pollymoon Posted October 24, 2011 Report Posted October 24, 2011 Brilliant Tele, hope roman can continue to help Ella, great to see them get closer again xxxxxx Quote
Zetti Posted October 25, 2011 Report Posted October 25, 2011 Had she really been so sad for so long? Oh wow. That was a good line, hit home for me but I liked the line, it summed up her feelings really well for me. I love how Roman is helping her. Looking forward to more Tele x Quote
pollymoon Posted November 10, 2011 Report Posted November 10, 2011 another great part tele, hard to see them struggling, kids are so cute, brilliant as always xx Quote
Zetti Posted November 10, 2011 Report Posted November 10, 2011 Aww I hate seeing sad Rola & looking forward to reading more. Nicely done. Xx Quote
ldscott Posted November 21, 2011 Report Posted November 21, 2011 Love this fic! Poor Ella, hope she can start to overcome her fears soon. Lisa x Quote
pollymoon Posted January 23, 2012 Report Posted January 23, 2012 Another great part tele, love that she is going to allow him in a little, poor Ella really did suffer, love all your rola stories. xxx Quote
Zetti Posted January 23, 2012 Report Posted January 23, 2012 Ah she is making strides towards Roman helping her, I love them two together but no divorce Tele! I will not be impressed!!! Loving the update and looking forward to more xx Quote
Laura158 Posted January 24, 2012 Report Posted January 24, 2012 I have found this story and am absolutely fasinated by the strong storyline and am itching to find out how it continues. As I went through each chapter I took note of what comments I would have said after each one, which makes this a very long comment. Sorry. (I'm not expecting you to read it all..) Prologue: Wow! Great start, but I am already a bit concerned for Ella's mental health state. Chapter 1: I have a lot to say about this chapter. First of all at the begining Ella seems really tense and uptight and is being a bit tough on Roman. I feel sorry for him. Then the bit with Ella in the shower is so truely sad. I can't believe that Ella is in such a bad frame of mind to want to hurt herself again.I'm so glad Roman has realised how badly depressed Ella is and is getting Rachel to help. Chapter 2: It is so sad to see Ella stuggling so badly, I really hope she takes the advice and help from Rachel. Roman is sorting everything out as usual - hopefully it works this time. Chapter 3: My favourite part was the bit where Sophie was talking to Sammy during the night. It was so sweet Chapter 4: I'm glad that Roman and Ella are slowly progressing towards a stage where they can communicate more easily. I love reading the parts with the children they really are adorable Chapter 5: Roman seems to be stuggling with the situation a little. I just hope things get better for them both. Chapter 6: Awww that was an amazing chapter. It was nice to see Ella making progress and for both her and Roman to come to terms with some of the triggers of her issues. You are an amazing writer and are able to express the emotions in each chapter so magnificantly that I become so involved and personally feel the pain and happiness of the characters. I'm looking forward to reading more and seeing how this story develops further. Quote
pembie Posted January 31, 2012 Report Posted January 31, 2012 I have been meaning to read this for ages. The story has a very gripping dark and strong storyline too it. Can't wait to see what happens next. I feel like I am falling in love with Ella even more in this story. Quote
TelephotoMarigold Posted January 31, 2012 Report Posted January 31, 2012 I have been meaning to read this for ages. The story has a very gripping dark and strong storyline too it. Can't wait to see what happens next. I feel like I am falling in love with Ella even more in this story. Glad you reading it... as for the falling in love bit.. well I think Roman may want to have a word with you... Quote
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