut Danni and Brett what a eventful BBQ that turned out to be Poor Mike Might be abit hard for Mike and Danni to recover from this but we will see. Quote
Zetti Posted May 14, 2012 Report Posted May 14, 2012 Ouch, that ending was just well not what I expected..definitely took me by surprise... Looking forward to more soon Quote
pollymoon Posted May 14, 2012 Report Posted May 14, 2012 Oh my god, I wasn't expecting that, Brett and Danni, what a brilliant update tele, please update again soon, I can't wait to see what happens now, just brilliant, xxxxxxx Quote
pembie Posted May 30, 2012 Report Posted May 30, 2012 It's good that Mike took Roman's point about DNA not only being about family to heart. I wonder though if he can really accept Jennie as his own though. I wonder what Ella will do about Roman still being her ex husband Quote
Zetti Posted May 30, 2012 Report Posted May 30, 2012 Poor Mike! I really hope he can find a way to get past the whole thing with Danni though I get the feeling that you won't make it that easy. Definitely going to have to do something about that?? Zetti likes the sound of that.. Looking forward to more Quote
pollymoon Posted May 31, 2012 Report Posted May 31, 2012 just brilliant tele, oh I love this story, hope mike and danni can work this out and i think that Roman may be ella's husband very soon if they keep going this way, update soon please xxxxxx Quote
pollymoon Posted June 11, 2012 Report Posted June 11, 2012 (edited) Loved it Tele, Lily is just brilliant, I think that Ella was right to push the girls in the pool, do them good to cool down, you are an amazing writer and I love these stories. xx Edited June 11, 2012 by QUIET ACHIEVER SPAG Quote
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