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Title Of Story: Home and Away: The Early Years Redux Book 1

Type of fic: Long Fic

BTTB Rating: T

Main Characters: Tom and Pippa Fletcher, Frank, Steven, Carly, Lynn, Sally, Alf, Donald Fisher, Floss and Neville, Ailsa, Bobby, and Lance, Martin, Roo , more characters will be added in later chapters of may appear in the next story

Genre: Drama, Family, Teen, 

Does It Contain Spoilers: Yes for those who hadn't seen the 1988 episodes there will be some differences 

Warnings:  Language, brief fighting , Intense Moments ,

Plot: A brand new retelling of Home and Away The Early Years from The Beginning   

Introduction: For this story I aim to retell the story from the earlier episodes my way and I'm also adding some new story elements as well new scenes and the stories from each episode will still be faithful. The stories still be set in the eighties and also there may be some changes . characters personalities will still be faithful . There will be some changes to some of plot lines it's like I'm doing a brand new adaptation just like Stephen King's The Shining for example when Stanley Kubrick made The Shining into a movie it was different from the book and it's still a good film even though that Stephen King hates Kubrick's Version and some people may be critical of Kubrick's version Stephen King later in the early nineties did mini series of The Shining which is more faithful to the book  . my Home and Away story is going to have a Twin Peaks like story pace and it will still have its charm from the earlier Episodes. Hope you guys enjoy my version of one of the very first Episodes

 

Librarian Edit:  Added Prologue Part 1 into first post.

 

Prologue Part 1

 

1978

 

in the alleyways rain was pouring everywhere a young boy starts running like someone is after him 

 

Police Officer

FRANKIE 

 

Frank continues running away from the police officer then the police officer hides waiting to grab him then Frank comes out of hiding out of nowhere the police officer grabs Frank by the hand

 

Police Officer

Frankie your in big trouble your mum is not going to be happy for smashing car windows 

 

 

Part 2 gets written tomorrow stay tuned

Edited by Jackpittorino
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9 hours ago, ~JarlieFanEver~ said:

Ohhh sounds really good to read. Can't wait for you to post the next chapter! :) 

Loved it.

Update soon :)

 

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Prologue Part 2

 

Later at the department of child services

 

Mr. Jarvis was sitting at his desk putting files order then the telephone rang then picks up the phone

 

Mr. Jarvis

Hello Gordan Jarvis ceo of child services speaking . Yes send them in 

 

Mr. Jarvis walks to the door then opens the door and greets Tom and Pippa Fletcher 

 

Mr. Jarvis

Hello Mr. and Mrs. Fletcher come on in and have a seat make yourselves comfortable 

 

Mr. Jarvis puts his classes on and then opens filling cabinet then looks through the f section then picks up a file that says Frank Morgan. Mr. Jarvis starts reading Frank's file then hands it to Tom and Pippa 

 

Mr. Jarvis

Have a look at that. Frank is a very difficult child

 

Tom

How difficult 

 

Mr. Jarvis

three arrest by the time your eight is not a bad go. remind you of his background I'm not surprised his father in and out jail and mother an alcoholic. I hope you know what your taking on

 

Pippa

We never thought it would be easy

 

Mr. Jarvis

Look fostering this sort of child

(Tom then interrupts before Mr. Jarvis could finished his sentence) 

Tom

Yes we do know Mr. Jarvis that's why we're here. Any more you got like him here 

 

Pippa

We'il just be as happy to take them

 

Mr. Jarvis

I'll think you'il find as one sufficient 

 

Tom

We'll find your wrong  

 

 

 

 

End of prologue part 2

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