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I absolutely love this amazing story, being a major Jack fan, and of Jack/Martha, this intrigues me the most. I do enjoy reading, and have enjoyed the pace of the story. Which I find most hard in writing myself.

Enjoying this!

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Hmm that was a very surprising revelation that Martha has a long lost twin.Interested to know why he was blackmailing her for the money and why she was his last option Quite bad to be blackmailed by family. Also I wonder if this twin will turn out to be a character that we know about?

Look forward to the next chapter :)

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