Me and My Friend in Home and Away: The Early Years (by Bobby Forever Missed and Bretto) - comments

[Red Ranger 1]

Hmm, intrigued by the preview.Not sure what to make of Barbara's relationship with Kierain, on the one hand she's coming pretty close to playing favourites but on the other hand it's good that she cares when a lot of people don't seem to be bothered.

[Inactive User]

Great fanfiction. Had been reading every chapter of it. Keep up with the good work

[Red Ranger 1]

Some interesting stuff in there, although once again my eye's more on the preview...

[Red Ranger 1]

Hmm, bit worried about what Barlow's got planned.And Kierain's suddenly very popular...

[Red Ranger 1]

Oh gosh, I was hoping Sally was going to be safe when she got back to the house but Alan didn't seem to notice anything...What's going to happen to her?And Kierain?Great update.

[Red Ranger 1]

Yeah, I think for the first time I'm seriously disagreeing with Tom there, he doesn't seem to have much sympathy for Kierain and he was far too hard on him.Looking forward to seeing where this goes, hoping Sally and Kierain are okay...(And yeah, nine-year-old Charlie in the police force...)

[Bobby Forever Missed]

I ran out of police officers

[Inactive User]

Great stuff. More soon please

Edited April 16, 2010 by ~JarlieFanEver~

[Bobby Forever Missed]

Glad you like it

Edited April 17, 2010 by Bobby Forever Missed

[Red Ranger 1]

Ooh, some nice stuff in there, it seems like we're getting more varied interaction between the characters now.Tom needs to check his facts.