pembie Posted February 21, 2014 Report Posted February 21, 2014 Oh dear you haven't just gone and killed Ruby have you? Fancy her getting caught up in the crossfire like that because I think that was Mick there trying to take Casey out. It looks like it's Heath to save the day here with Brax busy with Charlie and hopefully their soon to be born baby. I wonder if their baby is going to be born the same time as Jack and Martha that would be cool. Really great chapter and yes I did enjoy reading it well done. But what a epic cliffhanger to leave us on please update soon Quote
Inactive User Posted February 22, 2014 Author Report Posted February 22, 2014 (edited) Great chapter. I agree with Pembie's post above. And whoa at the ending! Please update soon xx Edited February 22, 2014 by ~JarlieFanEver~ Quote
amz89 Posted February 25, 2014 Report Posted February 25, 2014 OMG great chapter!! I hope Ruby is okay. Quote
Inactive User Posted March 4, 2014 Author Report Posted March 4, 2014 (edited) Great chapter Whoa! Mick hit Ruby with the car...??? Hoping Ruby will be okay! Please update soon please xx Edited March 4, 2014 by ~JarlieFanEver~ Quote
pembie Posted March 5, 2014 Report Posted March 5, 2014 (edited) Wow well that was a high filled drama driven rollercoaster ride of a chapter, I really enjoyed that. I really don't know if Ruby is going be alright here, But it's not looking too good for her at the moment. I liked how you had worked it so all the characters were at the hospital when Ruby was brought in. I really want to know how Mick plans to dispose of his car. All very exciting stuff. Edited March 5, 2014 by pembie Quote
amz89 Posted March 5, 2014 Report Posted March 5, 2014 Loved this chapter. Had a feeling at the start it would of been Mick. At least the babies are hopefully safe with Irene. More soon please can't wait!!! Hope Ruby is okay. Quote
Inactive User Posted March 23, 2014 Author Report Posted March 23, 2014 Great chapter Wow this was so amazing and well-written! Loved how you described everyone's emoticons and how they were feeling in this chapter. I hope Ruby will pull through this and wake up soon Whoa at the ending! I can't believe Brax went too far but I can understand his anger and hurt since what had happened. Update soon please xxx Quote
pembie Posted March 25, 2014 Report Posted March 25, 2014 It doesn't surprise me that Brax lost it big time with Mick. I wonder if Mick is dead? And if he is, does that mean that Jack will end up covering it up for Brax? It's very sad with what is happening with Ruby. I just don't know what your going to do there All very exciting stuff Update again soon as I want to know what has happened to Mick. Quote
amz89 Posted March 26, 2014 Report Posted March 26, 2014 Loved this chapter!!! Been loving the updates love it when you post one! Oh dear I hope Brax isn't up for murder!!! :-( more soon please :-) Quote
Inactive User Posted April 7, 2014 Author Report Posted April 7, 2014 Great chapter Glad Brax didn't go too far. I hope Mick better end in in prison for what he did. I wonder if Charlie will blame Casey for Ruby's accident and Cheryl for bringing Mick into their lives... Update soon please xx Quote
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