Guest Posted July 15, 2014 Report Posted July 15, 2014 Oh no Kyle shows up drunk great chapter update again soon
smokinace Posted July 15, 2014 Report Posted July 15, 2014 CHAPTER 10 Ricky stood at the sink doing the dishes "Need a hand?" Kyle asked "Nah, go watch the movie with your brothers" Ricky replied "Well, you see the cook doesn't clean where I come from" Kyle said to Ricky "Yeah I'd like to go there" she replied "Nah, you actually wouldn't" he said "You should, clean up your act get to know you brothers" Ricky told him "What are you my mother" Kyle grunted "I know you saw how disappointed they were tonight" she told him "Yeah, I've always been a disappointment" Kyle told her Kyle turned and looked at his brothers "You really think I could fit in to that?" He asked her "Yeah I do" rick assured him CHAPTER 11 UP SOON
Guest Posted July 15, 2014 Report Posted July 15, 2014 I really hope Kyle gets his act together hopefully Ricky gives him the push he needs update again soon
smokinace Posted July 15, 2014 Report Posted July 15, 2014 CHAPTER 11 Kyle knocked on Brax's door "Are you sober" Brax asked walking towards the door Kyle turned to walk away "Kyle wait" Brax called "If I wanted to be judged all the time, I would've stayed in Melbourne" Kyle told Brax "What did you come around for" Brax asked "If I'm gonna stay, I need a job" Kyle told him "Wait your staying" Brax replied "We're brothers right" Kyle said "Ok then, I'll set you up at Angelo's" Brax said "That's not gonna work, unless you want all your booze gone" "Well the gym then" Brax told him "Gym, do I look like a gym junkie" Kyle asked "I dunno what else I can do, but I'll ask around" Brax told him "Thanks" Kyle replied holding his hand out Brax frowned "What ya too good to shake my hand" Kyle joked CHAPTER 12 UP SOON
Guest Posted July 15, 2014 Report Posted July 15, 2014 Glad Kyle decided to stay and glad Brax is helping Kyle get a job update again soon
Inactive User Posted July 16, 2014 Report Posted July 16, 2014 Great chapter Glad that Kyle is staying Good on Brax helping Kyle get a job
smokinace Posted July 16, 2014 Report Posted July 16, 2014 CHAPTER 12 Kyle walked towards the bait shop looking at boats Denny was working on "Denny wasn't it" he said when he saw her standing in the doorway "Casey's brother" she replied "Kyle" he told her "I remember" she said "So is the owner around" Kyle asked ""Why do you want a job" she asked "That'd be good" "I don't know if we've got any" she told him "Though you were gonna sand down those boats" Alf said "Are you the owner" Kyle asked "Yeah what can I do for you" Alf asked "How bout a job" Kyle asked "You don't look like you know a lite fishing mate" Alf replied "I know a lot about fishing actually, me and my foster dad used to go all the time" Kyle replied "Alright you got a trial, 9 am tomorrow, don't be late" Alf replied CHAPTER 13 UP SOON
Guest Posted July 16, 2014 Report Posted July 16, 2014 Glad Alf gave Kyle a trial and I wonder how Kyle will get on with Denny update again soon
smokinace Posted July 16, 2014 Report Posted July 16, 2014 CHAPTER 13 "Reporting for duty" Kyle said to Denny standing in the doorway of the bait shop Denny smiled "What do you need me to do" Kyle asked "Help me sand down a boat" Kyle followed Denny outside "So where'd you go fishing with your foster father" Denny asked "Along the Murray, all different places" Kyle replied "What age did you go into foster care" she asked "11, it was good for a while then... Well then I stuffed things up" Kyle told her "How'd your mum die" Denny asked Kyle turned around and started to walk away "Kyle" Denny called ou "Stick ya job, and go to hell" Kyle spat CHAPTER 14 UP SOON
Guest Posted July 16, 2014 Report Posted July 16, 2014 Oh no Kyle stuffed up his trial and Denny was trying to be nice update again soon
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