pollymoon Posted March 27, 2014 Report Posted March 27, 2014 A day out for Roman and Ella and despite a little set back it seems like she really is on the road to recovery, love this story Tele, more soon please xxxx Quote
Inactive User Posted April 20, 2014 Report Posted April 20, 2014 Great chapter Update soon please xx Quote
Zetti Posted April 20, 2014 Report Posted April 20, 2014 Wow Ella really is struggling, but I liked how she is actually talking to Roman about it. It would be worse if she didnt tell him. Looking forward to more.. Quote
pembie Posted April 21, 2014 Report Posted April 21, 2014 I knew Ella was depressed, but wow that chapter really brought it to the brink at how much she is struggling. Really dark toned chapter there, but at the same time really good. You have written Ella's depression and inner darkest worries, fears perfectly. Look forward to more. Quote
pollymoon Posted April 23, 2014 Report Posted April 23, 2014 Really love this story Tele, really hope that Ella gets better soon, love how you write the emotion between Roman and Ella, it is so powerful, you are such an amazing writer. More soon please xxxx Quote
Inactive User Posted May 24, 2014 Report Posted May 24, 2014 Great chapter Update soon please xx Quote
pembie Posted May 24, 2014 Report Posted May 24, 2014 I hope Ella has a good girly time with Rachel and co. I'm thinking that Ella will be very good at playing poker I would imagine that she would have a very good poker face, and it would be hard for the other players to tell if she was losing the game. I do hope that the depressed state that she is feeling starts to lift soon. Quote
Zetti Posted May 26, 2014 Report Posted May 26, 2014 It is great to see Ella spending time with Irene, Rachel and Leah. It must have been hard for Roman to have to ask them to be there but Ella seemed to have enjoyed it. Two great updates, hope to see more soon. Quote
pembie Posted May 27, 2014 Report Posted May 27, 2014 That chapter was quite amusing. It seemed to help Ella when she was talking about her mother, A weight lifted off her of sorts I think. The women pointing out Roman's faults was funny. Also Ella giving the three of them makeovers I liked Leah getting her purple streak in her hair awesome. And finally Nicole pushing Meggy out of the door when Roman went to pick the kids up It's great with such a serious plot that you still manage to sneak the hurmour in there. Quote
Inactive User Posted May 27, 2014 Report Posted May 27, 2014 (edited) Awesome chapter, Tele Loved Ella spending time with Irene and Rachel, Leah Amazing writing! Update soon please xx Edited May 28, 2014 by ~JarlieFanEver~ Quote
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