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Chapter 15

Clare's House

John: you ready to be back at school?
Clare: yeah of course
John: just be careful
Clare: I will be fine
John: I'm still worried about the temptation there
Clare: dad its ok, I promise
John: fine you can go, I'll pick you up after?
Clare: do you have too, I want to hang out with my friends
John: fine but home by 5 o'clock
Clare: yes, thankyou

The School

Clare appraches Spencer, Maddy, Josh, Evelyn, Oscar and Matt

Clare: hey guys
Spencer: hi how are you?
Clare: better
Maddy: thats good
Evelyn: we were worried
Josh: even though I saw you a couple of days ago
Oscar: hows the time off school been?
Clare: it sucked, I missed you guys
Matt: we missed you too
The bells rings
Clare: we should get to class
They all head off to class

The Summer Bay House

Maddy, Josh and Clare are hanging out

Maddy: how long can you stay for?
Clare: till five
Josh: we should play a game
Maddy: lets play uno
Clare: cool sounds good
Maddy goes to get the uno cards leaving Clare and Josh alone
Josh: so you going to tell me the rest of your story?
Clare: I can't
Josh: why not?
Clare: I promised my dad I wouldn't say and you know enough
Josh: not everything
Clare: we compimised, deal with it
Josh: maybe I don't want to be left in the drak
Clare: I don't owe you my life story
Josh: I thought it was only a 2 year story
Clare: it is but I'm not saying anything more

Maddy arrives back in the room
Maddy: eveything ok?
Clare: yes
Josh: its fine
Maddy: ok cool, who wants to deal the cards?
Clare: I will

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Chapter 16

The Farm House

Hannah: have you talked to josh since...
Andy: no
Hannah: why not?
Andy; he betrayed me
Hannah: hes your brother, you love him, he needs your support
Andy: your right, I should talk to him
Hannah: repeat that please
Andy: what? your right
Hannah: yeah that
Andy and Hannah kiss
Hannah's phone rings and she takes the cal, a few minutes later she hangs up
Hannah: that was Kat, she's invited us for dinner with her and Nate in an hour at Angelo's
Andy: sounds good
Hannah: maybe we should invite Zac and Leah too, they derseve a night out aswell
Andy: yeah ok whatever you want, I'm going to to go have a shower
Hannah: ok I'll call them

Leah's House

VJ and Jett are playing video games on the couch when Matt and a girl enters
Matt: hey guys, this is Arlene and we will be in my room
they go into Matt's room
VJ: we should invite girls over, Leah and Zac are out, Matt's occupied and who knows when Evelyn and Oscar will be back
Jett: great idea
VJ: so you like Clare right?
Jett: yeah shes cool and your into Becky, right?
VJ: you have their numbers?
Jett: yeah I do
VJ: well call them

The Farm House

Evelyn and Oscar arrive just as Andy and Hannah are leaving
Evelyn: where you going?
Hannah: Angelo's
Oscar: can we hang out here
Andy: sure
Hannahh: bye guys
Evelyn and Oscar: bye
Evelyn and Oscar go into the house
Evelyn: we have the house to ourselves
Oscar: yeah what should we do?
Evelyn: invite all our friends over
Oscar: good idea, so Spencer/Maddy/Josh/Matt/Clare than
Evelyn: yep I'll call them
Oscar: no I can
Evelyn: ok you call Clare and Josh
Oscar: and you call Maddy, Spencer and Matt
Evelyn: do we have party food?
Oscar: I'll check the cupboards
Evelyn: ok and be quick about it

The Summer Bay House

Spencer gets a call from Evelyn about the party and goes to tell Maddy
Spencer: hey what you doing tonight?
Maddy: not much, why?
Spencer: party at Evelyn and Oscar's
Maddy: ok who else is going?
Spencer: Josh, Matt and Clare
Maddy: I'm in
Spencer: its at the farm house, not Leah's
Maddy: yeah ok
Spencer: what do we tell Roo and Alf?
Maddy: that were hanging out with friends
Spencer: yeah well its true
Maddy: not complety
Spencer: yeah but its true enough besides a half lie is better than a full one
Maddy: yeah your right about that

The Farm House

Maddy and Spencer arrive

Evelyn: hey guys
Oscar: hey
Spencer: where's everyone else?
Oscar: not here yet
Evelyn: we called them and they are still on there way
Maddy: got any snacks?
Oscar: theres chips, chocolate and lollies
Spencer: wow you went all out
Oscar: just lucky we already had some here
Evelyn: yep

Matt arrives

Matt: hey when the party start?
Evelyn: where still waiting on Josh and Clare
Matt: oh ok
Oscar: we got heaps of snacks
Matt: thats awesome
Spencer: they taste pretty good too
Maddy: I love the chips
Matt: chocolates better
Oscar: no lollies are
Evelyn: everything is good guys
Matt; yeah well its all junk food

Josh arrives

Josh: who said something about junk food?
Matt: me, we got chips, chocolate and lollies
Josh: thats great
Matt: I know right

Josh and Matt head to the kitchen to eat more food

Spencer: now we're just waiting on Clare
Maddy: what games you got planned?
Oscar: not sure
Evelyn: still thinking
Maddy: ok
Spencer: we should play murder
Maddy: OMG yes, thats so much fun
Evelyn: how'd you play it?
Maddy: its kind of like hide and go seek or murder in the dark but if the person who is the murder finds you, you die and lose the game
Oscar: sounds intersting
Maddy: so you write murderder on a piece of paper and all the rest are blank, you mix them up in a bowl and hand them out, eeryone goes and hides and whoever the murderder is has to go around and find someone and the first person who they find loses the game
Evelyn: sounds cool
Maddy: where do you guys keep spare paper?
Oscar: the computer room, I'll show you

they leave to do that

Matt and Josh return
Matt: what we miss?
Evelyn: were going to play a game called murder
Josh: oh cool, I like that game
Matt: how do you play?
Spencer tells Matt the rules
Matt: cool
Spencer: it is

Clare arrives

Spencer: hey
Clare: hi, sorry I'm late
Matt: no wories, they are setting up to play a game called murder
Clare: oh how'd you play that?
Matt explains it
Clare: sounds cool
Matt: yeah it should be

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Great chapter

interesting that  Oscar and Evie have a party at the farm house.

I look forward to more

update again soon :) 

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Chapter 16

The Farm House

Everyone has got a piece of paper and they all look at it before throwing it in the bin, they all go to find a place to hide and the lights are turned out and they start the game.

The murder is walking along the corridor and decides to check in the computer lab.

We see someone hiding in the closet and is watching the murder entering the room, te murder checks under the desk but finds no-one and just as they are about to check the closet there is a noise, the murder turns around and heads back out the door, the other person sighs happy not to be found.

the murder is racing towards the kitchen but can't spot anyone but the fidge is open, revealing someone's been in the kitchen, the murder starts to look under the kitchen table, and behind the lounge chairs but finds no-one, they start heading towards where the blinds ae and they open them up and find Spencer behind them.

Clare reaveals to Spencer she is the murder and he has lost the game. Clare and Spencer go to each room and turn the lights back on to reveal to everyone else the game has finished, everyone meets them back in the kitchen a few minutes later.

Josh: that was fun
Evelyn: I'm so lucky you didn't catch me
Clare: oh you were in the closet?
Evelyn: yeah and you heard a noise and left
Maddy: yeah that was good fun
Oscar: lets play again
Matt: yes great idea
Spencer: lucky we have more paper to cut up then

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Great chapter

glad the game went well.

I look forward to more

Update again soon :)

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