Me and My Friend in Home and Away: The Early Years (by Bobby Forever Missed and Bretto) - comments

[Red Ranger 1]

Interesting idea and start, don't get to see these characters very often.Looking forward to seeing where you take it.

[Red Ranger 1]

Pippa's "You don't need your appendix" made me laugh:not sure if it was meant to...Some nice family moments in there.

[Bobby Forever Missed]

Pippa's "You don't need your appendix" made me laugh:not sure if it was meant to...Some nice family moments in there.

It wasn't supposed to Yeah I thaught the ending was a nice touch.

Stay tuned for chapter/Episode #3 sometime later glad your enjoying it.

[Red Ranger 1]

Loved Celia putting her foot in it.Sally really isn't that keen on the new family members...

[Bobby Forever Missed]

Loved Celia putting her foot in it.Sally really isn't that keen on the new family members...

No she's not. Celia is so thoughtless at times Episode #4 (4 already? ) coming tomorrow marking the start of the first real series story Bertram's accident. Do you have a favourite character and/or story yet RedRanger?

[Red Ranger 1]

I loved Tom's "I used to be allowed in here" line.There's a nice feeling of family here, I hope Sally comes round soon.I like the idea of dropping two new characters into the original set-up but it feels a bit as though all the stories, Kieran's appendicitis, Carly's car accident, are over a bit too quickly.I'm liking the character interactions though and everyone's different behaviour towards the newcomers.

[Bobby Forever Missed]

Sorry RedRanger1! the next storyarc goes on for a while as it leads into The Summer Bay Nutter Storyarc.

[Bobby Forever Missed]

I loved Tom's "I used to be allowed in here" line.There's a nice feeling of family here, I hope Sally comes round soon.I like the idea of dropping two new characters into the original set-up but it feels a bit as though all the stories, Kieran's appendicitis, Carly's car accident, are over a bit too quickly.I'm liking the character interactions though and everyone's different behaviour towards the newcomers.

RedRanger Kierain's Appendicitis is indeed not over when it is revealed Dr Bruce made a Dangerous Mistake. Will this error cost Kierain his life? stay tuned for episode #6.

As a matter of interest how do you think having a Wheelchair bound person in Summer Bay House and Pippa fussing over/ looking out for him is working?

[Red Ranger 1]

Okay, you'd have to be a pretty incompetent doctor to do an appendectomy and leave the appendix in but it's a great twist.Again I'm finding that the little character vignettes are the best part of the story, Sally being bratty towards Kieran but slowly coming round, Alison being a cow as always and Bobby getting into trouble for standing up to her.

[home and away 1988-2000]

Hi Guys

I'm Dan the one that is in this story with Kierain, I will also be writing a good few episodes.

Dan

Edited January 26, 2010 by home and away 1988-2000