Guest Posted February 1, 2014 Report Posted February 1, 2014 Interesting idea great introduction can't wait to read more Quote
Inactive User Posted February 2, 2014 Report Posted February 2, 2014 Great start, Zetti! Can't wait to read more! Xx Quote
elikell Posted February 2, 2014 Report Posted February 2, 2014 Oooh, I'm intrigued! Great start and can't wait to see where you take this next! Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted February 2, 2014 Report Posted February 2, 2014 Woah, intriguing beginning, what's Martha got involved with?Looking forward to more! Quote
pembie Posted February 2, 2014 Report Posted February 2, 2014 Oh blimey I wonder if Martha will be able to get the money without Jack finding out? It sounds like this is a very dangerous person that she is dealing with. Quote
Sabrina Posted February 2, 2014 Report Posted February 2, 2014 Great start, Zetti! I wonder what Martha's involved with? Looking forward to the next chapter. Quote
Red Ranger 1 Posted February 7, 2014 Report Posted February 7, 2014 Well, things seem to be happy for them at the moment, how long will that last..? Quote
Guest Posted February 8, 2014 Report Posted February 8, 2014 Great update Zetti update again soon Quote
Inactive User Posted February 8, 2014 Report Posted February 8, 2014 Great chapter Liked the Jack/Martha parts. Looking forwards to next chapter. xx Quote
pembie Posted February 8, 2014 Report Posted February 8, 2014 (edited) The the calm before the storm. Nice to see them both happy, before the trouble that Martha gets herself into hits the fan. I wonder how she ends up oweing all that money? Edited February 8, 2014 by pembie Quote
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