pembie Posted April 9, 2014 Report Posted April 9, 2014 Brax might not of killed Mick But I have a feeling that he will end up getting murdered by someone Especially if Ruby worsens. It's still not looking good for her. I was really glad when I seen that this story was updated. I do find it very exciting. And it was awesome to read it just before I go to bed. Update again soon as I want to know what happens next Quote
Inactive User Posted April 12, 2014 Author Report Posted April 12, 2014 Great chapter. So sad but touching and well-written. Update soon please xx Quote
amz89 Posted April 12, 2014 Report Posted April 12, 2014 Sorry for no comments in the middle of moving again. Last 2 chapters have been great! Hope Ruby is okay. You write them all so well . Really enjoying it and can't wait for more! Quote
pembie Posted April 13, 2014 Report Posted April 13, 2014 This test/experiment thing seems to have given everyone some kind of new hope So the chapter wasn't too sad. And I like the idea of people acting normally around Ruby, telling her about all the everyday stuff. Ruby better wake up soon if only to stop her debit with Heath's added interest rates from getting too high. I did find that part funny She could end up oweing him a fortune Oh and maybe Brax and Casey could read some of her girly magazines to her. I thought that was a brilliant chapter Quote
Inactive User Posted May 3, 2014 Author Report Posted May 3, 2014 Great chapter Hope Ruby will woke up soon Please update soon xxx P.S. Had you yet checked out my new fanfiction 'Outsiders?' Quote
Laura2015 Posted May 4, 2014 Report Posted May 4, 2014 New reader for you: I love this story and I hope Ruby does wake up soon. Hope and Caleb are so cute! Quote
pembie Posted May 7, 2014 Report Posted May 7, 2014 I did find alot of that chapter rather amusing with Heath reading that womens magazine. The parts with the twins seeing Ruby were very sweet. I wonder what Hope whispered to Ruby? Whatever it was I think that it will turn out to be a big help for Ruby. Hmm Casey won't be staying with Ruby for one night Am I right in thinking that something big will be happening while his not there? I look forward to the next chapter Quote
Inactive User Posted May 24, 2014 Author Report Posted May 24, 2014 Great chapter Awww glad Ruby had woken up and that she is going to be okay Loved how her family come together to see her at the end Update soon please xx Quote
pembie Posted May 25, 2014 Report Posted May 25, 2014 Wow that was an awesome idea to have Ruby wake up with a little help from Hope and Caleb's birthday wish. I think Dr Anderson's test did work even if his not really sure it did. Look forward to seeing where you take the story the next time you update. Quote
Inactive User Posted June 7, 2014 Author Report Posted June 7, 2014 Great chapter Liked the chat between Charlie and Cheryl. Glad no one blames Cheryl for what happened to Ruby Glad that Mick is getting sent down for a long time Update soon please xx Quote
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