Guest Posted December 9, 2014 Report Posted December 9, 2014 (edited) Interesting start. I look forward to more. update again soon Edited December 9, 2014 by Romeo&Indi Forever Quote
Inactive User Posted December 9, 2014 Report Posted December 9, 2014 Great start Please update soon xx Quote
JosieTash Posted December 9, 2014 Report Posted December 9, 2014 Intriguing premise ………will be interesting to see where this goes !!! LOVED this …………… Oscar stared hard at her for a few moment.“Are my evil twin and the boyfriend in there?” Maddy shifted awkwardly, embarrassed at how easily read she was.“That’s got nothing to do with it.” “Look, come on.I’ll sit with you, we can even make jokes about how sickening they are.” Maddy glared at him stubbornly.The last thing she needed was Oscar treating her like a charity case and taking away what little dignity she had left after being dumped, cheated on, used and impregnated… possibly not in that order.“I don’t want to.” Quote
pembie Posted December 9, 2014 Report Posted December 9, 2014 I agree with Alf Roo is being too soft with the way she treats Maddy. Good start Quote
Barbara Posted December 10, 2014 Report Posted December 10, 2014 On TV, Oscar would probably have gone to the movies with her. This sounds really good. Looking forward to the next chapter! Quote
Guest Posted December 11, 2014 Report Posted December 11, 2014 Great chapter Hmm Maddy decides to run away because she didn't get her way. I look forward to more Update again soon Quote
pembie Posted December 12, 2014 Report Posted December 12, 2014 Wow I didn't think Roo handled that very well I know I said she was being to soft on Maddy. But I think she may have been quite hard on her there. Look forward to the next chapter Quote
Inactive User Posted December 12, 2014 Report Posted December 12, 2014 Great chapter I wonder how Alf and Roo will react when they learnt Maddy had run away Update soon please xx Quote
JosieTash Posted December 12, 2014 Report Posted December 12, 2014 (edited) Maddy running away is ironic .......... and from the sound of the premise, i'm guessing this move won't turn out well. Loved this ....... “I’m sorry to be such a burden.”Maddy’s tone was sarcastic, so much so that Roo didn’t realise she was only half-joking. I'm not really a fan of Maddy, but am VERY intersted where you take this !!!!! Edited December 12, 2014 by JosieTash Quote
Guest Posted December 14, 2014 Report Posted December 14, 2014 Great chapter Aww poor Roo and Alf they love Maddy. Oh no wonder what will happen when Maddy finds out what her mum has done. I look forward to more Update again soon Quote
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