Terror Amongst the Corn (by pembie) - comments

[Red Ranger 1]

Oh man.Heath not noticing that everyone around him has turned into a zombie and being completely blasé about Roman shooting Irene and Leah:Classic.

[JosieTash]

I just loooooooooooooooooooooooove Heath - his commsnts bout the likes of Bianca AND Irene are just PRICELESS !!!!!!

WOAH !!!! that they are gonna NUKE the Bay !!!!

[Inactive User]

Great chapter. Loved it Update soon xx

[Red Ranger 1]

Best bit:Alf giving Roman whale music to calm him.Very weird, looking forward to more.

[JosieTash]

LOOOOOOOOVE that, especailly ……

“Watch it you flaming galah, I’m armed with worms and maggots and I’m not afraid to use them.”

Static from the radio blares itself down the bus as April Scott holds her hands to her ears.

“Nope this town’s dead, the radio’s dead, everything is dead. Tell me where it is again you have come back from?” the bus driver asks looking at April through his rear-view mirror.

Alf is somewhat content listening to and humming along to Marilyn’s calming whale music on Maddie’s IPod that she had lent him to help him out with the bay’s new dead like feeling of dread.

“- ZOMBIES FLAMING ZOMBIES,? YOU HAVE GOT TO BE KIDDING. ARE YOU HAVING A LAUGH? I KNOW I HAVE BEEN WORRIED BUT I THOUGHT IT WAS RABBIES OH FLAMING HELL.”

“Alf calm please, your job here is not to alert the town into a full blown panic. People are looking worried already.”

“Oh ok sorry so what is it you want me to say?” Some murmurs are now heard as April and the bus driver listen to the radio.

“NUKES FLAMING NUKES”

“No, no wrong auto cue oh dammit.”

“WELL ROMAN SO MUCH FOR NOT PANICKING THE PEOPLE WELL DONE.”

[Red Ranger 1]

Woah!Slightly surprising end.Had some good moments though with April rearranging the magnets and Annie teaching Sid to act like a zombie.

So did Alf, Heath and Roman get out or are they just radioactive atoms now?

[Inactive User]

Great chapter

Loved how Annie taught Sid to act like a zombie

Update soon xx

[JosieTash]

REALLY enjoyed that !!!! Hope it’s not the end!!!!!!!

Yeah, there’s sooooooo much to LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE here …….

• April REALLY badly having to rearrange the letters [in the middle of this zombie apocalypse]
• Sid [“Warm Bodies” style] having to master the art of being a zombie
• Annie continuing SOMEHOW to hold onto some of her humanity!!!! ……AND …..
• The various reference to Rhiannon Fish currently being in the latest OZ series of Dancing With The Stars …….[btw, she should sooooooooooooooooooo win this season. Rhiannon's been AWESOME, but Tina Arena is a VERY talented, tough “nut to crack” so to speak] !!!!!!

[Inactive User]

Great ending, Pembie I had enjoyed reading this fanfiction so far

[Red Ranger 1]

Ah!Even more surprising ending.(Couldn't they warn the rest of the town this time?!)Still, Dexter going into a trance listening to his rice krispies was great.