The Right To Stay In Summer Bay

[Red Ranger 1]

Intrigued how this new girl Clare will fit in.

[Guest]

Great chapter

Wonder how Clare fits in

I look forward to more

Update again soon

 

 

[christine king]

Chapter 8

Irene's House

Chris walks in and finds Nate

Chris: hey
Nate: hi
Chris: what you doing tonight?
Nate: nothing
Chris: do you want to watch a dvd?
Nate: ok, are there any good ones?
Chris: yeah theres a few
Nate: a few
Chris: ok a couple
Nate: what kind?
Chris: depends on what you like
Nate: what do you like?
Chris: comedy
Nate: anything  else?
Chris: maybe a chick flick
Nate: intersting
Chris: I said maybe
Nate: ok
Chris: what do you like?
Nate: action
Chris: do you like the fast and the furious?
Nate: stupid question, one of the best action series ever
Chris: yeah I don't like action
Nate: how can you not like this?
Chris: I just don't like it
Nate: not good enough
Chris: ok so what movie do you want to watch?
Nate: were doing a marathon
Chris: are you kidding?
Nate: no get ready for a crash course in all things fast and the furious
Chris: fine, I'll make popcorn

The Farm House

Evelyn, Oscar, Hannah, Andy are playing monopoly
Evelyn: I'm buying the green properties
Oscar: you have to land on them first
Evelyn: or I could just buy them off you
Oscar: if I get them
Evelyn: or I could buy them off you guys
Andy: I don't sell properties
Hannah: even if I wanted 1
Andy: I'm trying to win here
Hannah: so am I
Oscar: I'm getting the stations
Andy: we could trade for some properties
Oscar: maybe
Evelyn: hey I'm trading with Oscar
Hannah: no hes trading with me
Andy: guys who's ur is it?

Summer Bay House

Roo: did you enjoy dinner?
Alf: yeah it was nice
Roo: Marilyn is a good ****
Alf: but but too much vegetation dishes isn't my idea of eating
Roo: mine either
Alf: poor John and Jett
Roo: John cocks meat and we did too
Alf: I know
Roo: so they were a little annoying today
Alf: yeah but I couldn't kick them out
Roo: they are our friends
Alf: that they are
Roo: I think they need something to focus on
Alf: maybe we could help them get the bus tours going again?
Roo: yeah maybe
Alf: what about a hobby?
Roo: better idea
Alf: we will suggest it next time
Roo: yeah good idea

The Palmer's

John: Jett left pretty quickly with VJ
Marilyn: yeah but he wants to spend time with him
John: I wish he would spend more time with us
Marilyn: teenager wants to spend time with friends instead of us, yeah I think thats normal
John: I know I just miss him
Marilyn: hes still here
John: yes
Marilyn: we should do something on the weekend?
John: like a family day
Marilyn: yeah
John: I like it
Marilyn: me too
John and Marilyn kiss

Angelo's

Maddy, Josh, Matt, Clare are sitting down for their date and are reading the menu
Matt: what kind of pizza do you like?
Clare: I like chicken, pepporini or surpreme?
Matt: cool I like chicken too
Clare looks at the menu and shows Matt the chicken and prawn one
Matt: sounds good
Clare: ok
Maddy and Josh order the ham and cheese one and Matt and Clare order the chicken and prawn one
Clare: so how long you guys lived her for?
Matt: just over a year
Josh: 2 years
Maddy: two and a half years
Clare: you guys like it?
Maddy: yes its great
Josh; it has its moments
Matt: its grown on me
Clare: thats good
Matt: so where have you lived
Clare: lots of places
Matt: in Australia or the UK?
Clare: just australia
Matt: so where about?
Clare; lived in Perth, Canberra, Melborne, Brisbane and now Sydeny
Matt: whats been your favorite place to live?
Clare: Perth but I'm basied I was born there
Matt: ok cool
Clare: what about you? have you travelled?
Matt; nowhere but Sydeny
Clare: ok, you like Sydeny?
Matt: yeah I do
Clare: do you have any brothers or sisters?
Matt: I've got a younger sister
Clare: what about your parents?
Matt: out of the picture?
Clare: ok
Matt: where are you living?
Clare: near here, its like a five minute walk
Matt: what street?
Clare: coolidge street
Matt: so just a few streets up from me
Clare: thats cool, where do you guys live?
Maddy: I live on the other side of town, where the caravan park is
CLARE: oh yeah, me and dad went for a drive over there today
Josh: I live a few streets down from Matt
Clare: all live fairly close then
Maddy; its a small town
Josh: you will get used to it
Clare: I'm getting that and I'm sure I will
The food arrives and they start eating their pizza

The Braxton's

Phoebe and Kyle are laying on the couch together

Kyle: the resturant did good today
Phoebe: yeah it wasn't too busy
Kyle: I hope we hear from Brax and Ricky soon
Phoebe: we will, stop worrying
Kyle: do you want to watch some tv?
Phoebe: I think we could do something better
Kyle: I think your right
Kyle and Phoebe kiss and Phoebe takes his hand and they go to their room

The Streets

Matt and Clare are walking back to their houses

Matt: I can walk you back if you like
Clare: do you know your way back?
Matt: yeah I know where most streets are
Clare: did you have fun?
Matt: I should be asking you that
Clare: to answer your question I did
Matt: would you like to go out again?
Clare: yeah I would but I just want to be clear where we stand
Matt: ok
Clare: I'm not ready for a relationship, so if you want more than just causal then we can just be friends
Matt: no I'm ok with it being causal
Clare: so we can see other people?
Matt: yeah no commintments
Clare: cool

The gym

Josh arrives there before school

Andy: Andy you here?
Andy comes out
Andy: hey bro
Josh: hey
Andy: whats up?
Josh: I wanted to see how your going
Andy: I'm fine why?
Josh: I wanted to know how the family thing went
Andy: it went well although I lost at monopoly 
Josh: who won?
Andy: Oscar
Josh: oh that sucks
Andy: I'll get over it
Josh: yeah its just a game
Andy: how was your night?
Josh: good, the double date went well
Andy: whats the new girl like?
Josh: shes nice
Andy: thats good
Clare arrives at the gym and Josh introduces her to Andy
Josh: Andy this is Clare and Clare this is my brother Andy
Clare: nice to meet you
Andy: yeah you too
Josh: so whats up?
Clare: I thought we could walk to school together?
Josh: yeah sure, Maddy and Matt are suppose to be meeting me, we'll all go together
Clare: sounds good
Josh leaves to go get a juice
Clare: I was wondering if I could get a gym membership?
Andy: sure, do you have the money on you?
Clare: yeah dad gave it to me this morning
Andy tells Clare to fill out a mebership form and once shes done that she hands it back to him while Andy puts the details into the computer and then gives her a membership card and Clare hands over the money
Josh comes back in
Josh: hey have you tried the juices here?
Clare: no are they any good?
Josh: they are pretty good
Clare: I heard that the diner pretty good as well
Josh: yeah it is, do you drink coffee?
Clare: no I don't
Josh: me neither but they do good milkshakes
Clare: I love those
Josh: who doesn't
Josh gets a text from Maddy
Josh: Maddy and Matt are outside, lets go
Clare and Josh bail

[Guest]

Great chapter

glad Clare is fitting in and glad the double date went well.

I look forward to more

Update again soon

 

[Red Ranger 1]

Liked the scene between Nate and Chris.

[christine king]

Chapter 9

The School

Clare, Maddy, Josh, Matt, Oscar, Evelyn and Spencer are all in social studies and they are sitting in pairs while the teacher is talking about their new school project

Clare and Spencer are sitting together
Clare: what do we do in this class?
Spencer: not much
Clare: we must learn something
Spencer: we learn enough to pass
Clare: but what if I want a good grade?
Spencer: maybe you should listen
Clare: fine then I will

Maddy and Josh are sitting together
Maddy: we were so lucky we got our seats next to each other
Josh: yeah I may have asked the teacher nicely
Maddy: you didn't?
Josh: no of course not, it was just luck
Maddy: oh good
Josh: but you totally fell for it
Maddy: yeah well
Josh: do you think we will get to do this project together?
Maddy: who knows? the teacher just picks pairs at randoms
Josh: yeah us getting lucky twice not likely
Maddy: have faith
Josh: ok its a possibility
Maddy: that's better

Evelyn and Oscar are sitting together
Evelyn: you totally cheated last night
Oscar: no I didn't
Evelyn: what do you call it then?
Oscar: winning
Evelyn: not fairly
Oscar: you got any proof?
Evelyn: well no
Oscar: ha then you can't accuse me, I plead the fifth
Evelyn: what?
Oscar: just, I win ok
Evelyn: fine but this ain't over

The teacher calls out the pairs for the project, Clare & Oscar, Matt & Spencer and Evelyn & Josh and Maddy & Alli. The teacher dismisses the class.

The School Corridor

Maddy and Josh are talking

Josh: are you ok with Evelyn being my partner on the project?
Maddy: I can't change it can I
Josh: yeah we both can't
Maddy: I'm fine, I've got to go find my partner, Maddy and Josh kiss goodbye

The Gym

Josh arrives at the gym
Andy: hey
Josh: can we talk?
Andy: yeah sure, whats up?
Josh: just got a school project today
Andy: and
Josh: Evelyn's my partner
Andy: that's not great news
Josh: yeah
Andy: don't worry it'll be fine
Josh: really?
Andy: sure, do the work and it'll be fine
Josh: yeah ok
Andy goes to the office just as Clare comes in
Clare: hey
Clare: do you guys know how to get to the farm house?
Josh: Oscar didn't give you directions?
Clare: he did but I'm not sure how to get there by bus
Josh: your dad can't drive you?
Clare: he's working
Josh: well how about we go together, I have to go there anyway?
Clare: that would be great thanks
Josh: your actually doing me the favor
Clare: oh really why?
Josh: long story
Clare: ok well if you ever want to tell that story?
Josh: maybe one day, I'm going to ask Andy if he can drive us
Clare: isn't he working
Josh: yeah but he might be able to get someone to cover
Josh goes to see Andy and leaves Clare alone
Clare looks for a pen on the desk near the till and realizes that the till is open and she takes some cash from it and she puts it in her bag, Josh and Andy come back and tell her that Andy is taking them to the farm house after getting someone to cover for him and they bail.

[Guest]

Great chapter

wonder why Clare stole money from the gym.

I look forward to more 

Update again soon

[christine king]

Chapter 10

The Next day

The School

Clare arrives early and approaches a guy

Clare: hey
Drake: hi, do I know you?
Clare: I heard you can get me something
Drake: you heard right, what you need?
Clare: Ritalin
Drake: how many?
Clare: 20 pills
Drake: thats $50
Clare hands him the money
Drake: if you ever need any more
Drake writes down his number and gives it to Clare
Clare: thanks and I'll call you

Spencer spots them and comes over

Spencer: hey
Clare: hi
Spencer: what you doing talking to this loser?
Drake: who you calling a loser
Spencer: you, obviously
Drake: do you want me to hurt you
Spencer: just stay away from Clare
Drake: hey she came to me
Spencer: yeah right, you probally was harassing her
Drake: why don't you ask her than
Drake leaves
Spencer: was he harrasing you
Clare: no, I came to him
Spencer: what for?
Clare: we have science together
Spencer: so?
Clare: I needed to ask him about our assignment
Spencer: you knows he can't help you with school work
Clare: I kinda got that yeah
Spencer: ok can we go now?
Clare: yeah

The Farm House

Andy: hows the studying going?
Josh: good
Andy: I need to ask you something
Josh: sure
Andy: did you notice anyone one suspicious at the gym yesterday?
Josh: not that I know of, why?
Andy: somes moneys been stolen
Josh: I don't know anything about that
Andy: ok just checking
Josh: when did you notice it missing?
Andy: just after I got back from driving you and Clare here
Josh: ok
Andy: are you sure you didn't see anyone aroud
Josh: yeah I'm pretty sure
Andy: ok well I'll talk to you later

The School

Oscar and Clare are working on their school project

Oscar: are you liking it here?
Clare: yeah I am
Oscar: so your dating Matt?
Clare: wow your not good at small talk are you
Oscar: not when theres something intresting to talk about
Clare: so everyone is talking about it?
Oscar: pretty much, its big news
Clare: but I'm not dating Matt
Oscar: then what are you doing?
Clare: its just causal, no strings attracthed
Oscar: hows that work?
Clare: you date each other and other people, its simple
Oscar: ok
Clare: so you want to go out some time?
Oscar: you want to date me?
Clare: what did I just say?
Oscar: you don't like the world date do you?
Clare: no I do, I don't like the world dating, as in a couple
Oscar: I'd love to go on a date with you
Clare: cool, where do you want to go?
Oscar: to the movies?
Clare: what movies do you like?
Oscar: comedy
Clare: me too
Oscar: theres the new Ted 2 movie out?
Clare: thats sound good
Clare and Oscar smile at each other

The Farm House

Oscar confides in Evelyn

Oscar: I got a date with Clare
Evelyn: really?
Oscar: yeah
Evelyn: isn't she dating Matt?
Oscar: its just causal, no strings attrached
Evelyn: I didn't think that was your thing
Oscar: its not but I like her
Evelyn: this is so not going to end well

The Gym

Josh comes in

Josh: did you find out who took the money?
Andy: yeah, it must of been Clare she was the only one around at the time
Josh: what? your wrong I did it
Andy: I can't beleive you did this
Josh: well I did
Andy: so you were just going to let your friend take the blame
Josh: I confessed
Andy: yeah only after I acused someone else
Josh: what do you want from me, I'm sorry ok
Andy: why'd you take it?
Josh: I needed it for something
Andy: what?
Josh: study pills

Clare's House

Clare's father John knocks on her door and yells out to her, he dosen't receive a response so he opens the door and walks in, he walks towards her desk and see's the pills on it

John: oh Clare, not again

He soon notices his daughter on the ground, he gets on the ground and tries to wake Clare up

John: Clare wake-up

when he realises he can't wake his daughter, he grabs Clare's phone off her desk and calls 911, he tells them thats his daughter has collasped and to come quickly

[Red Ranger 1]

Uh-oh, Clare could be both trouble and in trouble...

[christine king]

Chapter 11

The Hospital

In a hospital room, Nate has just got Clare awake and breathing again, he goes out into the corridor

Nates asks John if he knows why his daughter collasped

John: she took Ritalin
Nate: has she taken this drug before?
John: yeah mutilpe times, I tried to get her to stop but she became addicted
Nate: ok, you can see her now

Nate and John goes into the hospital room and Nate prescribes seditives to calm her down and advises her that she is staying in the hospital overnight for obsevation and Nate leaves

John: OMG Clare you can't keep doing this, I nearly lost you this time
Clare: dad I will try harder
John: maybe it was a mistake coming here
Clare: no I'll try anything, I can't leave again
John: me and you can only tell everyone the new job story so many times before people start to question it
Clare: I can ask the doctor how to stop this addiction, give me one more chance please
John: Clare come on, this is serious
Clare: I know daddy
John: you have to promise me, you'll get better, I'll be there every step of the way but you have to do the hard yards
Clare: I can, I want this to work this time
John: does anyone know?

Clare has a flashback
Josh stops her outside the school
Josh: I know you stole the money
Clare: you don't know anything
Josh: well then I'll tell my brother what I don't know
Clare: wait, you can't
Josh: why'd you steal it?
Clare: you have to promise not to tell anyone
Josh: I can't make that promise
Clare: please otherwise I can't tell you
Josh: no you have to tell me now
Maddy interrupts them
Maddy: whats going on?
Clare: nothing
Clare bails
Flashback ended

Clare: no, I didn't tell anyone
John: good, that'll make things easier