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christine king Posted September 7, 2014 Report Posted September 7, 2014 Chatper 5 Sophie: good morning how did you sleep? Nate; good, now it's just back to Orkney Sophie: yep it's Monday, first day of work, usually a long week Nate: back to patients Sophie: and school children Nate: it was a fun weekend though Sophie: yep, Leah and Zac are god together Nate: yes and you pushed for it Sophie: I suggested it, they did the work themselves Nate: you still helped them Sophie: so did you, you agreed to help Nate: yeah, Leah looks much happier Sophie: so it all ends well Nate: yep, 4 happy people Sophie: good, I'll see you later Sophie and Nate kiss goodbye .............................. Sophie approaches Leah in the school corridor Sophie: you ready for all these kids? Leah: bring it on, I do live my work Sophie: and hey I was thinking you loved play more Leah: hey that's a unfair assessment Sophie: calling it as I see it Leah: right we'll back to work then Sophie: yell the school won't run it self ....................,, Jett approaches Vj in the classroom Jett: hey Vj: hi Jett: how'd you go with Matt? Vj: all good, he's going to get us the acohol and we'll replace it Jett: that's greatness Vj: yes it is Jett: so have you seen Aluce yet? Vj: no I haven't Jett: when you do you going to ask her out right? Vj: yeah of course Jett: finally you'll have a girlfriend Vj: hey I've dated before Jett: yeah just not in the last year and so though Vj: yeah pretty much Jett: ok, Alice just walked in act cool Vj: I can do cool Vj goes to approach Alice Vj: hey Alice: hi Vj: the party was fun Alice: yeah, kissing you was nice Vj: it was nice for me too, just wanted to you ask you, will you go out with me? Alice: yes Vj: do you want to come over to my place after school? We can hang out Alice: will anyone else be thee Vj: nope just us Alice: then I'd love too Vj: cool The teacher walks in and hey all take their seats for the lesson ........................ Chris arrives at the farm and knocks on the door and Oscar answers Chris: hey, your sister here? Oscar: no she's not, she got called into work Chris: aww that sucks, we we're suppose to spend the day together Oscar: sorry Chris: not your fault, so what are your plans today? Oscar: was going to head to the gym for a workout then grab some lunch after Chris: would you mind if I come, we could hang out together Oscar: that's fine, I'll just get my stuff Chris: cool ............................... Spencer sees Oscar and chris cone in Spencer: hey guys which equipment are you using today? Oscar: I think the trail bikes Chris: sounds good, you know how to use them? Oscar: do you? Chris: hey I know more than the people that work here Spencer: he's right, he does Oscar: yes I do, I've done this before Spencer: alright guys, your to do a light workout, no more than a hour, 15 minutes on and then 15 minutes off, understand? Oscar and Chris: yes Spencer: good get started .................................... Vj and Alice arrive at the house after school, Vj gets some drinks out of the fidget or them Alice: no more of the hard stuff then? Vj: nope got none left, I think some of the other guys had some, I sware me andJett didn't drink half a bottle each Alice: possible, there was heaps of people there Vj: so how long have you liked me for Aluce: awhile, I didn't think you were interested Vj: I wasn't interested in dating before but now I am Alice: good for me then Vj: it is good for you isn't it Alice leans over and kisses Vj Alice: been wanting to do that all day Vj: we were in school and school policy states on public displays of attention, blah blah Alice: we could of went off grounds at lych Jett: sorry I had to spend time with Jett sinc I was ditching him after school Alice: dosen't he have a girlfriend Vj: they long distance at the moment Alice: that must be hard Vj: being so young I would think so Alice: do you have any brothers or sisters? Vj: no just me and I'm an only child, I have some step brothers and sisters though Alice: related by marriage right? Vj: yep, what about you? Alice: same actually, only child with one step brother Vj: where he live? Alice: overseas haven't sen him in 19 years Vj: you think you will again Alice: maybe one day, maybe not, you can't predict the future Vj: you learn by your mistakes of the past Alice: we're too you to have any Vj: rebellious streak here we come Alice: I thought we already started Vj: what? Alice and Vj kiss ................................. Oscar has just finished his work, he's goes to check out the work rooster and Soencer catches him Spencer: what you doing? Oscar: awe nothing Spencer: you want to see when Maddyshes working? Oscar: you caught me Spencer; we'll hurry up and check then Oscar: yep got it, thanks Chris walks over, Chris: Oscar you going to have a shower Oscar: yep just give 5 and we'll be out of here Oscar goes into the change room Chris: how's work bro? Spencer: could be better Chris; how so? Spencer: you know just stuff Chris: likes certain someone working Spencer: might be Chris: your just like a Oscar a love sick puppy Spencer: no I'm not Chris; yeah sure, you, him smdJosh who's next? Spencer: I don't need,ore competition, I need less Chris: maddy is an idiot if she dosen't pick you Spencer; I thought you didn't like us together Chris: I made a mistake getting between you too before now I think your great together Spencer: you had three years to get this, now that wee broken up to get it, not good enough Chris: your mad at me Spencer: what do you think? Chris: I'm not the one that hooked up with aAsha Spencer: technically that's a lie Chris: what you talking abut hat kiss Spencer: you kissed my girlfriend as a joke , yeah real funny Chris: I said I was sorry Soencer: yeah and I forgave you Chris: so why bring it up again? Spence: just stating the facts that brought us here, nothing more, nothing less Chris: so what are you going to do? Spencer: I don't know
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christine king Posted September 7, 2014 Report Posted September 7, 2014 Chapter 6 Maddy and Josh are at the beach playing in the water and they kiss Maddy: I've missed this Josh: me too, sorry we haven't been us for a while, it's just Andy Maddy: family's important I get that Josh: your so supportive Maddy: Andy's not the best guy but he's important to you Josh: that's really sweet Maddy: I though I was. Hot Josh: oh you are Maddy: now that's sweet The kiss again and Oscar sees Oscar: hey guys Maddy and Josh: hey Oscar: what you doing today? Josh; it's the middle of he week and schools done for the day Maddy: so time to hang our and relax Oscar: you working tonight? Maddy: yep start in an hour Oscar: I might come by after dinner Maddy: you want to keep me company, that's so sweet Josh: hey I could cone too if you want Maddy: your too much of a distraction plus you hate working out Josh: yeah in a gym but surfing and jogging keeps you fit too Maddy: you have a great body babe Josh: not that I'm trying to brag or anything Maddy: of course not, your modest Josh: no I'm cool Maddy: yeah too cool for school Josh: haha I still attend, I won't get kicked out for my attendance, maybe my grades Maddy: your grades are fine, we study Josh: yeah we sure do 'study' Maddy: yep all work no play is boring Josh: all play and no work istay Maddy: then you won't pass Josh: who failed eir exam recently? Maddy: one exam, big deal, they have extra credit for a reason Oscar: hey maddy, if you want a study parented I'm free? Maddy: I'm not sure, Josh here might get jealous Josh: no go ahead Maddy: ok, I'd love too Oscar: great, we'll I got to go, see you later Maddy and Josh: bye ............................... Denny comes into the diner and spots Casey Denny: hey Casey: hi Denny: did you have a good time the other day? Casey: yeah it was fun Denny: oh god I thought you might of felt like a third wheel Casey: no you and chris are great Denny: that's good to know Casey: maybe we could do a double date next time? Denny: yeah sure I'd really like that Casey: cool Denny: so what you doing now? Casey: waiting for breakfast Denny: I meant e day? Casey: oh did you? Never would of got that Denny: ohhsha funny Casey: I try Denny: so you got the day off, girlfriend at school, brothers? Casey: Brax and Ricky went to the city to see Heath and Bianca Denny: and you didn't go because? Casey: thought I could get some me time in but your ruining that Denny: I'm ruining your day and here I thought I was making it Casey: off you go then Denny: don't think so were hanging out Casey: I didnx't agree to that Denny: you didn't not agree Casey: good point Denny: so you up for it? Casey: depends on what it is? Denny: be my surfing teacher, I always wanted to learn Casey: you got me but sit down eat you can't surf on an empty somach Denny: ok what did you orde? Casey: eggs Denny: not a fan of bacon Casey: not today Denny: ok we'll I'm ordering bacon and eggs Casey: with toast Denny: pretty sure it comes with it Casey: does it? Must have a short memory then Denny: you may need to see the doctor Casey: cheat shot Denny: you had it coming Casey: sure I did, I think you just like getting people caught of gaurd Denny: oh you caught it it's my life's mission Casey: we'll it's not mine, mines to make every day count Denny: good for you Irene comes and takes their order Irene: what would of like? Casey: eggs on toast Denny: bacon and eggs on toast Irene: ok any drinks? Casey: Apple juice Denny: orange juice Irene; cool ok it'll be like 10 minutes Denny and Casey: thanks ....................................... Evelyn talks to Oscar class Evelyn: so how was the gym last night? Oscar: good I set up a study date with Maddy Evelyn: is that such a good idea Oscar: why wouldn't it be Evelyn: your crush for Starters Oscar: can we not talk about this Evelyn: I don't really want to talk about this either but I think we should Oscar: just once a one time thing Evelyn: 100% Oscar: ok what's your view then? Evelyn: we'll I..... The teacher sees them talking and starts yelling at them Teacher: Evelyn and Oscar move seats now you know the rules on talking Evelyn and oscar move seats Sasha: hey what was that about? Oscar: nothing do your work don't want to get busted again Sasha pus her head back to her work and grabs a piece of paper and writes something down before passing into Oscar, the note starts Sasha: we not technically talking now Oscar: smart, why didn't I think of this Sasha: your mindis preoccupied Oscar: right that Sasha: so what's up? Oscar: for started the teachers a Sasha: what? Oscar: can't say it on a note Sasha: ok I get it Oscar: now move on Sasha: what happened? Oscar: Evelyn was asking about my love life Sasha: wait you like someone? Oscar: where have you been? Most people have noticed Sasha: I do have a boyfriend you know Oscar: everyone knows that, they are he'll jealous of you, you know Sasha: what? Since when did this happen Oscar: I'll say the time you stated dating Casey Sasha: so not jealous of me but of me being with him Oscar: bingo Sasha: ok then, hey you changed the subject? Oscar: dart, I knew you would figure that out Sasha: so spill Oscar: we'll I like Maddy Sasha: really? Oscar: yes is it so hard to beleive Sasha: no that wasn't what I meant, just forgetit Oscar: now I want to know Sasha: we'll everyone just seems to like her Oscar: she's great Sasha: yeah she is but not sure about guts and her mixing we'll Oscar: you jealous? Sasha: what no I'm Not jealous Oscar: sure seems lie it Sasha: your wrong Oscar: what is it then? Sasha: she seems to have an effect on guys Oscar: can be that good, you took her boyfriend remember Sasha: can we just forget about that? Oscar: you can't change the past you can only go into the future Sasha: eyes open Oscar: yeah Sasha: ok the thing with Maddy is The teacher comes up and sees their note Teacher: what's that? Sasha: a note Oscar: what you said we couldn't talk but nothing about writing notes Teacher; right both of you head to the principals office now Oscar and Sasha: yes miss Sasha and Oscar leave the room
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christine king Posted September 8, 2014 Report Posted September 8, 2014 Chapter 7 Hannah comes into the room and sees Evelyn working at the dining table Hannah: hey what you doing? Evelyn: home work Hannah: you have all weekend to finish that Evelyn: the sooner I finish the more time I have to do things I like Hannah: so school was ok today? Evelyn: yeah it was alright, what about work? Hannah: yep works work Evelyn: so school is school then good let's not talk about yet any more Hannah: so you've been spending time with your friends at school? Evelyn: Yep Sasha and Matt and of course Spencer Hannah: how's that going? Evelyn: good, really good Hannah: he's not pressuring you is he? Evelyn: no way, he's not like that Hannah: that's good to hear Evelyn: you don't have to worry about my relationship how about you focus on fixing thongs with Zac Hannah: yeah maybe that's not a good idea Evelyn: come on, me and Oscar want to spend tine with both of you at the same time Hannah: I guess I can't disagree with that Evelyn: good so you'll talk to him tonight Hannah: you trying to get rid of me Evelyn: yes, Spencer's coming over, you can't be here Hannah: Friday date night? Evelyn: yep so come back later Hannah: oh fine I know when I'm not wanted, I'm leaving, see you later Evelyn: see you ......................... Hannah arrives at Leah and Leah answers the door Leah: hey Hannah: hi, is Zac here? Leah: yeah, I'll just go get him Leah goes into the house and zac comes out Zac: hi, I didn't expect this Hannah: Evie thought we could talk Zac: Oscar too I'm guessing Hannah: yes Hannah and Zac sit down at the front table Zac: so you obviously came to talk Hannah: yeah I was wondering if we could be friends again at least fair the kids sake Zac: I've been thinking about that too and I don't know Hannah: I know it's hard and you hate me Zac: you know you put me though a lot Hannah: and I'm sorry about that Zac: now hats Andy out of your life feels better Hannah: yeah I won't be making that mistake again Zac: i think you shouldn't say things you can't keep Hannah: I can, I am Zac: yeah I've heard that before Hannah: this time I mean it for real Zac: I hope so, I really do Hannah: so about the friends thing Zac: yeah we can try, we have too Hannah: thanks that means a lot Hannah: maybe tomorrow if everyone else isn't busy Zac: I'm sure they'll be happy about this Hannah: I know they will be Zac: ok we'll goodnight then Hannah: yeah bye Zac goes back into the house and Hannah leaves ...................... Jett, Vj, John, Marilyn are having a family diner Jett: so how was work John and Marilyn? Marilyn: work was busy lts of customers John: yeah I sold quite a few juices today Jett: how many? John: 67 Jett holds out his hand and John gives him 5 dollars Marilyn: what's going on? Jett: I betted John and he lost Marilyn: on what Jett: on the amount of juiced he would sell today Marilyn: so you won and the payment was 5 dollars Jett: yep Marilyn: what you going to spend it on Jett: I'm thinking some pool at the surf club Vj: good idea John: yes prefect idea, it'll get you two out of the house Jett: are you kickedme out? John: a few hours of me and Marilyn time, yes I am Jett: ok we'll go, Vj you ready Vj: not let I, waiting for my money John gives him 5 dollars John: I should of known you were involved too Vj: you know it Jett and Vj leave Marilyn: so movie night? John: yep I'll get the popcorn John gloves over to make the popcorn and John and Marilyn settle on the couch and press play on the movie ............................... Spencer arrives at the farm house, Evelyn and Spencer kiss hello Evelyn: hey Spencer: hi yourself Evelyn: have you picked a Movie? Spencer: yep the wizard of oz Evelyn: that's an oldie Spencer: it's a classic Evelyn: yep it's a good film Spencer and Evelyn get comy on the couch Spencer: this is nice Evelyn: yeah it is Spencer: we've got the house to our selfs? Evelyn: yep Hannah and Oscar are out Spencer: that's good Spencer and Evelyn kiss ............................... Kyle and Phobee arrive back at the house Kyle: when you said you'd come to work with me, I firgured you would do some Phobee: yeah well I'll come tomorrow and actually work Kyle: ok Phobee: you didn't see. To mind a distraction though Kyle: yes I did Phobee: you weren't stoping me Kyle: oh come on, you wre all over me Phobee: yes and you liked it Kyle: not at work it's unprofessional Phobee: your the boos I think you can get away wit it Kyle: yeah maybe it doesn't matter though Phobee: dosen't matter? Or does matter? Kyle: both I guess Phobee: ok we'll how about we Phobee kisses Kyle Kyle: yeah I think we should Kyle and Phobee kiss All the lights in the house go off Phobee: what as that? Kyle: maybe the fuse box needs fixing Phobee: pr maybe someone hora power poll? Kyle: or that help me find a torch or two Phobee and Kyle find a a clue of torches in a cupboard Kyle: who put he torche there? Phobee; how would I know? Kyle: ok you coking with me to the fuse box Kyle and Phobee go outside and find the fuse box and they realise it's not that Kyle: you must be right Phobee: thought so Kyle: ok we should just go to bed and if it'd still off in the morning deal with it then Phobee; yep good idea ..................... Kyle and Phoebe come out to see Casey and Sasha making breakfast Kyle: I guess the powers back on Phobee: I would think so Casey: hey guys Sasha: how are you this morning? Kyle: good, didn't realise you stayed over? Sasha: it's not a problem is if? Kyle: no why would it Sasha: that's shanti thought Casey: so you working today? Kyle: yep Phobee coming today too Casey: again? Kyle: she didn't actually do much work yesterday Casey: that explains it then Phobee gets a text other Phobee and tell everyone Phobee: they want me for a gig on Wednesday - Friday night up the coast Kyle: that's great Phobee: can you come? Kyle: I don't know if I can take 3 days off Phobee; if I help you at work till then, cone on please Kyle: ok yeah I'll try to get it off Phobee hugs Kyle Kyle: come on let's go Phobee: what about breakfast Kyle: I run a restaurant Phobee: good point, bye guys Sasha and Casey: bye Sasha: we'll that's good for them Casey: yeah it is Sasha: so now that we're alone Casey kisses Sasha Brax and Ricky arrive back and catch them Brax: ok get a room? Casey: we're in one Brax: a room without windows then Casey: it's a door Brax: you get my point Casey: how w Heath and Bianca? Ricky: good, they are both working Casey: and dracy and Harley Ricky: they are both healthy growing kids Casey: that's great I can't wait to see them Ricky: you could of came Casey; wanted to depend time with my girl Sasha: speak info which, are you coming Casey? Casey: yeah we were going to the beach Sasha: yep Casey: ok bye guys Sasha: bye Casey and Sasha leave
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christine king Posted September 8, 2014 Report Posted September 8, 2014 Chapter 8 Hannah is making breakfast at he farm house when a Evelyn cones out Hannah: good morning, you know where spending the day with Zac, I figured you'd be up earlier Evelyn: we'll I'm up now Hannah: good where your brother Oscar enters the room Oscar: I'm here Hannah: both of you eat something Oscar: I'm grabbing toast Evelyn: me too Hannah: ok Oscar put 4 pieces in Oscar: I know how to work the toast, when are you so pushy this morning? Evelyn: more like neves Hannah: hey none. Of that Denny enters the room Evelyn: hey why did you get to sleep in Hannah: did you gave a good night last night? Denny: yeah it was great Evelyn: so Chris is good then, Great, you coming today? Denny: nah I firgured, i shouldn't plus already have plans Oscar: which Chris? Denny: yes we're spending more ome together, you got a problem? Oscar: nope Hannah: things going well then, you seem to spend a lot of your time with him Denny: he is my boyfriend Hannah: yep ok Denny: are you trying to say I should spend more tone with you guys? Hannah: no, but if you like Denny: I would like too,how about dinner this week sometimes Hannah: it's Sunday so you could technically say next week Denny: same difference Hannah: ill book Angelo's, you guys ok with that? Oscar: of course Evelyn: yes, so the 5 of us right? Hannah: yep if Zac wants to come Oscar: of course he will Hannah: hurry up and finish eating, Zac will be here any minute Oscar: I'm done , give me too seconds Evelyn: me too Hannah: alright meet at the car in 2 ...................... Vj finds Leah in the kitchen Vj: good morning? Leah: you sleep we'll? Vj: yeah it was alright Leah: good Vj: you got plans today mum? Leah: going to meet Irene for morning tea, what are you doing? Vj: I'm going to Alice's house, I think Jetts coming Leah: won't that make him a third shell Vj: there are other people coming, it's kind of a get together Leah: you mean a party Vj: yeah I guess Leah: ok remember e rules, no acohol Vj: of course Leah: are you sure? Vj: what you talking about? Leah: we'll I think someone stole some from the cabinet the other day Vj: are you sure it wasn't just moved around in there Leah: that's possible Vj: did you ask Mat? Leah: no I didn't Vj: wait so your blaming your teenage son but not the 18 year old that lives here Leah: it's just a question which you still haven't answered Vj: the answers no Leah: ok that's all I wanted to know , have fun today Leah leaves Vj sends a text to Jett Vj: we nearly got caught have to be more careful Jett: don't worry I've got it covering, getting a guy some school to buy some sweet Vj: ok I'll meet you at Alice's Jett: be there in like an hour Vj: ok cool .......................... John finds Jett in his room John: hey what you doing? Jett: going out John: where? Jett: to Alice's house John: who's Alice? Jett: Vj's new girlfriend John: Does Leah know about this? Jett: of course John: just checking after last time, you threw a party at Irene's house Jett: it's a gathering of people John: that's another word for a. Party Jett: what ever, it's a small arty, you happy? John: not really Jett: promise you will be careful John: I promise John: good boy John hugs Jett John: don't be back to late Jett: I'll be back before mid afternoon stop stressing John: it's called worrying and it's what a parent doe Jett: sorry John: don't be sorry be smart Jett: ok can I go now John: yes, bye son .............................. Chris and Denny are playing pool Chris:how's your family? Denny: good they are going out today Chris: where? Denny: I don't know actually Chris: they didn't say Denny: I don't think I asked Chris: it's alright I'm sure they are fine Denny: yeah of course Chris takes a shot Chris: so you got plans next weekend? Denny: why? Chris: my dad got in touch, he wants me and Spencer to go home for a visit Denny: and Chris: and I was thinking you and Evelyn can come and meet the family Denny: you think that's a good idea Chris: we've meet yours, it's only 2 days Denny: I'll think about it Chris: ok ....................... Leah arrives at Irene's Leah: hey Irene: your just in time I'm making coffee Leah: good I think I need one Irene: why ? Leah: things are stressful Irene: with who? Leah: Vj Irene: what happened? Leah: he's got a girlfriend Irene: isn't that normal Leah: and going to parties Irene: hate to say this but that's normal too Leah: and the acohol? Irene : what, he's only 16, are you sure? Leah: we'll no, matt could of took it Irene: have you asked him? Leah: Vj or Matt? Irene: both Leah: Vj yes but Matt no Irene: you should, get your facts right first Leah: we'll I just asked Vj but he denied it Irene: you don't believe him Leah: should I? Irene: he's a teenager but he's also smart Leah: yeah maybe Matt did take it Irene: we'll ask him and if he says no then someone's lying Leah: yeah which one Irene: we'll they both have a history of lying Leah: that's true Irene: could you really not believe your own son though? Leah: of course not, it's stupid Irene: yep Irene gives Leah her coffee and they sit down on the couch ............................ Zac, Hannah, Evelyn and Oscar are driving somewhere Evelyn: where are we going? Hannah: it's not much further Oscar: cone on just a hint? Hannah: nope Evelyn: stop being so frustrating Hannah: ok fine you've never been there? Oscar: another hint? Hannah: it's fun Evelyn: yeah that helps Hannah: that's all, your getting Oscar: a go kart Hannah: no Evelyn: archery? Hannah: close, it's to do with violence Oscar: it's still safe though right? Hannah: three instructors there Oscar: they help you Hannah: yeah and it's loud Evelyn: a music festival Hannah: I think your wishing there Evelyn: yeah probably Oscar: more hints? Hannah: ok fine it's a gun range Oscar: we get to shoot Hannah: yes Evelyn: oh cool, I've always anted to try that Oscar: me too Hannah: me three, luckily they have one just 2 hours out of town Oscar: how much longer Hannah: about 5 minutes A car comes along on the other side and Zac passes a sign on the road, he takes the corner and now is back on a straight road Oscar: thanks for taking us here Evelyn: yeah it's nice to spend time together for a change A car surveys onto Zacs side of the road and Zac turns the car to avoid hitting the other car but he misses the other car on the other side and it crashes right into them.... Coming up; Leah: what's happened? A shot of the hospital Maddy and Spencer hug Matt and and Sasha are together at the hospital Matt: Sasha there's been an accident John: Jett's missing Vj: I thought he would of been ok walking back Casey: Brax, there's something I need to tell you Brax: Casey what is it? Casey: Jakes back! Josh punches Andy Josh: how could you, I trusted you? Maddy: Josh wait it's not what you think Chris finds Spencer passed out
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