pembie Posted December 29, 2013 Report Posted December 29, 2013 It's cool that Bianca has had a baby girl. I had to laugh at Heath saying that he thought Bianca would be onto her fourth marriage with Zac now. His right she does move on quite quickly. Look forward to more Quote
JosieTash Posted December 29, 2013 Report Posted December 29, 2013 Lots of REALLY nice moments in there !!!! LOOOOOOOOOOVED it !!! GREAT that there were no complications with the birth !!! i especailly liked ...... Inside the delivery room, Bianca was groaning with labour pains.Leah held onto her hand, smiling sympathetically.“You went through this twice?”Bianca asked her. “With VJ and Pippa, yeah.” “Were you crazy?” Leah shrugged. Bianca gave a hollow laugh.“And have my fourth wedding in as many years? Quote
Danni02 Posted December 30, 2013 Report Posted December 30, 2013 Aww Bianca had a little girl. Here's hoping she brings her parents closer again. Little sad that Heath wasn't in the room to see his daughter being born but at least he was there right after. Looking forward to more. Quote
pembie Posted January 2, 2014 Report Posted January 2, 2014 (edited) I didn't expect this story to finish so quickly But at least everyone ended up happy in the end. I have enjoyed reading story. Good job on writing it It was much more believable than what they did on the show, with April just going back to Dex after her fling with Heath. Edited January 2, 2014 by pembie Quote
Inactive User Posted January 3, 2014 Author Report Posted January 3, 2014 Awwww not expecting this fan-fiction to be over! But I loved reading it so far! And I loved the ending Hoping you will write a sequel to this fanfiction... Quote
Danni02 Posted January 3, 2014 Report Posted January 3, 2014 I had a feeling April and Heath would stay married in the end. They've never really made sense to me and I really hoped Heath and Bianca could have worked things out, but great story all the same. Always enjoy reading your fictions and will keep a look out for furture stories. Quote
JosieTash Posted January 3, 2014 Report Posted January 3, 2014 Cooooooooooooooooooool ending !!!! Domina’s a cute name for Bianca’s bub, and LOOOOOVED the bit bout Ricky keeping Cheryl in line !!!! MANY, many thanks Red Ranger 1 …… for sharing this VERY fine !!!!! fic with us !!!!!! Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted January 9, 2014 Report Posted January 9, 2014 Thanks in no particular order to pembie, JosieTash, Jarliefan, Danni, Zetti, Merlin, RoRo and Zoe.I'm always grateful when people take a moment to comment on these fictions and let me know what they like. Hoping you will write a sequel to this fanfiction... Ah, a sequel request.It might be a while but I've got a few ideas so let's see what happens. Quote
Zetti Posted January 9, 2014 Report Posted January 9, 2014 I love reading your stories! Well done on a great story! Quote
pembie Posted January 9, 2014 Report Posted January 9, 2014 I look forward to the sequel if you choose to write one. Quote
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