The Right To Stay In Summer Bay

[christine king]

Chapter 3

Summer Bay House

Roo is in the kitchen when Alf comes in

Alf: good morning
Roo: how was the fish?
Alf: I think they were swimming
Roo: and did you catch some
Alf: not today
Roo: damn no dinner then
Alf: yeah sorry you'd have to make something else
Roo: we have food in the house
Alf: yes I know
Roo: well good
Alf: where's Maddy and Spencer?
Roo: I don't know if they are up yet
At that point Maddy and Spencer come down the stairs
Spencer: hi
Maddy: hey
Alf: how are you guys this morning
Maddy: good
Spencer: good
Roo: great, so breakfast?
Spencer: I think Chris is coming here
Roo: you going out for breakfast with your brother?
Spencer: he said something about
Chris arrives
Chris: hey guys
Spencer: your a little late
Chris: oh was I, a little late? how late?
Spencer: you know your not funny
Chris: but I'm handsome
Spencer: and annoying
Chris: we going now
Spencer: yep, bye guys
Chris and Spencer leave

[Red Ranger 1]

I like that you've got Spencer in this and loved the banter between him and Chris.

[Guest]

Great chapter

glad you have added Spencer and Chris in this fanfic.

I look forward to more.

Update again soon  

[christine king]

Chapter 4

The Farm House

Hannah and Andy are kissing in bed
Hannah: when do you start work?
Andy: half a hour
Hannah: I can work with that
Hannah kisses Andy again
Andy: yeah but it takes like 25 minutes to get to work
Hannah: you cant be a little late?
Andy: no I have to open up
Hannah: what about driving faaster?
Andy: speeding? no way
Hannah: yeah your right stupid idea, what about lunch?
Andy: thats not going too work, its too short
Hannah: I guess well have to wait till tonight, yo remember the kids are coming ver right?
Andy: yep 7o'clock back to school dinner, what we haing?
Hannah: lamb chops with potato & peas and corn
Andy: that sounds nice
Hannah: but after?
Andy: alone time
Hannah: I like the sound of that
Andy kisses Hannah
Andy: got to go, love you, bye
Hannah: love you too
Andy leaves

The Diner

Spencer and Chris are chowing down on their breakfest and Irene comes over
Irene: woah stop eating so fast
Spencer: yep ok, this guy here is a hurry for some reason
Chris: I not in a hurry, I just like food
Spencer: you love food
Chris: no I love girls
Spencer: and food
Chris: just girls
Irene: ok guys what you doing today?
Spencer: well its my last day of hoildays
Chris: and I thouht Spencer and me could do something fun
Spencer: like?
Chris: all in good time
Spencer: stop leaving me hanging bro
Chris: ok were going to the go-kart place out of town
Spencer: what? are you kidding, I love tht place
Chris: don't I know it
Spencer: you like i too
Chris: who dosen't
Irene: is this why you asked for today off?
Spencer: you never told me you were working today?
Chris: I'm not
Spencer: you were suppose to be
Chris: yeah but its all sorted
Spencer: thanks Irene
Irene: your brother already said that
Chris: I did
Spencer: ok so where going to head off
Chris: bye Irene, see you at work tomorrow
Irene: bye guys have fun

Angelo's

Kyle: hey Phoebe you set up everything yet?
Phoebe: still working on it
Kyle: we have time
Phoebe: you liking having the place to ourselves?
Kyke: resturant or the house?
Phoebe: both
Kyle: its different
Phoebe: you miss your brothers?
Kyle: Casey's dead, Heath's in the city & Brax, Ricky and Baby Casey are on the run somewhere
Phoebe: yeah I know its hard but I'm here
Kyle: and I'm so happy I've got you
Phoebe: don't worry you will hear from Brax and Ricky
Kyle: I know but its been 2 weeks since they last contracted us
Phoebe: I'm sure they are fine, they are smart enough not to get caught
Kyle: yeah I know, I'm still worried
Phoebe: lets finish setting up
Kyle: yes we need to get ready for the lunch crowd

[Guest]

Great chapter

like that you mentioned Casey and Heath.

interesting that Ricky is on the run with Brax and baby Casey.

glad Chris  and Spencer are bonding 

I look forward to more.

Update again soon  

 

[christine king]

Chapter 5

Irene's House

Kat and Nate are sitting on the couch watching movies
Kat: its good here
Nate: I only just moved in
Kat: yeah but its less crowed
Nate: yeah there's way too many people at Leah's
Kat: suffocating?
Nate: something like that
Kat: well I'm glad we have some time to ourselves
Nate: Chris is alright
Kat: he likes company
Nate: hes lonley when Spencers not around
Kat: are they close?
Nate: pretty close, closer since they came to live in the bay though
Kat: I think it was a god decision on our part two
Nate: the bay is a great place to live in
Kat: oh really, whats so great about it?
Nate: me
Kat: hmm maybe not so much
Nate kisses Kat
Nate: what does that tell you?
Kat: that your a good kisser
Nate: well yes but something else
Kat: that I have a boyfriend
Nate: about the bay?
Kat: oh that were both here
Nate: close enough
Nate kisses Kat again and makes it a more passoniate kiss

The Farm House

Hannah, Andy, Evelyn, Oscar and Josh are having dinner

Hannah: so guys how was your last day of freedom?
Andy: yeah tomorrows back to normal
Evelyn: its a new school year
Josh: only good thing is I get to spend it with my friends
Oscar: I'm excited
Evelyn: of corse you are, you like school work
Oscar: thats not true
Evelyn: ok then why do you like school?
Oscar: its good for my future
Josh: yep the future
Andy: you going to work hard this year?
Josh: yes
Hannah: you two?
Evelyn: of course
Oscar: do you even need to ask?
Hannah: just checking
Andy: anyway Zac won't let you guys run riot
Evelyn: you sure about that? remember last time
Hannah: guys don't bring that up again
Evelyn: what its a valid question?
Oscar: Evelyn
Evelyn: yes Oscar
Oscar: lets just support him ok
Evelyn: of course we will, were going to be the best students
Hannah: just behave please
Evelyn: yeah we will
Hannah: well good
Andy: whos for desert?

Irene's House

Irene is making a hot chocolate when Chris comes into the kitchen

Irene: hows your brother?
Chris: good, we had fun today
Irene: did you win?
Chris: no
Irene: were you any good?
Chris: pretty good
Irene: so work tomorrow
Chris: yep I'm just getting a glass of water and then going to bed
Nate comes into the kitchen
Irene: hey, do you want a hot chocolate?
Nate: I'd love one, thank-you
Irene makes one for him
Nate: so Chris how was your day?
Chris: good, see you tomorrow, good night
Chris leaves
Irene: how was your day?
Nate: good just spend it watching movies with Kat
Irene: good to have the place to yourselves
Nate: yes
Irene hands him the hot chocolate and Nate has some
Nate: ohh thats hot
Irene: but good?
Nate: yeah, what brand is it?
Irene: just cadbury
Nate: hmm its really good
Irene: that's good
Nate: you work tomorrow with Chris
Irene: have to keep him busy
Nate: im working too
Irene: yep we'll be fine
Nate: he'll be ok
Irene: he always is
Irene puts her cup in the sink
Irene: well goodnight, make sure to put your cup in the sink
Nate: will do, night

[Guest]

Great chapter

interesting that Nate lives with Irene in this fanfic.

Glad you added Kat to this fanfic.

Glad Chris had fun with Spencer

I look forward to more 

Update again soon

[christine king]

Chapter 6

The Palmer's House

John yells out to Jett
John: hes never going to get to school on time at this rate
Marilyn: that's his problem
John: yeah but its our job as parents to help him
Marilyn: yeah but we cant do his work for him, we can't make him go to school on time
John: why you taking his side
Marilyn: im not taking anyones side
John: are too
Marilyn: I am not
Jett comes out
Jett: who's side am I on?
Marilyn: there are no sides and that's final
Jett: fine
John: fine
Marilyn: good, now were taking you to school
Jett: your not taking me to school
Marilyn: what?
Jett: I'm walking with VJ, you'll ruin my reputation
John: you have one?
Jett: yes and your not ruining it
Marilyn: fine
Jett: VJ should be here soon
VJ arrives
VJ: hey guys, I'm here, who was worrying?
Jett: hey, I wasn't but they were
Marilyn: come on hurry up you'll be late
John: move it guys, out out out
John, Marilyn, Jett, VJ bail from the house

The School

Josh and Maddy walk hand in hand and they run into Matt

Matt: hey guys
Maddy: hey
Josh: hey
Matt: you know what, no PDA
Josh: like you care
Matt: I don't but the teachers do
Maddy: well we dont care
Matt: fair enough
Maddy: you should get a girlfriend
Matt: yeah maybe
Maddy: we can find one for you
Matt: I can get my own girlfriend
Josh: good luck with that
Maddy: if you get a date by the end of today we could double date later
Matt: any girl would be happy to date me
Maddy: tickets on your self much
Matt: I'll get a date
Maddy: good
Josh: cool
Matt: so you guys got your timetables yet?
Maddy gives him her timetable
Matt looks at it and compares his
Matt: we have English, maths and social studies together
Maddy: thats cool
Josh gives Matt his timetable
Matt: we have English and social studies together
Josh: awesome
Matt: what classes do you guys have together?
Maddy: we have English and social studies
Matt: well it could be worse, you could have had 0
Josh: were happy that we have 2 classes together
Matt: so you guys going to study together?
Maddy: definatley
Josh: totally
Matt: yep I'm sure you will
Josh: shut up

 

Coming up

Clare: hi i'm Clare

Spencer: hi I'm Spencer

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Clare: your cute

Matt: will you go out with me?

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Josh: what?

Andy: I can't beleive you did this

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Clare: so you want to go out some time?

Oscar: you want to date me?

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John finds his daughter on the ground

John: Clare wake up

[Guest]

Great chapter

I'm intrigued about what will happen next

I look forward to more

Update again soon

 

[christine king]

Chapter 7

The School

Spencer is running late and hes not looking where hes going and he bumps into someone, he looks up and sees a girl
Spencer: sorry that was my fault
Clare: no it was mine
Spencer: are you new here?
Clare: what gave it away?
Spencer: the fact I haven't seen you around before
Clare: I just moved here
Spencer: cool
Clare: hi I'm Clare
Spencer: hi I'm Spencer
Clare: nice to meet you
Spencer: yeah you too, so where you from?
Clare: Canberra
Spencer: how long you lived there for?
Clare: 5 months, my dad moves around a lot for his work
Spencer: and your mum?
Clare: she died when I was 5
Spencer: I'm sorry
Clare: that's ok
Spencer: so do you have a boyfriend?
Clare: why you intrestred?
Spencer: I'm curious
Clare: no I don't
Spencer: no long distance love?
Clare: nope, I've tried it before, it dosen't work, just easier for a clean break
Spencer: so did you have a boyfriend?
Clare: define boyfriend
Spencer: someone your committed too
Clare: I haven't had a boyfriend in years
Spencer: right ok
Spencer realises they are late for class
Clare: great first impression I'm making here, I can't even get to class on time
Spencer: don't sweat it, your new, you couldn't find your class and I helped you, easy and we both won't get in trouble
Spencer asks for her timetable, Spencer looks at it then smiles 
Spencer: prefect we have maths together now and we already have our excuse, lets go, follow me

Spencer and Clare arrive at their classroom and explain why they are late to the class, the teacher tells them to take a seat and they do.

Spencer: I can show you around after class
Clare: I'd like that

Summer Bay House

Roo is sitting on the couch reading a book while Alf is doing  the crossword in the paper when John and Marilyn arrive
Roo: hey guys what are you doing here?
John: we were bored since Jett's back at school
Marilyn: and we thought we would see what you guys were doing
Roo: we're enjoying the house being all peacefull and quiet
Alf: I'm doing a crossword
John: you need help with it?
Marilyn: and I could cook something
Roo: sure
Alf: whats number 4?
John: I don't know, let me have a look

The School

Maddy, Josh, Oscar, Evelyn and Matt are eating lunch when Spencer comes in and sits at their table with a new girl
Spencer: hey guys, this is Clare and Clare this is everyone
Matt: I'm Matt
Evelyn: I'm Evelyn
Oscar: I'm Oscar
Josh: I'm Josh
Maddy: I'm Maddy
Clare: nice to meet you all
Spencer: Clare had maths with me this morning
Matt: so where you from?
Clare: Canberra
Maddy: how long you staying for?
Clare: my dad's got a year contract for work
Josh: thats cool
Oscar: I think you will like the bay
Evelyn: everyone allways does I think
Clare: yeah everyone seems nice
Spencer: they are usually
Clare: yeah I hope I like it here too
Oscar: whats not to like? were prety great
Clare: yeah thanks for showing me around today
Spencer: no problem, I think were going to be good friends
Clare: yeah me too, so who should I avoid here?
Spencer: what do you mean?
Clare: whos the bad kids?
Spencer: ask Matt, they are his mates
Matt: hey that's not fair
Oscar: hes kidding, right?
Spencer: yes I am, sorry
Matt: if you just apoligised then Clare can hang out with us more often
Clare: who says I'm a good influence?
Matt: me
Clare: you don't know me yet
Matt: no not yet
The bell rings, they all say goodbye, going to their different classes

The School

After School, Matt sees Clare in the school corridor
Matt: hey
Clare: hi
Matt: how was your first day?
Clare: not bad
Matt: I think it might of been better than "not bad"
Clare: why?
Matt: because you met me
Clare: and your the one I was dying to meet?
Matt: of course, I'm awesome
Clare: have to take your word for that
Matt: hmm your different
Clare: how so?
Matt: most girls like me
Clare: who says I don't like you
Matt: I know you do but you don't admit it
Clare: I like you
Matt: so you like me? how much?
Clare: your cute
Matt: will you go out with me?
Clare: yes
Matt: ok tonight say 7 at angelo's?
Clare: where is that?
Matt: oh right you only just moved here, I will text you the adress, wheres your phone?
Clare gives him her phone and he writes her number into it and hands it back to her
Matt: I'll text you, see you later
Clare: bye

Leah's House

Matt's on the phone to Maddy
Matt: see I told you I could get a date
Maddy: ok who is it?
Matt: the new girl Clare
Maddy: you work fast
Matt: its one date chill
Maddy: ok ill see you later
Matt: yep bye

Leah comes in
Matt: hey
Leah: Hi, how was school?
Matt: good, really good
Leah: what happened?
Matt: a new girl I got a date with
Leah: wow that was quick
Matt: were going on a double date tonight
Leah: with who?
Matt: Maddy and Josh
Leah: well have fun
Matt: I will
Leah: have you seen VJ?
Matt: he said something before leaving about Jett
Leah: oh well it looks like it'll just be me and Zac for dinner then
Matt: you should make the most of the house being empty
Leah: already planning too
Matt: and you say I work fast
Leah: we look after 4 teenagers, its hard work
Matt: I know and I'm one of them
Leah: don't I know it
Matt: hey